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02-15-04, 06:37 PM | #1 | ||||
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untitled/unwritten.. lol
IP: C1DA C961
its untitled, unwritten.....in a time and age when most battles are bitten
when along some1 come wit the stregnth of tigers and heart of a kitten u ask were i was, i carried u on my bak, one one set of footprints building my rep from the bottom to the top ,no blueprints family buisness, thats the truth, take'm out the park like babe ruth better than these niggas, see me up on rap city in the booth gold plated teeth, see im that nigga that yall see straight on the tv bit this shit, its a freebie, but if yall make it big u gotta beat me the toughest niggas dont need no gang, no bloods no cripps bit kanye west.... mayonaisse colored benz i push Miracle Whips |
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02-15-04, 06:37 PM | #2 | ||||
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IP: C1DA C961
beautiful............ reply
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02-15-04, 06:42 PM | #3 | ||||||
Light Weight
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you can do better... we both know it...
try varying your structure and talkin about something instead of randomness... don't waste your talent on frontin either... it doesn't do anybody any good {Peace} |
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02-15-04, 06:43 PM | #4 | |||||||
Flyweight
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lol i like the title, but thats bout it
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02-16-04, 12:11 AM | #5 | ||||
Word.
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This was ok.....the structure in this was alright.....the piece could have been longer it just seemed so short lol.....flow in this was ok, it fell off at some points....vocab in this could be up'd though....but keep at it.
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02-16-04, 10:02 AM | #6 | ||||
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bump appreciate feedbak
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