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03-16-04, 11:24 AM | #1 | |||||||
This is my first post!
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First time for everything...
IP: 6B93 85D8
this is my first rhyme I have ever written, so go on and tear it apart.
-cantley _________________ VOICE you know I'm sick of all these fuckin' battlers reppin' up the same message// and I'm even more annoyed of the criticism that they're spittin' back in suggestion// but here's the real question, it will keep you guessin'// why should you be dissin' based on sexual preference?// callin' fellow people queer, it's time to teach you a lesson// if you choose your words wisely they can be a blessin'// to discriminate teaches hate, which causes more problems for these streets to intake// it's like a viscious cycle, take a look around you// people crying out, don't add to the problem// what exactly can you tell me are you trying to prove?//you are what you feel and you live how you choose//the power to rebuild, teach, praise or destory// translated through your words//yeah it's all in your voice. |
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03-18-04, 05:59 AM | #2 | ||||
....Trunks R 4 Bodies....
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IP: C1DA C961
IT was pretty good for a first time spitter!
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