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LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1 | 0 | 0% | |
illtalic | 5 | 100.00% | |
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02-04-04, 04:23 PM | #1 |
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LyRiCaLLyInSaNe1 --vs-- illtalic
IP: C053 A12D
rules: 10-20 lines.. due 30 min afta check in.. no d/r.. hate.. feeding.. ETC.. blind spit drop at same time..
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02-04-04, 04:26 PM | #2 | |
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02-04-04, 04:41 PM | #3 | |
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IP: D5EA 4189
aight........
thinkin u tough but u jus a fuckin act get off here n go to broadway/ or u can try n fuck wit me but trust me ull go the hard way/ haha look at his quote...damn right that illness aint catchin cuz u aint that sick!/ all u do is go in battles n vote for the crappy person...its called suckin dick/ see 4 lines in this battle n i already got aggrivated assualt/ i'da kill this cat if i hadnt got caught/ tryin to fight?! let it go n go to heaven/ if not ill deal wit ya...wish u died in 9-11/ thinkin u fuckin great...bitch yo bloods still blue/ think im playin bitch i will fuck around n kill u/ i go all out to finish this cat off and make sure he dont live/ have a fuckin bomb and go up to him BOOM my life wus the price i had to give/ spit u on the ground ya brains on the pavement/ so watch wut u say next time u makin a statement |
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02-04-04, 04:49 PM | #4 |
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IP: C053 A12D
You hail from my girls mouth? Sorry mayn but that makes u my kids,
im exposin ur 'short comings' on the mic.. wiv lines to rip this flidd... im winnin.. i can bet the whole site.. wateva.. skys da limit, one punch is takin ya head off.. and ya chain fly wit it... dawg u got sorry punches.. and ya fuckin diss wreaks, fuck wit me, ill have u disfigured on wheels like chris reeves... the only way i see u winnin is.. if i jus got disqualified, last swing deckin you bitch, got ya aim singin a lullaby... u still couldnt paint a 'perfect picture' against the sites fool, strugglin against a herb makes u look like paraplegics in a swimmin pool...
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02-04-04, 04:53 PM | #5 |
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Hmm.. both had played lines(reeves,hard way)
Insane had a very simple verse and very elementry (9-11)....flow was off..too Itallic came aight though.. punches and personals were there(girls mouth,kid) wordplay was there...flow was aight too Umm..disqualified was weak thought but besides that v/ Itallic hit this up with an honest vote please....thanks http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=112004&page=1 |
02-04-04, 05:17 PM | #6 | |
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IP: D5EA 4189
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02-04-04, 05:38 PM | #7 | |
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lyricaly - ya verse was pretty basic..it was filled it played lines and none direct punches..ya flow was choppy and wasnt consistent...wordplay - none was there and metas - none again... personals - blah... and punches overall - nope...ya punches werent hard hitting...try to include those things that u didtn have into them
illtalic - ya verse wasnt bad...ya stayed smooth through ya whole verse wit ya flow..structure was right on target and was perfect...ya had some decent and good punches in there...varied through out....ya personals were decent and they did hit him, they werent bad....overall you had a decent verse V/ Ill...he came harder wit punches and personals and an overall harder hitting verse
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02-05-04, 06:08 AM | #8 |
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IP: B89A 3C2B
G'looks at the explanations..
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02-07-04, 10:35 AM | #9 |
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02-09-04, 10:43 AM | #10 |
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the other bitch is hopin this'll disappear..
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02-09-04, 11:22 AM | #11 | |
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yo this battle was played, they both have hardly any lines that aeren't played
But I fell a nice flow with illtalic and I thought Insane hadn't got sum gud rhymes Punches, they both had sum gud punches but illtalic was bettr cuz they just came harder and he also had more personals than Insane, both had a weak structure so they must work on this overall vote: illtalic
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02-10-04, 06:15 AM | #12 |
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02-10-04, 08:52 AM | #13 |
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thinkin u tough but u jus a fuckin act get off here n go to broadway/ or u can try n fuck wit me but trust me ull go the hard way/ not a good opener haha look at his quote...damn right that illness aint catchin cuz u aint that sick!/ all u do is go in battles n vote for the crappy person...its called suckin dick/ nice see 4 lines in this battle n i already got aggrivated assualt/ i'da kill this cat if i hadnt got caught/ blah tryin to fight?! let it go n go to heaven/ if not ill deal wit ya...wish u died in 9-11/ sorry but rubbish thinkin u fuckin great...bitch yo bloods still blue/ think im playin bitch i will fuck around n kill u/ r u serious i go all out to finish this cat off and make sure he dont live/ have a fuckin bomb and go up to him BOOM my life wus the price i had to give/ na. rubbish spit u on the ground ya brains on the pavement/ so watch wut u say next time u makin a statement shit finish illtalic = You hail from my girls mouth? Sorry mayn but that makes u my kids, im exposin ur 'short comings' on the mic.. wiv lines to rip this flidd... ok bar im winnin.. i can bet the whole site.. wateva.. skys da limit, one punch is takin ya head off.. and ya chain fly wit it... ummm ok dawg u got sorry punches.. and ya fuckin diss wreaks, fuck wit me, ill have u disfigured on wheels like chris reeves... ok i guess the only way i see u winnin is.. if i jus got disqualified, last swing deckin you bitch, got ya aim singin a lullaby... its ok punch u still couldnt paint a 'perfect picture' against the sites fool, strugglin against a herb makes u look like paraplegics in a swimmin pool... ok finish thjis is how it went, flow and structure go to ill and also dose punches. lyric ya came weak and ya need to elevate, ill your verse was ok but i've seen better from you aswell. Vote = illtalic |
02-10-04, 10:22 AM | #14 |
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I think i should be 4-0 up.. i seem to remember makin it 200+ posts to vote tho.. that'd explain it.
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02-10-04, 10:25 AM | #15 |
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sorry dogg i forgot to poll vote, i've done it now tho. pz sorry to freepost!!
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