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JONdough | 0 | 0% | |
.iLL. | 5 | 100.00% | |
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02-16-04, 01:32 AM | #1 | |
Flyweight
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.iLL. **vs** JONdough
IP: F978 8610
y0!
~ 10 lines ~ ~ Blind Spit ~ ~ No Biting, d/r, hate, etc ~ ..Drop 30 minutes after we both checkin.. This is my checkin.................HoLLa BaCk YouNgIn!!
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02-16-04, 01:40 AM | #2 |
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IP: 1D04 65C4
[QUOTE=.iLL.]y0!
~ 10 lines ~ ~ Blind Spit ~ ~ No Biting, d/r, hate, etc ~ ..Drop 30 minutes after we both checkin.. This is my checkin.................HoLLa BaCk YouNgIn!![/QU K dawg I'm checked in. so what we both drop in 30 or is somebody sposed to drop first |
02-16-04, 01:42 AM | #3 | |
Flyweight
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IP: F978 8610
...This battle was a joke from the ve-ry beginning//
...Only my second line and I'm al-ready winning// ...You messed wit the wrong guy, like dough im 'widespread'// ...Your shits fed, ya like a John Doe, only exist in peoples head// ...You aint got what it takes, in face you lack the requirements// ...Ya done son, time to 'checkin' to TD Waterhouse for retirement// ...Up to my seventh line, and this shits already over// ...I'm the cop so pull over, you gunna need more luck than a clover// ...JONdough, pretty creative, so you reppin a bakery?// ...Fake emcee, my rhymes the illest, As Seen On Tv// ^^ there's the quick 10 lines...spit homie, dont dodge this..
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02-16-04, 02:07 AM | #4 |
New to RB
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Ill....
IP: 1D04 65C4
I'm confused? I dont 'buy your cheap kiddy scripts'
bitch, the only place you ever made 'cents' was 'Nickle'odeon you're 'shootin blanks', Ill's style is what 'sterile dicks' spit in fallopians Got this 'hater grinnin', say "Jon could tickle odiums" when Im done, yer eyes pits and palms'll trickle sodium I 'reap' the benefits off 'stage' and stand with 'sickles on podiums' only times your rhymes are 'dope', are when you mix 'em with opium ILL you wanna battle??? then stick to yer Pok-e-mon's Or I'll be 'force'd' to move you, Im the lyrical O B Wun GOOD LUCK peace |
02-16-04, 02:12 AM | #5 |
Flyweight
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IP: B9CF C1DC
ill wins cuz jon doghs words are to big i dont know what they mean
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02-16-04, 02:17 AM | #6 | |
Flyweight
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IP: F978 8610
mak, explain ur votes man...damn..read the fucking RB rules, it helps
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well anyways.. RB's better. |
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02-16-04, 02:19 AM | #7 | |
New to RB
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IP: 1D04 65C4
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you're not serious??? Ignorance isn't an excuse. and if you didn't know what that meant then get a dictionary. While you got the 'bible for the illiterate' on your lap why don't you re-read this battle and then give your opinion. |
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02-16-04, 02:21 AM | #8 | |
New to RB
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IP: 1D04 65C4
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and ill dawg that wasn't to say I was dissin you, I liked your drop man. |
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02-16-04, 02:23 AM | #9 | |
Flyweight
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IP: F978 8610
yeah i know man, that mak dude is a fucking herb...nice spit yurself..btw, these freeposts count as "ups" .. so we're both at 2/5 ...
anyways.. UPPIN .2.
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02-16-04, 02:48 AM | #10 | ||
Light Weight
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IP: 9CA0 C805
wow...Jon definitely had the wordplay section of this battle.....but iLL threw hard punches and he had the personals and structure part of this battle.....jon u can cut the bolding also....and the quotes arent too necessary...i know how it though...i used to do that alot too......here's the line that won it to me though...
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Punches - iLL Personals - iLL...the name disses Opener - iLL Closer - iLL Wordplay - Jon....work on making harder punches... Structure - iLL Vote - iLL for having harder punches and a hard hitting verse overall.....Jon u had a decent verse.....but u need work on making ur punches more effective feel me....no hate.... peace
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02-16-04, 04:59 AM | #11 |
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IP: 8633 BD8F
ill = ...This battle was a joke from the ve-ry beginning// ...Only my second line and I'm al-ready winning// ok start ...You messed wit the wrong guy, like dough im 'widespread'// ...Your shits fed, ya like a John Doe, only exist in peoples head// nice lines ...You aint got what it takes, in face you lack the requirements// ...Ya done son, time to 'checkin' to TD Waterhouse for retirement// good ...Up to my seventh line, and this shits already over// ...I'm the cop so pull over, you gunna need more luck than a clover// ok ...JONdough, pretty creative, so you reppin a bakery?// ...Fake emcee, my rhymes the illest, As Seen On Tv// nice duce squad = I'm confused? I dont 'buy your cheap kiddy scripts' bitch, the only place you ever made 'cents' was 'Nickle'odeon you're 'shootin blanks', Ill's style is what 'sterile dicks' spit in fallopians Got this 'hater grinnin', say "Jon could tickle odiums" when Im done, yer eyes pits and palms'll trickle sodium ok I 'reap' the benefits off 'stage' and stand with 'sickles on podiums' only times your rhymes are 'dope', are when you mix 'em with opium blah not good punch ILL you wanna battle??? then stick to yer Pok-e-mon's Or I'll be 'force'd' to move you, Im the lyrical O B Wun ok ok, ill your flow was good and also was the structure, punches came really hard. this was a very good spit!! umm duce flow was ok but patchy, structure was nice, punches were alright on times. vote = ill < better overall spit. PLEASE RETURN THE FAVOUR AND VOTE ON THIS BATTLE. THANKS
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?p=1188595#post1188595 . |
02-16-04, 05:01 AM | #12 |
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SORRY THIS IS THE LINK , OR JUST GO TO FONT LINES AND ITS AGAINST TILLEDIE
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...595#post1188595 |
02-16-04, 05:15 AM | #13 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 9B04 91FE
Vote - ILL
duce forced everyone of those multis, killed the whole verse plus that nickleodeon line was gay
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02-16-04, 07:39 AM | #14 | |
Flyweight
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IP: F978 8610
Unbelievable,
People Pretending this battle Isnt Noticeable.. ! VOTE PLEASE, i will hit you back wit an honest one!!
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02-16-04, 10:38 AM | #15 | |
Flyweight
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IP: F978 8610
^^ once again...
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