10-20 lines
no crew/hate votes
let's just battle and have fun

ill spit first

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this kid im battling's name is liquor of tears
but his flow is about as hard as tears for fears
so im gonna shout,shout, let it all out
my rhymes is deadly, man, there's no doubt
all liquor's packin is straight rubber
i leave him so broke, he'll be eatin his mother's blubber
at the end of this rhyme, ill leave u like ur name implies, in tears
u prolly wanna stick a gerbil in ur ass like richard gere
we from the same state, but u givin new york a bad name
with ur lame ass style, u should be bowing ur head in shame
man, u know my freestyles always stay off the wall
liquor of tears rapping is like jordan playin baseball
but he ain't got no other sport to fall back on
this scrub is talentless, thats why i get my crack on
spittin vicious rhymes that will leave u decapitated
liquor would prolly still be a virgin, had he not masturbated

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check... Ill have it in later tonight or tomoro... peace... I got shit to do

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Even if this kid wrote my biography, he couldn't come up with anything personal/
He could rhyme about Piccaso's paintings, and he still couldn't write abstractional/
This kid gangsta? His mom won't even let him carry a super soaker/
Dont brag about girls, the only time you can play it straight is during a game of poker./
If our words were ranked on the drug scale mine would be grade A,/
Addiction to my rhymes leave ya sittin in an institution with nothing to say/
But its too bad it aint graded like tits,yours is down in the c's and d's/
which means the only addiction you give.Is to 10 year old kids like inhalants and amphetamines/
You a coward and soft like 'gizmo', yet you persist on callin your self a Gremlin?/(the movie Gremlins)
Think you can play mind games, But you couldn't 'get inside me' if you was 'my surgeon'/
Your Verse couldn't go anywhere fast if you mailed it across the world and labeled it Extremley Urgent/




iight lets get some votes in here.

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alright yall im give you an honest vote and return the favor and vote on some of my battles Vango vs Optimum, Vango vs Slaughta

alright i seriously like both of your styles, since ive been on this site ive seen so many mc's fakin like their hard, talking about stabbing and cuttin people, they dont understand that a real battle is about bringin it personal style with punchlines. yall both get what a battle is, this one was real tight both of you had some good punches, in fact it was blow for blow until the end when Liqour said you couldnt get inside of me if you was my surgeon, your verse couldnt go anywhere fast in mailed it across the world and labeled it extremely urgent. that was ill, i gotta give this one to liqour of tears, but this one might need a rematch with liqour spittin first,

Peace Vango

iight, ill try and hit up ya battles.... UPPPPPPPPIN

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yo man this one i gotta give to Liquor of Tears for his betta vocab othat than that heres y....he gets my vote....

Liquor of Tears: yo man you had some coo punches and metas n lil multies but
it was coo over all man... i like dat gemlin line too it was hot bro.
keep this up.............

king gremlin : yo man you had some metas and puches but they dint really hit hard
bro i mean they were cool n all but u could of done betta....
also alot of the junk u said was too simple for me....add a lil bit
of flava to your stuff man...but keep practicin man ull get betta.

My vote= Liquor of Tears

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iight thanks...... uppppppppppppppppppppppiiiiiiin

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Yo, that shit was definitely tight, both of you.

Gremlin, ya shit just wasnt really that personal. You can rhyme good and you got some good multis in there-your punches were kind of general and were really aimed well at liquor. You got some talent tho forreal. You had some tight vocab and hot lyrics. But like i said ya shit just wasnt "as good" as liquors. Good job tho.

Liquor, ya shit was all good. It was all there ya had good punches, good personals, good rhymin, good multis. Eveything ya said was good, mad good personals. I like ya shit good job.

Close, but i say liquor 1


{ let me get some feedback too, http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...337#post1202337 }

I'm a break it down...

this kid im battling's name is liquor of tears
but his flow is about as hard as tears for fears

Not a bad punch

so im gonna shout,shout, let it all out
my rhymes is deadly, man, there's no doubt

Weak

all liquor's packin is straight rubber
i leave him so broke, he'll be eatin his mother's blubber

Average

at the end of this rhyme, ill leave u like ur name implies, in tears
u prolly wanna stick a gerbil in ur ass like richard gere

Liked this!!!^^^good humour

we from the same state, but u givin new york a bad name
with ur lame ass style, u should be bowing ur head in shame

Couldve come harder

man, u know my freestyles always stay off the wall
liquor of tears rapping is like jordan playin baseball

Played out line, but ok

but he ain't got no other sport to fall back on
this scrub is talentless, thats why i get my crack on

Sorry?

spittin vicious rhymes that will leave u decapitated
liquor would prolly still be a virgin, had he not masturbated

He he, good finisher

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Liqour break down...

Even if this kid wrote my biography, he couldn't come up with anything personal/
He could rhyme about Piccaso's paintings, and he still couldn't write abstractional/

Not bad, nice style

This kid gangsta? His mom won't even let him carry a super soaker/
Dont brag about girls, the only time you can play it straight is during a game of poker./

Nice punch

If our words were ranked on the drug scale mine would be grade A,/
Addiction to my rhymes leave ya sittin in an institution with nothing to say/

Good, couldve come harder

But its too bad it aint graded like tits,yours is down in the c's and d's/
which means the only addiction you give.Is to 10 year old kids like inhalants and amphetamines/

Good punch

You a coward and soft like 'gizmo', yet you persist on callin your self a Gremlin?/(the movie Gremlins)

Ok

Think you can play mind games, But you couldn't 'get inside me' if you was 'my surgeon'/
Your Verse couldn't go anywhere fast if you mailed it across the world and labeled it Extremley Urgent/

Nice finisher


Not a bad battle, in my opinion youve both got a long way to go but Liquor definitely took this.

Would appreciate some votes/feedback in my battles plz!!!

Safe

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iight... thanks... UPPIN!!!!!!!!!!>.>>....>....>;'

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god damn stop sleeepin and get some votes in ehre............ lets go people

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