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Old 02-02-04, 10:59 PM   #1
SMZ
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Second Round Rip

IP: C1DA C961

Now how can you be so quick to forget your past humiliation
Already killed your ass once - now you want total annihilation
SMZ doesn't play games so this should be your indication
That you’re playing with yourself - which is called masturbation.

Now some niggers might cut you but I practice evisceration
So you better duck your head unless you want a decapitation
You’re thinking’ you got a chance since my dad’s Caucasian
But you can’t battle with me - I’m my own sovereign nation.
And I got stockpiled WMD’s prepared for any situation
Words of Mass Destruction which cause complete obliteration
For letting’ you hear my lyrics I ought to sue for compensation
‘Cause you aren’t even worth my time or this profound dissertation.

But I might let you remain ‘cause rippin’ you is recreation
I can assault you lyrically and not face incarceration
‘Cause if I killed you literally then I’d meet court examination
Even though by all rights you deserve sheer eradication.

Good thing my mind functions as a consummate creation
Good thing my spit flies like celestial precipitation
Good thing my words resonate with masterful connotation
So I can keep Exodus 20:13 and allow your soul continuation.
But I’m tired of lecturing’ you so here’s my rhymes culmination
I’m finally telling you to shut up with this final rumination
‘Cause like wooly mammoths you can face extermination
So shut that hole in your face unless I’m nearing’ ejaculation
Never mind open your mouth - let me cure your starvation.

Looking for feedback.

Apologies, I read the one post per day notice after I already put this stuff up.

Last edited by SMZ : 02-02-04 at 11:07 PM.
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Old 02-12-04, 10:25 PM   #2
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Nice shit again man and i think you just posted this but it was good as hell i liked the last part maybe someday me and you could battle cuz that would be a challenge anyaway i like the last part especially this shit was hot good drop


Good thing my mind functions as a consummate creation
Good thing my spit flies like celestial precipitation
Good thing my words resonate with masterful connotation
So I can keep Exodus 20:13 and allow your soul continuation.
But I’m tired of lecturing’ you so here’s my rhymes culmination
I’m finally telling you to shut up with this final rumination
‘Cause like wooly mammoths you can face extermination
So shut that hole in your face unless I’m nearing’ ejaculation
Never mind open your mouth - let me cure your starvation.
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I smiled at the devil as his sweat pounded the ground and left burnt black marks on the path as he walked towards me with crimson-like skin and universal black horns and as he reached for my lifeless corpse a black-robed figure that was hard to discern whispered to me "Your days are numbered".
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Old 02-12-04, 10:31 PM   #3
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Nah - the First Round Rip, Second Round Rip and Personal Testaments were all posted about a week ago when I first joined. I had just written Personal Testament 3 but the others had been done previously. I'm not a battler - If I don't feel angry at the time it's hard for to rip into someone. So don't expect to see me battling anytime soon. But thnx for feedback.
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