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10/20 lines
no hate votes
no d/r
no bitin
no prewritten shit,
no recycled lyrics
blind spit





may the best man win

Some people say aint cool and if that’s tru
Then im the hottest m.c that you’ll eva loose to
See even if your hard headed my rymes will still soak in clear,
So I’ll liqidize yo brain dats why your wet behind the ears,
Ya see my rymes is sick but not meaning unda the weather,
Meaning I’ll have you facin hectic obstacles with vital limbs severed,
you cant stand my flows so im guessin your unstable,
in this battle rap you'll be docta suess and i'll be easops fables,
so wat im sayin in this rap game im more mature and your an Adolescent,
ya see im a god given blessin whos about to give you a metaforical lesson,
see GOD couldnt even BLESS YOU if you sneezed outside the holy gates,
see you got an Unfavorable destiny cuz I predetermine your fate




may the best man win

Why you rappin shit like i'm intollerant/
stupid twat thinks I'm adolescent/
I gots me more pubic hair than all thats on ya head/
an bigger errections that seem to make feeble people dead/
Spit weak rhymes and I'll rip you to shreads/
Postin real weak shit on all these threads/
I'm wanted in fourty countries by the feds/
cos killin you seem to make them fret/
I'd like to say you fucked my mate called bret/
But the gay jokes don't go nowhere like ya threads/
If ya gona talk about the weather then tell us why to dread/
The stom thats comin in ya momma's bed/
she like a bike man, everyone's had a ride/
Its too late for you to duck and hide/
cos you stepped up to me so now i'ma whoop ya hyde/
I know I can't say that I never tried/
To fuck you up an all you did was cry/
I'm hopin in the end we'll all be friends/
and you won't leave this shit like you gon an died/
cos this shits done an you done cried an died and ascended into the sky/

holla back

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uppin for votes in this mutha fackers!

Holla Back

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may the best man win

Guyver takes this.

Flow - Guyver, it was just easier to read. Em Sce, your lack of bars makes it not seem to flow very well.

Punches - em sce, ya had some good lines in that shit.

Personals - guyver had alot more, better comebacks, he got almost all ya lines...and were alot better, em sce, you didnt really have any of them. It sounded like it was Pre-Written :-x (no hate intended)

Multies - Guyver, without a doubt.

Vocab - em sce, ya had some nice words in there. Guyver's were good too, but em sces ya were better.

Originality - em sce, even though he had less of everything else, ya verse was pretty tight.


Good job both yall tho.
Guyver 1.

uuuupppppiiiinnnn 4 votes

Uppin for some votes up in herre!!

Holla Back yall

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I think guyver's opener was alot harder, If that temp had kept up then this battle would go to him. But after "Why you rappin shit like i'm intollerant/
stupid twat thinks I'm adolescent/
I gots me more pubic hair than all thats on ya head/
an bigger errections that seem to make feeble people dead/" Guyver feel off. the complexity went flat, the punches didn't hit hard because he was rhyming words like feds, with deads, threads etc... which necessarily wouldn't be bad if he was actually saying somthing inbetween the lines.

Dj emc on the other hand, had an all r ound solid battle, it was over comples, the metta, and multi's were not over the top hot but still were enough to overcome.

my vote goes to dj emc

upppiinn 4 votes

DJ emc, he had flow and the punches hit hard. I liked guyvers opener but it got chopy and was out of focus. i was lost with this part
Spit weak rhymes and I'll rip you to shreads/
Postin real weak shit on all these threads/
I'm wanted in fourty countries by the feds/
cos killin you seem to make them fret/
the ryhmes of shreads, threads, feds, and finaly he killed it fret. With some work it could be great.

DJ Emc has my vote

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Agreed. After reading em sce's stuff I thought guyver would have an easy time of it. Em sce had a grip of concepts and I like that in a verse, but he wasn't really punching hard, just kind of showing off. Which is okay, but it doesn't usually win battles.

Guyver went for the throat and had a decent opener but didn't follow through. On the plus side, he had a couple of stealth multi's that I missed the first time through, and he was serious about making it a battle. But other rhymes and disses either just didn't work or the structure was too awkward. His closer wasn't as memorable as DJ Em Sce's either.

I'm probably one of those "feeble people" Guyver references in his verse, even though I got nothin personal against dude. So I was hoping to give him the vote this time and show it's all good. But unfortunately DJ Em Sce took this one with stronger and more original concepts plus solid rhyming. Vote = DJ Em Sce.

nah man, U jus gave me the idea of feeble. lol.
I really put myself in shit by startin with Intollerant, adolescent.
I couldn't think of what to rhyme so I split it to a new feed line.
I'm jus glad erryone's votin sensible and actually explainin votes.

Uppin for votes.

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guyver has got skills but i think dj em c had the power he had better rhyme structure and won this by a mile

i think guyver is good but a tad unskilled

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