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Old 04-24-04, 12:48 PM   #1
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Rhyme Scheme?

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?Yo Can Somone Give Me Advise On Rhyme Scheme Coz Im Confusied On Dis Topic!?
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Old 04-24-04, 02:07 PM   #2
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what about it? words at the end of a line should rhyme... anything more is nice, but not necessary.
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Old 04-24-04, 02:58 PM   #3
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yeah but it is nessary if you wonna make a more complexe rhyme...dat wot im lookin' for somone to tutor me bout makin' my ryhme scheme more advance...thanks anyways..pz
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Old 04-24-04, 03:03 PM   #4
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Why though.. I mean I don't worry about rhyme scheme.. if I find a nice rhyme to multi, I do that.. I think a nice one is something like:

xxxxA xxxxB
xxxxA...
... xxxxB
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What I do Is I think of a good punch. Then I take the last couple of words and try to rhyme them wit somethin. Then I use the new words to come up with a setup line......

*Example from a closed battle against Flow Intelligent*
I Rape And Extort..........the shit he takes is what he Makes In His Shorts//
This cat's swearin he's street...... from somewhere Upstate In New York//

First I came up with he was from upstate New York cause he thought he was hard by puttin Rochester aka The ROC like it was hard or some shit......

Then I started thinkin of rhymes with Upstate In New York. I came up with Rape And Extort and Makes In His Shorts........ easy enough to come up with the set up from that...........once again the end product was........

I Rape And Extort..........the shit he takes is what he Makes In His Shorts//
This cat's swearin he's street...... from somewhere Upstate In New York//

I hope this helps you out........... keep on elevatin.........
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^^^cheers bro dat helpful....thanks alot...write dis in trorials....pz
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what about it? words at the end of a line should rhyme... anything more is nice, but not necessary.


exactly
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