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01-16-04, 08:21 PM | #1 | |||
Fern Gully
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My Blue Balls
IP: 91C2 8530
This Goes Out To The Girl Who Left Me In My Room Naked And Unfullfilled!!!
..Took the ball and dropped it - lost one for the team Had a chance and lost it - now your only in my dreams ..Im the loser supreme - at the table - chillin broke Threw it all up - like bullimics - now my sex lifes a joke ...So i vent at bars - sad stories with an old man About last nights encounter with my very lonely hand ...Aww Man! Sexual frustration mountin higher Till it bursts in wet dreams - so these sheets go to the dryer [REWIND]Last Saturday Night[/REWIND] ..Saturday Night Live Chillin For Real Feelin Drunk And All These Bitches Lookin For A Dick Killin What ..My Man Points To The Right - This Girl Got Me In Her Sight So I Take Another Shot - Roll Up - And Was Like ..."Yo Girl How You Doin" - She Was Like - "I'm Doin Fine Theres a Party 'Round The Block - Yo You Wanna Unwind?" ...My Dick Was Like "Yeh" - But My Head Was Like "Wait" "Funnel One More Beer And Then We'll Be On Our Way" ...Yo, One Turned To Four - And - "No" Turned Into "Sure" Next Thing I Know I'm Acting The Fool Up On The Dance Floor ...That's The Least Of My Problems - Cuz I Sorta Gotta Vomit But This Bitch Is Still Feelin Me, So I Gotta Act Up On It ...One Thing Led To Another We End Up Under The Covers ..i take her shirt off - she lifts her skirt - shows me the prize i can tell she wants the dick by the look in her eyes ..take my pants off - shirt off - bout to score meanin im winnin close my eyes - start kissin - till my head starts spinnin! ...dinners creepin up slowly and this bitch dont even know me but i run out the dorm butt naked tossin and stumbling slowly ..The Trojan Wrapper Stayed Wrapped - And I Got No Ass Fuck Whiskey Dick - This Is Why You Cant Fuck When Your Trashed ..And I'm Pretty Pissed - Cuz When I Came Back - I Didn't Cum The Bitch Left - The Only Action I Got Was From My Rum Thanks Alot Rum
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01-16-04, 09:37 PM | #2 | |||
Old School Sexy...
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IP: CB28 E7E2
ummm.. this was funny.. but one of the worst pieces i ever read..
..."Yo Girl How You Doin" - She Was Like - "I'm Doin Fine Theres a Party 'Round The Block - Yo You Wanna Unwind?" ...My Dick Was Like "Yeh" - But My Head Was Like "Wait" dont talk during a piece.. =\ hah but ya.. *speechless* well your structure was good, your wording and flow was good.. your just concept was bad.. i dont want to hear about u running through campus naked with a condom on throwing up then beating it
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01-17-04, 12:30 PM | #3 | |||||||
Flyweight
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IP: 3940 2ECC
yo, i dont'know what anyone says, this was a nice drop and the way you put it, its like a unique sense of humor. i like this drop
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01-17-04, 12:42 PM | #4 | ||||
Banned: Spamming
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IP: C1DA C961
..nice drop..very humorous..whole thing flowed very well..haven't read many from you..but..I'll be on the lookout..peace..
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02-06-04, 12:29 AM | #6 | |||||||
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IP: B3D3 DDCD
that shit was hard.............................................. .propz..............................
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02-06-04, 02:05 AM | #7 | |||||
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IP: ED3C 7BC1
wow blue balls.
a very ineteresting topic. and u seemed to fit it well with a pretty humours verse but as speek said.....up the quality :P
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