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Yung Duke 5 83.33%
On-Swo 1 16.67%
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Old 03-13-04, 04:07 PM   #1
On-Swo
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on-swo vs Yung Duke

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1o lines max
no bitin
no feedin
i will drop first
 
Old 03-13-04, 04:23 PM   #2
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Yung Duke wack to da point of no reaturn wid sub zero mic cred,
His Rhyme Bitten wid tallent reseblin' at hes imbread,
0-1 shows hes fake his puches dont penitrate or consloidate,
Wid his verses so week he mirors verble wackness to a high rate,
Dis is showtime for Duke but he chokes on da mic wid consistency,
But lyricaly he couldnt drop a line if they destroyed formality,
Yung Duke kickin hostiltiy wid his rhyme consistently,
His punches fell short so i riped duke and ignored crime resistenly,
Lackin' seroius mic credibilty, But Duke fallin' in da hands of defeat is a formality,
He's Reproducin' MC's lyrics but still couldnt drop if there were double da gravity,
 
Old 03-13-04, 04:26 PM   #3
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Duke's a terrorist on the mic, the rap game's Sadaam,
I got On-Swo under a table like Russia's ready to drop us a bomb,
this nigga think his style outta this world, so bitch phone home and go,
I'm the true alien on the stage, complete wit an extraterrestial flow,
wit ya weak ass lines, ya ass will neve get signed, take my advice,
You'll be better off playin a sport, sellin drugs, or shooting dice,
How you expect to beat me, you're a bitch wit 11 posts,
If it wasn't for your challenge thread, ya ass wouldnt even be able to vote,
So dont drop ya guard cause you might get sucker punched from behind,
I aint talkin bout a fist thrown from duke, I'm talkin bout a battle ending punchline...
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Old 03-13-04, 04:28 PM   #4
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nigga you need to learn how to type i was waitin for you to go so i could submit mine
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Old 03-13-04, 04:29 PM   #5
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good verse though so lets get some votes in here. you know what i mean?
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Old 03-13-04, 04:55 PM   #6
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wtf aight on-swo you used formality twice and wtf was this line
"0-1 shows hes fake his puches dont penitrate or consloidate,"
are you just using whatever word you could find to rhyme look up the defintion of the word before you use it both had some weak punches but im gonna have to give it to duke because of this line
"So dont drop ya guard cause you might get sucker punched from behind,
I aint talkin bout a fist thrown from duke, I'm talkin bout a battle ending punchline..."
V=duke

"dont get mad or hate me its not my fault your mom tried to rape me"
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Old 03-13-04, 04:58 PM   #7
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good lookin Krackmittens. that's 1-0. lets keep the votes comin
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Old 03-14-04, 07:41 AM   #8
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Krackmittens dats a d/r vote
 
Old 03-14-04, 08:17 AM   #9
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week battle.....duke ur first line didnt rhyme...ur flow was wack..and your rhyme scheme was very basic...3/10
no swo....punches were ok and u did dis him a bit...flow was ok...wordplay was nice...you had mulipus and dat is rare 4 a newb...i say u killed dis guy...5/10
keep it up....and Krackmittens u dont no shit bout word play if u didnt understand it...
v/no swo
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Old 03-14-04, 09:43 AM   #10
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Lyrical MC um no.....
now the winner is Yung Duke becuz of hiz personals and becuz of his structurre...he murked on swo az far az i'm concerned..i like tha part bout tha 11posts if he didn't have hiz challenge thread he wudn't b able to vote..that wuz ill....i agrre wit KrackMittens
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Old 03-14-04, 12:38 PM   #11
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well not to freepost by any means but it seems like some people took offense to my vote well im really sorry that.... you faggots cant get your heads out your asses and finally understand the concept of flow it was an honest vote and if you dont agree with it thats fine just shut your mouths and get the fuck over it

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Old 03-15-04, 08:57 PM   #12
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still uppin for votes
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Old 03-15-04, 09:34 PM   #13
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Young Duke Killed His Opponent
On-swo Came Soft
Never Liked His Style During Battle

Young Duke Stuck Out More
It Was Like On-swo Wasn't There
 
Old 03-15-04, 10:02 PM   #14
James West
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I agree Duke destroyed him,

you started out kinda weak in the first couple lines, but then after these lines you more than redeemed yourself,

"wit ya weak ass lines, ya ass will neve get signed, take my advice,
You'll be better off playin a sport, sellin drugs, or shooting dice,
How you expect to beat me, you're a bitch wit 11 posts,"
If it wasn't for your challenge thread, ya ass wouldnt even be able to vote,"

BEAUTIFUL

On-Swo, well, honestly, it made no sense whatsoever. It seemed like you were just trying to use big words like "consloidate". And lines 5-6 didnt rhyme. It just looked like you tried to sound smart, but it backfired.

My Vote....... Yung Duke
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Old 03-15-04, 10:16 PM   #15
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Hate to say it but Yung Duke did have that battle. Tho the first 2-4 lines were realy weak - Please never talk about dropping bombs and saddam..Its herbish and ive seen it tons of times! It was a solid verse with decent flow and Idea's.

Swo you seem to be using a bunch of big misplaced words, And your lack of capitals and basic punctuation make reading it choppy...No idea's basicly at all...

My vote. Yung Duke.
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