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Old 02-07-04, 07:56 PM   #1
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My journey (1st written)

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Straight outta Thailand, the reiligous sanctum for hoes/
ordering the noodles, exploiting society is how far it goes/
me be makin my journey for 13 hours strong, cant sleep, cant shit seems to go on/
Watching her do the walk, eventually i hear her singing the same old song/
'check your safety belt and tray table securely tightened,' check check all remains strong/
Im like king-kong, im high above the world, scoping the horizon/
the menu's frequently changing, to suite all tastes but always surprisen/
I become subcided, surrounded by all Funky odours/
Drift into space and fall to a state of composure...
as i fall my comfort shook, to the left i look, nomore waiting/
a feeling of relief, complete, alive i was, after the anticipating/
stating emotions that are runnin through my mind after shock/
pollution hits like a chilli when u get to Bangkok

(i can deal wit critics and disses but ill be bk...)
p.s if ur on a positive note than... my condolences
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Old 02-07-04, 07:58 PM   #2
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Nice stuff man...............check out joinin Superior Rebels. Im reppin Azn Pride too. Was it my collab that brought you to this site?
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Old 02-07-04, 07:59 PM   #3
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Yea Nice Spit For A Newbie, Keep It Up. Ya Had Flow, Vocab And Topic All Down Nice.
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Old 02-07-04, 08:03 PM   #4
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Yo azn

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Nice stuff man...............check out joinin Superior Rebels. Im reppin Azn Pride too. Was it my collab that brought you to this site?


Got inspired by ur lyrics, nice collabo and lines were hot
but keep it coming man
holla bk
p.s how do i join?
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Old 02-07-04, 08:09 PM   #5
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p.s how do i join?[/QUOTE]




If you wanna join hit up this link
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=112169
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Old 02-07-04, 10:56 PM   #6
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