Rules
length 1 - 2 mins (acutal time rapping)
Verses Due - wednesday at 12 midnight
first to 5 votes win
usualy voting rules

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Due date changed to friday because krem had some problems - OpeY

ok!! im cool with that lest go head and do this !!!!!!!!!!

ok i did my track. its Krems time




www.soundclick.com/themarvel

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/9/kremmusic.htm

it's kinda mixed toghether...you can hear the good qaulity and shitty quality but meh


peace

krem shit was alright
u know he cant do no beter jokeing










I'm the King of the dark

yeah..I believe you that you did it in 7:30 in the mournin'...even ya laughs are fake as fuk kid...Marv, I could hardly understand yo ass..omfg weak battle...

vote - Marvelis..ugh, don't be proud of it...

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yo Hamadani u said that u can hardly understand me u just didnt wont to
talking all that shit

Seriously both of ya'll need to get some better use of metaphors and vocab.

Marvelis- like the beat choice... that give it to ya shit was stupid.... work on ya flow... ya voice is boring, work on ur emotion... wasn't feelin' it, lets see what krem has

Krem- can tell quality is shitty from start.... voice is too high, turn down ya vocals... LOL @ i just had computer problems... work on ya quality, flow is aight... lyrics is coo... quality just got better... the only thing that threw this off was the high ass vocal but the lyrics was straight....

V/ Krem..... not the best battle... Krem had shitty ass quality & his vocals were high but he had a aight flow & his punches were better...

i dont kear who wins know more but i like to win

Marvelis-

cool choice of beat...
the vocal effects were kinda gay... less reverb man
are you black? cuz you shouldnt say "nigga" if you arent!!! lol
decent metaphors... pretty general though. nothin personal

Krem-

ROFL the intro was funny!!! "I had computer problems... bitch" ROFL
nice beat...
your vocal effects were okay... better then marvelis
need better punches... better lyrics... and dont say "sorry i was late"

DONT EVER apologize in a battle!!!

Vote: Marvelis

and this was not a good battle!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1 you both need to elevate

come and vote for i can this over with go on and sya i win

marvelis.....gud beat choice, flow was gud but cudnt really make out wot u were sayin quality wasn't great!!!

krem.....u did this 7.30 in the morning n it showed big style, lyrics were too simple, quality was horrible, jus think u cud av done beta ere but peace!

v/marvelis

will u two vote on my battle wiv lyrical havok, gud battle needin votes....thanx!

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marvelis- you had the beat but the lyrics weren't there...all that talkin bout you gonna bust him and shit is something you just don't talk about in a battle and besides; your punches were no where to be found.....but you'll elevate....do what you do

krem- beat was aiight....flow was better than opponents....your punches really didn't connect but atleast you had punches....quality sucked....voice is way too high....but, I think you know that by now...LOL...

Vote- Krem

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Fuck The World!!!