the orignal song is called about that time now but i don't feal like puttin the hook or the other verses in just yet
this is a moderate paced flow it's better heard than read cause of that just peep

2 desert eagles, 2 glock 9's, 2 hollowed up tech 9's... a doubled barrel shoty and 2 ak's//
a military type style m16 all on burst and they're ready to play//
now how you gonna go and deal wit a cat...wit all that...in the back...of a trech coat//
highed off the best hydro and coke//
eggin to clap you up and smack you up or leave you senseless//
and steady blastin in all black like a matrix entrance//
you stupid niggas fuck wit me i'll go and bloodstain your crib//
it's like your life is on auction and my guns have won the bids//
and see it's scary to say...i likes to get carried away//
cause when i gets carried away...someones gettin carried//
so you better hear what i say...so you fuckin fairies don't play//
cause i play by emptyin all my clips in each and every way//
you see how i'm takin your spot now...don't go bringin your glocks out//
cause i'll knock you the fuck out...and have your ass ducked down//
you don't wanna see when i get mad cause that's the way i hulk out//
i'm tellin you right now...it's about that time now//

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun

Not one of the better pieces. I guess I'm just not feeling the "Gangsta' Gangst" vibe, at the moment. It was a pretty easy read, but it just didnt intrest me. I don't know. I've seen you come better than this. Anyway, do what you do.

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i'm fealin you on the whole gansta shit but when i put down the rest of this piecde you'll see where it was goin but good lookin on that
holla

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shut the fuck up

even if i stutter i'll still sh-sh-shit on you/ pun

dead in middle of little of little italy
little did we know that we riddle
some middle man who didn't do ditally/ pun