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J DOT | 0 | 0% | |
Ice Pick | 5 | 100.00% | |
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08-09-04, 12:04 PM | #1 | |
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J DOT vs Ice Pick
IP: 8AED B598
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6 - 14 Lines No Crew Votes No Recycling No Biting No D/R No Crew Votes 85 post to vote my bad...had to do something...here it is tho Minimum posts to vote: 85 Check in by: 08-09-04 at 12:34 PM Must drop verse in 45 minutes after check in. |
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08-09-04, 12:07 PM | #2 | |
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IP: 8AED B598
J DOT has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 12:07 PM.
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08-09-04, 12:08 PM | #3 | |
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IP: 70A9 C9CB
Ice Pick has ACCEPTED this battle on 08-09-04 12:08 PM.
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08-09-04, 12:22 PM | #4 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 8AED B598
You get set out too long ya boy Dot'll melt you like "ice"
Make yo life upset when i get into yo head like lice Cant "pick" da germs out, cant detect yo infection Dot'll help dawg, get inside you like a C-Section Im puttin yo rhymes to rest, like 'LUDA' 'go to sleep hoe' Put em in a jaw, then a coffin, then six feet below I'm the clean up man, when i merk cats with bare hands 24* year old 'angel', I'll rotten his evil plan Assasinate his dreams, call him Martin Luther King When it comes to plottin his downfall, J DOT's a fien If ya life just about weed and raps*, then I would say its worthless 10 min to flow, but you still got hit the worstest I think yo feelings hurt, you prolly nearing yo death But I'm done talking, you could have the last of my breathe *check his profile for information (we still cool PICK...its a battle, gotta go hard) |
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08-09-04, 12:43 PM | #5 | |
GoD LiKe
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IP: 70A9 C9CB
LIL INTRO
i Rip-Kidz-wit-Bad-Scriptz reduce ya' verse to Remmantz-&-Partz 'dis dude flow " BITES' so much"..i guess i'm Swimmin-wit-Sharkz The real battle begins i'm Darin-U-to-Spit-Sh!t..niggaz best Learn-ta-Cope when i "Clap" ya "unprotected "ya Pen-is at RISK..i'm "Burnin" ya Quotez i aint Concerned-wit-VOTEZ..i "Check" Matez quickly..see how 'dis PAWN'z flopped "Beatin' ICE like "100ft Jumperz" nucka.. a Long Shot JDOT rymes All-FAKE??..ya' Flow'z GRASS Rootz??..i MOWED-da-Lawn somebody Told-U-Wrong..U can's spit wit 'ICE..ya' Breathing'z Fatigued 9 BATTLEZ..6 of 'em loss's??..Dot thinks he is Leadin-da-League my Dukez 'R a Hazzard.. General Lee{generally} U find Knotz Landing leavin scars on ya' forehead CONCUSIONZ "project" visualz dat Must-be-STARZ DOTS a Primate..but i agilely "flip" on his Monkey Barz leavin' Flunkiez Scarred..ya' "dissected" TRACKZ??..i RAN-thru-in-SECTIONZ like "crazed" PROCTOLOGISTZ..ICE will HANNed-U-ya- RECTUM......MuthafUUcka..whaaat!! |
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08-09-04, 12:44 PM | #6 | |
Banned: Cheating
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IP: 8AED B598
i hope u gun flow...if u get dq'ed i still get the win right...i aint gun bitch to strobe like some people, but just spit
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08-09-04, 12:45 PM | #7 | |
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IP: 8AED B598
nvm...there it is
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08-09-04, 12:45 PM | #8 | |
GoD LiKe
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IP: 70A9 C9CB
Nice shit DOT, YEAH WE STILL COOL
i think i went over a line or 2 UPPN FOR SOME VOTES YOU NOT MAD I DROPPED AN EXTRA LINE ARE YA IM TOO HIGH AND COUNTED WRONG
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08-09-04, 12:48 PM | #9 | |
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IP: 8AED B598
hell yea im mad...imm let strobe kno that i won this, cause u dint follow rulez
naw...jp, its coo, nice flow...uppppn peoples...need votes |
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08-09-04, 12:49 PM | #10 | |
GoD LiKe
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IP: 70A9 C9CB
ohh shit dude you had me goin
HJA HA HA HA that totaly fucked wit me head GOOD LOOKIN we should try and get a tag team battle goin sometime
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08-09-04, 12:58 PM | #11 | |
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Voted For: Ice Pick
Wordplay - Ice Punches - Ice Personals - J-Dot Vocab - ? Structure - J-Dot Overall - Ice Ice Pick took this because I put more emphasis on Wordplay and Punches than Personals and Stucture.. It is more entertaining to read with good punches.. personals too, bit punches causes for more talent.. he came more creative on them to mt.. also ice pick, you fliw was seemed better because of the wordplay and a few multies.. yyour stucture could of been better, but it's all good.. you barley took this cuz.. no hate J-Dot, jus being real. yo, keep it gangsta and return the favor in my thread will you? thanx.. heres the link.. http://community.rapverse.com/showthread.php?t=133629 |
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08-09-04, 01:07 PM | #12 | |
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IP: 212C BA1E
Voted For: Ice Pick
Aight, This was a tight battle, its about time iam seeing some battles in here that are actually tight, and not One-sided shit.. Anyway, Jdot you had some good concepts, Structure was good, and yah flow was tight, Yah Punches were not that hard, but were aight.. and i liked that personal yah Entered.. I rate yah Verse at: 6.5/10 Ice pick yah had some really good Wordplay and effective Punches, yah structure was kinda fucked, and Flow was not the best, But yah really out did him with Metaphores, and wordplay, and thats what really finished this battle Rated yah verse: 7/10 No hate Guys, Tight battle Return the Fav!!!!!!!
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08-09-04, 05:34 PM | #13 | |
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IP: 2C52 659A
up, up, and get some votes...we need some votes on this, c'mon people, too many battles gettin slept on
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08-09-04, 09:18 PM | #14 |
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Ice Pick
NO CONTEST! ice pick kiled it.wit punches n flow. good try j dot. try to think about different shit n rhyming. ayo ice pick i vote honest al tha time errtime.
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08-10-04, 12:10 PM | #15 | |
GoD LiKe
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IP: 4DB9 B918
uppin..and vote honestly....drop links will return the favor....
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