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FuE-xIoN | 0 | 0% | |
MeNTiLL | 3 | 100.00% | |
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01-16-04, 02:17 PM | #1 | |||||||
The Golden Chyld
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MeNTiLL vs FuE-xIoN
IP: 17B3 6207
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10 Lines Min/Max 3-0 KnockOut or 1st To 5 Votes Due by Tuesday Explained + Poll Votes Checc in to let me know U see this ... Peace |
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01-17-04, 01:39 AM | #2 | |||||||
-WiTs EnD-
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IP: 71CE 2E84
+ No Crew Votes..Since Im Not In One ..LoL
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01-20-04, 06:50 PM | #3 | |||||||
The Golden Chyld
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IP: 17B3 6207
De Ja Vu ... Imma prove the this dude can remember death
Only reason Ur in Wit's End is cause the good members left Consider this theft I stealin' any dreams he had of winnin' FuE's from "Mil Town" .. Good thing cuz he records ain't spinnin U gotta be kiddin' No need for hard punches Dude's trippin' himself Peep his checc in & sig .. If he says he'll win - There's proof that he's known for contradictin' himself Duke tried to copy my name style .. MeNTiLL's sum1 he'll be glad to be U ain't need to say shit .. I seen ur face^ No need to prove ur a sad MC What's happening ? He's lost in confusion Askin' dude on the cross why he's losin' Aight since this is my last line of the verse I'll ask U .. Wat the fucc is a FuE-xIoN ? Blah ... Don't no show |
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01-20-04, 11:56 PM | #4 | |||||||
-WiTs EnD-
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IP: 71CE 2E84
^Gay....Not My Fault I Was Accepted Into A Crew After The Many Days You Wanted To Wait To Drop Your Verse...But I Will Show Good Sportsmanship And Not Edit My Post Good Work And Good Luck
____________________________ Acro Nim?? I'll Knock This Kids Initial Period Outta Wack ......... And Put This Bitch On Birth Control Pills!! You Aint Real, And What I've Always Wondered , How Can You Be Ill When You Only 'Meant Ill'?! Claim To Be A Golden Chyld , Meanwhile My Punches .....Leave Your Vision Blurrier Than Your AV!! Won A Battle Lately? Cut The Last Letter From Your Name ...I See An 'L' In The Making!! Get Off My Dick You Aint Right...But He Volunteered A Left!! Your Punches Are Barely Felt I Destroyed Your Health... ...And Made Your Homepages Only Member Yourself!!! Now I See The Origin Of Your Location After This Battle... Cuz You Will Have Black Eyes!! I Told Him To Wear The Big Boy Shoes In The Elite.... He Asked What Size, 3, 4, or 5!!! So Here's My Closer I'll Start With My Opener By Asking Him.. WHAT THE FUCK IS AN ACRO NIM??!!! 10 lines...My Barz Are Cut In Half Or They Would Be The Same Length As Yours...Oh Yeah...Beans And Peas Are Basically The Same Thing...Dont Get Technical You Bastards...LoL |
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01-23-04, 12:21 PM | #5 | |||||||
The Golden Chyld
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IP: 17B3 6207
Blah ... Flippin' is gay ... And LMAO at the link to that site ... I 4got about that shit ... Blah ... Votes ?
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01-23-04, 01:35 PM | #6 | ||||||
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IP: F7ED CA3D
Hmm.. I expected doper than this.
FuE-xIoN.. I had trouble finding where your bar started and ended.. your structure completely through the flow off and ruined the affect of the punches. Most of your punches had potential but that's about it. No real hard punches. Wordplay was alright.. lacked, and at times forced. Although you did have a couple of ok lines.. I expected more from you. MeNTiLL.. Your lines are little bit long.. shorten them up a bit.. but your flow was on point.. good flow... wordplay was lacking.. but u had some alright wordplay.. Punches hit pretty hard.. structure wasn't bad.. Again you didn't have any high light lines either. I expected more from you as well. There were really no stand out lines in this battle, however it was a close battle. Don't get me wrong.. this wasn't a terrible battle.. just not as good as I had expected. Fue Xion.. you feeding off his verse in your last bar ruined your closer so MeNTiLL takes that part. He also definetly took the opener. I'm cool with both of you but.. ..V- MeNTiLL
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01-24-04, 02:30 AM | #7 | |||||||
-WiTs EnD-
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IP: CB38 DF07
Flippin?? Vote Swaying Is Gay.. ^Didnt Feed Off Of His Verse^ My First Word In My Verse Was "Acro Nim?" Basically My Closer Went Straight Back To My Opener...But Whatever..
Oh Yeah...Click The Link I Gave In My Verse...Fucking Hilarious...LMFAO Last edited by FuE-xIoN : 01-24-04 at 02:50 AM. |
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02-13-04, 12:17 PM | #8 | |||||||
..Soft Focus..
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IP: 1B3B C284
This battle was pretty good i thought a lot better then what i could pull off ..
but anyways.. Mentill.. you had a good concrete verse with hard consistant punches more personal which made it witty..your opener i thought was dope...same as your closer...and a nice middlevery well done... Fue...i thought you could of done a lot better i'm not saying you fed but you had the same type of closer which made this turn out weak...but you had some good punches just not as witty could'a maybe been worded differently..but still a good verse Return the faver...hit up the battle in my sig...peace
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02-17-04, 08:27 AM | #9 | |||||||
[.Eclipse.]
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IP: 6588 491C
Honestly... terrible. Mentill yours was ok.... Fue
that was definately not Elite worthy. You should've been embarrassed to post that. Then u topped it off by showing ur literary genious and not knowing what an acronym is....terrible... vote - mentill
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02-17-04, 10:23 AM | #10 | ||||
-Real Time-
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IP: FDD6 AE15
Fue Is Lucky That I Do Not DQ Him. For Flipping Mentills Last Line.
Consider This A Warning. |
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