10-15 Bars
First to 5
No d/r, no hating, no crew voting, no complaining, no feeding
Explained voting only
Have your verse up by 8 pm

Ill have my verseup in a minute.

OK Lemmie jump right in by saying you a fucking queer
Then attach naked wemon to my verse maken this ya worst nightmere/
Im right here, an got you so scared you growin white hair
Bitch is acttin dyke, your right we gun fight, if you stop pullin hair/
Dont you love it how i proceed to contradic myself,
Wait i just said dick... Some one help this bitch contain himself/
Now just go on whine about how i keep on bitin you
Alls you godda do is ask george formen if mike tyson knew/
Got the answer? prolly not, an tryin to claim the voice of the streets
You cant, handle your truth, copying nicholson attempin to act sweet/
So lyric, loven my rhymes yet? just wait this aint as good as it gets
If that crew lets you in its proubley because there casting rejects/
Lyrical Sniper..when did uncle sam start recruiting dictionaries
Guess were in the army now, but your shits a disgrace to the military/
Ill discharge you, as for ops youll get pop like infected capularie
Another casullty, watch me drop this sniper off at his local cemitary/
Damn i didnt know my lyrics would come off soundin so def
I guess you askin when ima make a jam, when a clues somthin you catch/
Your new to RB, but your profile sez youve been here a year
HMMMMM, i guess your just a lair, now that thats plain an clear/
Ill recyle a quick line or two and have you lookin confused an dazed
Reusen a sexuality line, reminded you it was just a phase/

Str8 clownin, how this insignificant fuck gon test me?
Beating me? You got better luck getting drunk off pepsi
Don’t come out, child, its dark, whoops, he out, now the cryins about to start
Do you like the “wizard of oz“ leave you “lyin’ (lion) without a heart”
To battle me, skill is one of the stipulations, g
Bone chips and abrasions be what you receive, now you equipped with frustration, see
Tonguing my chest down, just to say you “MAN-NIPPLE-ATED” (manipulated) me
Grip you and grab you got you in a punishing death grips, just like crabs do
Slit you and stab you, come back and rip off the scabs on you
Dibble and dabble, you wouldn’t have tight “word play” if you was the champion at “scrabble”
The cards stacked up against you, the ace is dealed
Debate and squeal, how I chase and kill clowns is straight unreal
Im sorry dog, I hate to reveal-even if you was an artist, you still wouldn’t have a “trace of skill”
Like a tribe called quest, you better “check ya rhyming”
My rhymes is disrespecting and grimy “Did he just say that?” stop the tape deck, rewind it
Its your neck im grinding, cuz you was in violation for “wreckless rhyming"
I must got foul breath, cuz all you hear is sickness when I spit
Give a lynchin to ya click got the chainsaw to your dome, now you flinchin really quick
Seeing me coming is like niggas smuggling crack in they asses, you a “synch to shit a brick”
Oh, and let me mention to this trick (clownin) the only “nine” you holdin is the inches of my
dick

dont vote unless you understand the wordplay!!!

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Upping this for some votes

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uppin for some votes .............................

Nice battle from both but I would have to go with Outcome on this one...reason his he had the better punches and better originality in this

Upping for votes.

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Damn sleepers... COME ON RB, LETS SEE SOME VOTING

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out come took dis straight up.both good but outcome a lot stronger:
Voteutcome
return da fava:http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...450#post1146450

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dude upping for votes... could a mod peep this...

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sniper took this....

he had nice ass wordplay..altho his flow was kinda fucked up cuz of the stretched bars....I like the "manipulated" line...the wizard of oz line was pretty fuckin dope too...

outcome started good with rhymes..but his punches weren't really there...altho he had a few decent disses....but some of his lines were just blah....the opener was the best part of the verse, the rest went downhill...

both of u can elevate, Sniper, work on ya flow....and Outcome, work on punchlines...

vote-Sniper

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...442#post1148442

^ needs votes, would be appreciated

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<center> I.J.L</center>

upping this ish

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