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Old 03-14-04, 10:56 PM   #1
Viscosity
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Me & My Pen

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Ink in the center, with a miniscule of leather
gold plated, with my name imprinted in the header
Old, but not out dated, its vintange is the texture
the tip rolled, but not sezther..of the best - it's better..
The neck' black as shadow's, other's cant mesure
..to this..
Red hand grip's, and silver around it's hip's &
..I make sure the figure never chip's, ink blot dip's..
swiming in the pool of oil, in the case it sit's..
We gaze', and it has tendency's to turn me bliss
bring's envy-instantly, when other's use it.
If they grasp it to tightly, they might bruise-it,
polish it down, and smooth is slightly...
Unasemble it, and mask it nicely &
..reinsert it tightly, to make it cool and icy..
Add another coat of polish, and remove it lightly
try to perfect it.. I want it to be crisp, like me..
Never will lose it, as I grasp and tug, and push it
..into my pocket..
Make sure were never not sepret, always together..
even when ink run's out, me and my pen..
Forever.
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Old 03-14-04, 11:08 PM   #2
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Hmmmmm. I read this twice to make sure I didn't mis read it. I think this is a good verse. I also like the concept of the track, I think it is very creative. Keep up the good work man.
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Old 03-15-04, 10:19 AM   #3
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ight coo.. up
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