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Tha Phoenix 1 50.00%
Jay-Z 1 50.00%
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Old 09-14-04, 12:10 PM   #1
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Jay-Z vs Tha Phoenix

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Check in by: 09-14-04 at 12:40 PM

Must drop verse in 180 minutes after check in.
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Old 09-14-04, 12:17 PM   #2
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Check in ya prewritign bitch...............
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Old 09-14-04, 12:18 PM   #3
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Jay-Z has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 12:18 PM.
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Old 09-14-04, 12:28 PM   #4
creative
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TP..

Tha Phoneix..

Ayo The Pussy.. You know i've killed ALL the lot..
Fuck this cats VERSE... cos HE's still waiting for his BALLS to DROP ... (dropping verse)
And this NIGGA is UGLY as fuck.. and you know i'll SLAUGTER u son..
His Mirror NEVER Broke.. it just ran to the SHOP that he brought it from
I taught it son..! I'm defined illness... by vocab & flow..
& just cuz ya "santa CLAWS" dont mean you get "ho ho ho's"


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& dont change ya sig or u can be banned for cheating
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Old 09-14-04, 12:38 PM   #5
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Tha Phoenix has ACCEPTED this battle on 09-14-04 12:38 PM.
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Old 09-14-04, 12:41 PM   #6
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Nice check in @ 12:38.. U PREWRITING BITCH.. nobody should vote for yo laim cheating ass..
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Old 09-14-04, 12:56 PM   #7
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This nigga ain’t Shawn Carter, I’m destroying his check
You a pussy, yet you still can’t come close to a vet
Shottaboy, this kid has lost, rules he abused it
Cause that line in his verse, MTV used it!
Damn nigga, you just stole a line, I bet I’ll watch this fake edit
Cause like visa-theft, some muthafuckers always trys to take credit
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Old 09-14-04, 12:57 PM   #8
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Oh yeah, fuckin recycling bastard, check out his battle against Shottaboy if you don't believe me.
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Old 09-14-04, 12:57 PM   #9
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shut the fuck up i dint steal NO LINE.. maybe simliar concepts but no lines.. U SHUD be banned for FAKE personals... bitch VOTES...
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Old 09-14-04, 12:58 PM   #10
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u idiot.. I USED BALLS IN two LINES BUT THEY WERE REWORDED stop bitchign becos u lost...........
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Old 09-14-04, 01:00 PM   #11
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Quote:
Originally Posted by Jay-Z
u idiot.. I USED BALLS IN two LINES BUT THEY WERE REWORDED stop bitchign becos u lost...........

Its called recyling muthafucker. And u stole rhymes from MTV battles.
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Old 09-14-04, 07:39 PM   #12
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omg i cant belive these bitches took jay-z to class-sic then me and this bitch sucks jay-z im not voting worth shit and both you suck
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Old 09-16-04, 08:29 AM   #13
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^ BANNED:CHEATING

enuff said.
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Old 09-18-04, 10:14 PM   #14
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Voted For: Tha Phoenix

close battle

punches- tie
personals- phoenix
multis- neither
metas- neither
word play- create
flow- phoenix

now before anythin happens create this isnt a hate vote. judgin by the thing bout changin the sig i just thought i should start out sayin this.

Phoenix ok drop for 6 lines. u r definately better at long verses. flow wuz aight, personals good, punches aight.

Create your punches were kinda weak but u did word play better which is y the punches r tied. u were doin good till your closer. make it good start to finish.

Phoenix:
"Shottaboy, this kid has lost, rules he abused it
Cause that line in his verse, MTV used it!" nice personal

create:
"And this NIGGA is UGLY as fuck.. and you know i'll SLAUGTER u son..
His Mirror NEVER Broke.. it just ran to the SHOP that he brought it from" not a good punch, funny though.

v/phoenix
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Old 09-19-04, 01:14 PM   #15
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Voted For: Jay-Z

flow-pheonix, was easier to read and wasnt stretched

punches/personals-creative, the punches were just bettere in my opinion and more creative (hense his name),phoenix still had good ones but my opinion creatives came harder

creativity and vocab-creative,punches were more creative as said before and vocab was at a higher level then phoenix's,his was good, but not good enough for creaives verse

no hate good battle, it was pretty close but in the end i picked creative
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