u talk shit like i drop hits/
u look like somethin off mad tv, but u remind me of a cow that just caught mad cow disease/
u rap like a mix of fresh prince and the village boys, the only difference is u use bigger and better gay sex toyz/
whats up wit ya, my raps got u bent, sorry buba, i dont like ya shrimp,go back home cause ya rips sound like something that was left in the washin machine to long on rince/
when u here me spit, ya know to mover cause my freestyle is like that thing they called the big boom, whats up forest, ya just gonna run, ya scared the king of rap gonna beet ya wit his gun?/
must be, cause ya startin to shiva, ya see my raps fly from the barrel as i put a lil presure on that trigga/
so go ahead and show us what ya got, be sure not to get caught starin down the black tube on the end of my glauc/
u standin on home plate and just got hit, but u fall like uve been rattlesnake bit

lil skip

its ur turn vc, throw what i ceatch, ima rap yo ass to death

lil skip

can anybody plz give me some opinions, straight up. i need ur vote
lil skip

he dropped out hes a BITCH hha what a queer lil; skippy won

what are you doing? u bitched out your other battle with me how u think i got my win?? streetsweepa shut your ass up unless you know the whole thing... he bitched out the first battle with me. why the hell u make another one i didnt agree to this shit twice.nah fuck it imma flow ....haha

lil skip uno,y dos battles you came to lose a second time/
how u gon battle when you aint even makin complete rhymes/
distraught i get you niggas taught like i was ur english teacher/(referring to english for rhymes)
couldnt teach me the word,in multi language if you was a hebrew preacher/
u aint in the game,you 3rd string,go shit ya ass on the bleachers/
keep fuckin with my ass ,ill x that ass like a aol buddy list feature/
you can spit all you want and still catch that "L"/
get u screamin high notes over this lost patti labelle/
im the principal,of rap high school and imma bout to get u expelled/
im like ..i can tell u "S.O.L." ,oh well .i got you,uppin my levels to excell/
internal rhymes i get you with mind games my message is sublime/
slant rhymes like T.H.U.G. ill get you runnin vigilante ,stay on the grind/tony hawk underground,run from cops and grinding on rails)
im no fool,i doin my dues,i think it time for you to go back to school/
gives you basic rapping rules,cuz battle me like youa re now an ill smoke you like you was a pack of kools/
you aint even on my level,ur name shames me lil skip,you get the flip,u is shit to me thus far/
i how murdering this cat and all i did was a elementary level of 16 bars???/

done....fake ass emcees smh.

correction lil' skip you get the step ya game up vote of the month nothin you said ryhmed you had no ryhme schyme that shit you wrote was ass you just took a L if i could i would vote for Vc cause he killed you damn

V-City Bitch

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1-1

Siz vs Va 5-0 k.o
Siz Vs Da0-5k.o

imma win till i cant no more

~LYRICAL LEADERS~

~Lyrical Leaders~

~Lyrical Leaders~

~Head Lyrical Leader - StreetSweepa ~
~2nd Head Lyrical Leader- NoLost4Rhymes ~
~Lyrical Leader - Young Siz ~
~Lyrical Leader - Murderous Mask ~
~Lyrical Leader - M.F.P. ~

yo make this a real battle. i want this to be on my stats forreal

breakdown for lil'skip:

flow: really long bars without any use of mutlis or nothing to help out the flow nothing here 3/10

volcab:alright use pretty basic though 6/10

punches:some nice lines the best part of your verse, "u rap like a mix of fresh prince and the village boys, the only difference is u use bigger and better gay sex toyz/" best line 6/10

overall:15/30 some worked needed before you can really be a contender on this board

breakdown for VC:

flow:solid nice use of multis in the end bars to tighten that flow 8/10

volcab:good use not as good as i've read in verses of yours but alright 6/10

punches:best line,"u aint in the game,you 3rd string,go shit ya ass on the bleachers/" you had a nice amount of them again alittle less then i've since you post but 6/10

overall:20/30 great verse

vote--the punches and multis are what edge this battle apart vs gets my vote, why don't you try and battle someone more then one of these newbies

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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

alright...this went striaght to vc cuz seriously..his rhymes made sence..his rhymes wern't rhymes people use much..and he had punch..man u can't rhyme..ur weaker then a newbie...

hey..can u guys vote on my battle..cuz i want to get it over wit..thanx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119080

vc got this hiz structure waz off buf flow waz good and had solid punchz that connected pretty good battle verse
best lines
couldnt teach me the word,in multi language if you was a hebrew preacher/
u aint in the game,you 3rd string,go shit ya ass on the bleachers/

skip u had a better structure just workin on makin ur punchz hit hard and work on openin up an closin the battlez better that shti get u votez just for openrz and closerz


vote/vc

yoo! all it needs is twoo more votes people!!! come one vote this abttle so i can get this shit over wth. i'll vote on your battle honestly.

Breakdown:
Punches: Vc
Metas: Neither
Multies: Neither
Wordplay: Neither
Flow: Vc
Disses: Vc

Overall-Vc Takes This One By Far.He Didnt Use Much Complexity In His Verse But He Did Have Better Punches & Disses.His Flow Was Better Than lil' skip's Too.Skip's Flow Was Choppy Because His Bars Were Uneven Or Some Didnt Rhyme Together


Vote-Vc

Return The Favor:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117770

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hey i just need ONE!!!!!1 vote that's all i need ...somebody please vote on this darn battle...........uppin for vote... i'll return the favor by viewing the battle you did. and i will vote fairly dont think cuz u vote for me i'll lean towards you but if you confident you won hit me up with my vote and i'll surely hit up yours.. directly aftterwards

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119690

breakdown for lil'skip:

flow: ...It was off i dont think you found your flow at all in this battle work on it
volcab: wow...dr.seuss is all i'm going to say about that
punches: We dont battle with pillows sorry...
overall:It was weak try and get a little more complex with some word play in that but other then that woah, it was wack sorry bra

breakdown for VC:

flow: It was on point it felt a lil forced to me but on point
volcab: Nothing truly special but just enough to beat out lil on it
punches: I was feelin some of them but nothing to great to quote sorry, but they came hard then lil skips so i'll give ya that
overall: it was nice some work couldn't been used to make it better but in this case it really wasn't needed

VOTE VC

note:i dunno if this vote counts or not cuz of my # of posts but i do know what i'm talkin about