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Old 03-16-04, 11:24 AM   #1
cantley
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this is my first rhyme I have ever written, so go on and tear it apart.

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you know I'm sick of all these fuckin' battlers reppin' up the same message//
and I'm even more annoyed of the criticism that they're spittin' back in suggestion// but here's the real question, it will keep you guessin'// why should you be dissin' based on sexual preference?// callin' fellow people queer, it's time to teach you a lesson// if you choose your words wisely they can be a blessin'// to discriminate teaches hate, which causes more problems for these streets to intake// it's like a viscious cycle, take a look around you// people crying out, don't add to the problem// what exactly can you tell me are you trying to prove?//you are what you feel and you live how you choose//the power to rebuild, teach, praise or destory// translated through your words//yeah it's all in your voice.
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Old 03-18-04, 05:59 AM   #2
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IT was pretty good for a first time spitter!
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