spit at 9:40 or Dq
no dr votes
10linez

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no d/r and no crew votes either.. can we exceed 10 bars?

nah 10 linez-----------------------------------------------

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Ight then man.. checkin in.. no crew votes btw^^^^

yo skillz is shit--da only way u born 2 spit--unless u wuz re-incarnated.........
yo damn lyrics is dodo,i call yo verse fubu,cuz the spit is outdated.........
yo shit is special ed--my rhymes roc u back 2 bed--teach u a lesson........
whipp him back 2 bitch slapped-make him cry like ushers track--sayin his confession...
he juss a light weight--his usernames all fake--he should be sentenced to lethal injection........
another wack emmece-n-e thing he spit i descend it-catch da flames give him a 100 degree affection........
get out the fuckin ring-he throwing punches like butter bean-da shits not connecting....
im goin on 14-2,he takin 5-2,im gettin all 5 votes-juss a easy k-o --y he juss wait 4 feedback 2 get corrected.......
since when them garff brooks rhymes??am i watsing my verses or my time--wit this shit......
he out of bounds put him back in line,5-0 is mine-born2spitt change it 2 another brad2spitt.........

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Im bout to merk you man dont struggle, or even try to 'fight it'/
I've heard you spit, MC?.. circus act is more 'like it'/
i'll confuse you with big words i can't spell like onimotapiea/
but you spit so much shit you givin' rappers diarea/
Choppa City beatin’ Born??? Hell no/
Thats like a one armed retard tryin’ to grab his elbow/
Choppa's Like A Midget Playing Basketball Cause he has No Business On the ‘Net’/
He Confesses he a Vet But his Chin Catches more Balls Than The New York Mets!/
I Guess You Can Call My Lyrics Apples [From Snow White] The Way I Rot Minds/
Your "Saliva" Must Be "Cold" Cuz You still Aint "Spit" A "Hot" Line/

OHHH DAMN

CHOPPA- DONT BRAG ABOUT AN EASY WIN...COCKY-NESS CAN CAUSE U A LOST...UR PUNCHES WAS IGHT...DIDNT FEEL ANY...WASNT TOO PERSONAL...WASNT THAT FUNNY EITHER....UR FLOW AND STRUCTURE WAS GOOD THO....BUT U NEED TO MAKE UR PUNCHES A LIL FUNNY SO READERS CAN ENJOY AND LAUGH ABOUT IT...U JUST DIDNT HAVE THAT

BORN2SPITT-UR BEST LINE THAT HAD ME LAUGHING "i'll confuse you with big words i can't spell like onimotapiea/
but you spit so much shit you givin' rappers diarea/" THERE WERE MORE ALSO...UR FLOW AND STRUCTURE WAS GOOD OVER ALL....BUT I THINK UR PUNCHES WON U THIS BATTLE...PUNCHES SHOULD ALWAYS WIN U BATTLES...AND I JUST FOUND URS FUNNY...

VOTE-BORN2SPITT....CHOPPA I WOULD HAVE VOTED FOR URS IF URS WAS A LIL BIT MORE FUNNY AND NOT SO YA KNOW BRAGGING AND SERIOUS LIKE U GONNA KILL HIM....U GOOD THO SO KEEP IT UP...

Ight thx for the vote... Uppin for mroe votes ^^^^

uppin 4 votezz..........................................

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aight this was a close battle...
choppa
spit: 8/10
punch: 7/10
mulit: 6/10

Born:
spit: 8/10
punch: 6.5/10
multi: 6/10

u both had basicly the same things..but choppa jst had jst enough to beat u dawg

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

ok listen

Choppaa.. hotness good structre good use of vocab good punches gotta work on flow a little bit kinda sketchy in some parts...

yo skillz is shit--da only way u born 2 spit--unless u wuz re-incarnated.........
yo damn lyrics is dodo,i call yo verse fubu,cuz the spit is outdated.........
^^
Ya best line was ur opener and throughout ya verse it remained pretty steady but not exceding that..

K Born2spitt... :Not bad not as hard as choppas your punches werent as hard and you just randomly made up a word so you could rhyme it wit direah i think you mean Omnipetent ... but i dont know... anyways elevate

vote choppa city

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HAHAHA... u dont know wtf onamatepia is?? i dunno how to spell that shit.. but ur wack kid.. dont hate vote on this battle kid...

Born won caus of his his quick use of punches
he came a little bit stronger then choppa
Born u need elevate a little bit on your flow
but everything else cool yo rap was raw just
keep it up and work on your flow

vote Born

yo skillz is shit--da only way u born 2 spit--unless u wuz re-incarnated.........
yo damn lyrics is dodo,i call yo verse fubu,cuz the spit is outdated.........

^Opener Was Heated Fell Off Short Though 8/10

yo shit is special ed--my rhymes roc u back 2 bed--teach u a lesson........
whipp him back 2 bitch slapped-make him cry like ushers track--sayin his confession...

^Nice Punchline' .. Very Creative!' ... 8/10

since when them garff brooks rhymes??am i watsing my verses or my time--wit this shit......
he out of bounds put him back in line,5-0 is mine-born2spitt change it 2 another brad2spitt.........

^Wasnt Really Feelin Your Closer Though Could Have Improved A Bit' On It.. 7/10

But' .....!! Choppa Takes This.. By Far' ...!!!!

Other Catt: Evelate' ..!!!

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