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$$UPREME | 0 | 0% | |
d.j em sce | 5 | 100.00% | |
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03-09-04, 05:31 PM | #1 | |
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$$urpreme verse d.j em sce
IP: E3CA 7CA2
wat the hell is you doin tryn to battle me but we bout to spit at the same time so we are going to drop at the same time so when your done with yours than i;ll be done wit mines...
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03-09-04, 05:32 PM | #2 | |
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
aight here we go
may the best man win |
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03-11-04, 11:41 AM | #3 | |
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this is not even a battle cut this delete it he aint tryn to battle now
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03-11-04, 03:13 PM | #4 | |
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nevermind were gonna battle
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03-11-04, 04:26 PM | #5 | |
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
R U A DJ OR AN MC IM CONFUSED//
YOUR LOST LIKE THE KIDS IN NEVERLAND GETTING ABUSED// IM A LYRICAL SOLDIER CAUSE I SPEAK THE TRUTH// U WOULD THINK I HAD A PORN STAR THE WAY I GO HARD IN THE BOOTH// YOUR INDENIAL THINKING YOUR BETTER THEN ME// MY LYRICS ARE SHARP THEY'LL CUT UR NUTS OFF LIKE U GOT A VASECTOMY// I’LL LEAVE YOU WITH MORE BLOOD THEN UMBILICAL CORDS// YOU WILL NEVER SEE 5 MICS AT THE SOURCE// MY PUNCHLINES WILL HAVE YOU SEENING STARS// YOU DON’T KNOW WHAT PAIN IS YOUR ONLY SCAR//IS A STRETCH MARK |
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03-11-04, 04:50 PM | #6 | |
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
Look imma dj cuz I be scratchin up your gimmick//
But im also lyrically inclined my style you try mimic// look your frosted like a flake but you will neva b great like that tiger named tony// i'll have you fellin the blues cuz your rhyming style is bent like crafts macaroni// see im a hands on type of nigga who get mo phisical then sex positions// in this rap game all you be is a blemish in this lyrical exhibition// you cant see me like midgets shoppin at big and tall, see im a lite weight but still on the balance beam is the only time I take a fall// like m.c hammer you no you cant touch dude cuz my rhyme book will crush you// im on top I can see your community from a birds eye view// see my rhymes cumn smoother than when you beat yo meat wit lotion// I got this notion that im a lyrical magician who will get you wishin for my ill rhymin potion// may the best man win
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03-12-04, 12:45 PM | #7 | |
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upppiiinnn thios bitch this battle rite here i s a given
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03-12-04, 12:53 PM | #8 | |
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
We Need Votes
U Know Who 2 Pick Read This Guys Lines Their Korny |
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03-16-04, 12:13 PM | #9 | |
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uppiinn this bitch we need some votes....may the best man win
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03-16-04, 08:20 PM | #10 | ||
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man emcee took this shit nice punches and flows
cant say much about supreme vote on this battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116501
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03-17-04, 11:12 AM | #11 | |
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
that's why your vote aint even gonna count
you need to read the instructions how to vote |
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03-18-04, 02:21 PM | #12 | |
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
uuupppiiinnn this bitch........i no its a weak battle but c'mon
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03-18-04, 02:30 PM | #13 | |
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Check d.j em sce's Lines
see im a hands on type of nigga who get mo phisical then sex positions// in this rap game all you be is a blemish in this lyrical exhibition// you cant see me like midgets shoppin at big and tall, see im a lite weight but still on the balance beam is the only time I take a fall// There u got word play and a strong punchline better then any of $$UPREME's. THis line below a good punch line. like m.c hammer you no you cant touch dude cuz my rhyme book will crush you// im on top I can see your community from a birds eye view// And a strong final verse to finish it all of. see my rhymes cumn smoother than when you beat yo meat wit lotion// I got this notion that im a lyrical magician who will get you wishin for my ill rhymin potion// See thast a proper verse, droping decent bars Votes (should be) Conducted on: personals: d.j em sce punches: $$UPREME Flow: d.j em sce Multis: NEITHER!!! Wordplay: d.j em sce Lyrical Content: d.j em sce Structure: d.j em sce Content: d.j em sce Its easy to say Over all ..... "D.j em sce" (this is a well explained vote)
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03-18-04, 09:48 PM | #14 | |
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Yo d.j em sce, Good Punches, consistant flow, Great structure, easy to read. also enjoyable to read "look your frosted like a flake but you will neva b great like that tiger named tony" Funny as fuck lol. 8/10
$$UPREME, nice flow, Lil weaker on the punches, Structure was a little off, but easy to read, great opener, lil short though. If ya kept the flow goin a bit longer and had a couple more hard hittin punches it'd be in the bag.overall 6/10 v/ d.j em sce
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03-19-04, 02:06 PM | #15 | |
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ya supreme your verse seemed cut short, decent punches but aint good enough compared to what d.j. dropped wit that tony the tiger line and big and tall thangs, he had more thought put into his punches. yours was more straight foward. another line like "IM A LYRICAL SOLDIER CAUSE I SPEAK THE TRUTH//
U WOULD THINK I HAD A PORN STAR THE WAY I GO HARD IN THE BOOTH//" i woulda gave it to ya, but ya both of you need to get more multies. and put more time and less stretched linse wit the multies. vote-dj this shits an honest vote, no hate get some real votes on me and ricanelly's battle http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=116470
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