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02-11-04, 06:30 PM | #1 |
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TOPICAL: Junio Sixnine vs. Split
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Half an hour at most. Topic: Getting rejected by someone you love. ...Good luck...
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02-11-04, 06:34 PM | #2 | |
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lol not fair, i never been in love, but oh well, im on it, checkin in
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02-11-04, 06:49 PM | #3 |
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They lost control of me from above, and let me loose inside emotion...
Poison of lost love, sink in my heart. A negative promotion. I saw her, imagined that I held her from the start, The waves of pain pulled me back as we sailed apart... I was made to love her, I have searched for her since birth Shes all that matters to me, rejection shows my heart has no worth She took my heart and forgot, or she forgot my heart was took... Noone will ever waste a drop of ink about me in the history books... I hide emotion for moments, the effects leak out in my dreams... If only she could see my tears...but my tears are unseen
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02-11-04, 07:10 PM | #4 | |
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IP: EC0B 84C7
trapped desires, which obviously were never meant to be fulfilled
love expires, but still my feelings forever remain for her still I will myself to let go, just a thought that I could ease how I suffer but I remain ill, despite attempts to adjust and grow tougher and it's getting rougher, her image seems to be imbedded in my mind but I was just the sucker, who was confined in her and blind to signs and now I find myself with only the wonderful and refined memories trying to remind myself of all the gave me, and all the men she pleased she was just a disease that constantly brought to me uncurable pain she had my soul appeased and then she left my left my heart slain never had my heart broken, so kind of a hard topic for me |
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02-11-04, 07:30 PM | #5 |
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IP: 7CDC FC5B
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02-11-04, 07:42 PM | #6 | |
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whoa lol, just read my shit, got alot of typo's lol, oh well, guess it gets the point across still, up #2
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02-11-04, 08:59 PM | #7 | |
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upp 3.............................................
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02-11-04, 09:23 PM | #8 | |
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IP: 7CDC FC5B
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getting impatient...
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02-11-04, 11:21 PM | #9 | |
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I think Split took this one. you both got the topic across nicely but Split had better flow and worldplay over all and it was alot deeper. made me think thats what people porbably are goin throigh when they get rejected by someone they love. When Junio just kinda explained withought much feeling into it.
vote - Split return the favour,take a look. Chugs4Life ~vs~ Lust
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02-12-04, 12:24 AM | #10 | |
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uppin this........................................
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02-12-04, 02:22 PM | #11 | |
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02-12-04, 04:46 PM | #12 | |
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up up and away!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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02-13-04, 05:28 PM | #13 | |
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upp, don't know what number, but its not my fifth
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02-14-04, 03:47 PM | #14 | |
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