im new to this game, so i give ma best shot,
i flip the script as the bitch sucks ma cock,
i take to the stage like a fish takes to water,
in a few years time ill be fukin with ur daughter,
an once i gotta hold of this rap game,
ill b hear for sum time like a life sentance,
and i aint a broke rapper hu keeps sittin on da fence,
and thats it from this first time rapper,
give me ur thoughts and help me progress,
so i can become the muther fukin best!!

holla back at me with any thoughts

Lawtz- disturbin the piece in this muther fuker man!

that wasn't very good
work on ur vocab