Jus some stuff on my mind....

Prolific scriptures spoken perfectly timed in turn
as burns my midnight oil so doth the soul burn
born to engrave thoughts on hearts to teach universal lessons
so peasantry and king together tune in to the blessings
the depths of the soul delve deep within all of humankind
as mankind strives to understand the mysteries of time
true death only comes when we conciously close our minds
been said b4 true think we listened...open your eyes
look at the hate used by many as a shield to their kindness
often times people attempt to shield there true self with violence
I defend myself with words some complicated some symbolistic
I keep you at a distance by posing questions of your exsistence
reflections, diversions, making you think is it all just an act?
the poor,deprived,evils of the world do u or I really care about that?
do we create god as humans to satisfy our own needs?
or did God plant us all to grow and multiply like unique seeds
what do you believe in...do you even really know?
are you strong enough to defend what you claim to stand for?
why are you a good person lemme rephrase what makes you better?
we all start the same way so lets strive to grow as people together..
for the hate speech you type unknowingly freely through the net..
blindhate you know nothing of you spit stereotypes at best
the whole point is to find flaws its seriously a waste of my time
we support hate practices telling innocents to elevate thier rhyme
were really askin them to up the hate the vets show an example of this
they hate best have experience in life these people are dicks
we've created a world i choose not to partake but i'll stop by now and then
when i got hate to vent i'll hop on the board and key it up for the win...

i remember back in the day when you could post an open mic and actually get some feedback.......man those were the days

dont worry buddy...ill read right now...and edit with feedback...go peep my
open mic in retruen...called words need not be spoken...peace

u lie...

i doubt tihs was really on ur mind....
the beginning seemed like u were trying to hard
to use metas and vocab and shit...it seemed like
a bunch of nonsense to me...i dont really like reading
that type of shit....but...u mellowed out after that....
got a bit more realistic though not that much...
i didnt like the end however..the keying up shit...nah..
sorry butthats my opinion...reading crazy synogogical nonsense
bugs me...peace

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