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| Phenom | Kingz | Dabatos | TonySelf | Tha Q | Half Breed | Tito | 7th End | RV Radio  |
02-15-04, 08:42 AM
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How can it improve?
IP: 40D6 EBC3
This bitch is distorted.. You can tell you dont have a good poker face
Here your out of place... ... Rejected from the deck cuz ur the 5th ace Just quit already.. Your verse should be burnt.. You should pack it You can beat newbs but... ... When it comes to me you cant hack it Sending you packing.. Off to the woods with you.. Ace the little camper You got 13 wins cuz your from edit so all you... ... Do to your verse is tamper Making your avy a portrait of you.. Leaving you mentally broken My advice to you... ... Is go on get help from Token Its nice to see you admit.. Im happy that finally you followed suit Im the one who made your eyes roll... ... By making my writing minute Whats wrong with that? Wana elevate more... So... Im wondering whats wrong with that... This was against Straight Ace and he won 5-2... Thanks... Pz... |
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02-15-04, 02:14 PM
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Dope.
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IP: 24A3 0EF0
It was good i liked it accept this line.......................
You got 13 wins cuz your from edit so all you... ... Do to your verse is tamper Jus seemed like a filler to me............. Only an opinion like or dislike it...
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