ok DisasterPeice420 to spit first
verse due by tues nite, earlier if possible
10-15 lines
no crew votes
no hate d/r
may the best lyricist win

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Checcccccccccckin In!!!!!!!!!

Heres' Ma Verse'

Punk get Greedy Up In My Face,/
Spray You Like A Trigger Happy Bitch With A Can Of Mase,/
My Brain Is Straining Hard, Im At The End Of My Wits,/
Sometimes I Review My Words And Think Their Fuckin Shit,/
So Here I Am Now, Lacing Lyrics On This Track,/
Save Your Bullshit KingZ The Group Is Dead and on Its Back,/
Strugglin For Air, Bitch Nigga I Dont Fuckin Care,/
Ill Shove A Torch Up Your Ass and You Still Wont Have My Flare,/
Nothin Can Compare This Asian Rapper Is Fuckin Rare,/
KingZ Is As Asian As That French MuthaFucker Pierre,/
Ive Let It Out, The Strain Is Gone, My Sight Is Now Clear,/
Im Off Home Now My People To Play Sum F1 Career,/

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Girl when I finish with you….its gon’ be a disaster
I will ‘cure’ every line u ‘bit’…with a 'rattlesnake master'*

You think you gotta chance?…’Bitch Please’
Forget getting down on ‘ya knees’
Cos u suffering from ‘lyrical deficiency disease’

You think ya a hip hop honey? U aint ‘Trina’ 'disasterpiece'
you must be a real good actor… cos like ‘Missy’ u clinically obese

I aint sexist…its jus that rapping aint ya thing honey
Leave it to Lil Kim…you can cook n’ clean for money

You could sell ya body…who would buy it? don’t panic
I heard the US Navy looking for a ship the size of the ‘Titanic’

Girl you think ya doing ya thing on this site…with no regrets
jus remember, u wouldnt be able to ‘vote’….if it weren’t for the ‘suffragettes’*
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*rattlesnake master = a plant used to cure snake bites

*suffragettes = a womens rights groups

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uppin.............................................

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yo dont sleep on this ya'll, good battle disaster p

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A'ight...

Disasterpiece...you had some nice muties, but I didn't feel ya punches...they were played out somewhat, and in some lines, there wasn' even a diss...structure was a lil' bit off, which made the flow waver a bit...decent verse though...elevate...

5/10

Kingz...I felt ya punches dawg...the shit wit Lil' Kim was hot...and the obese line was tite too...your structure is tite (I use the same thing) and it flows nice...some punches were a lil' weak...the "bitch please" line was the main one, other than the deficiency line...overall nice verse...

7/10

Kingz...you forgot to poll...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117362

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First of all Props to both battlers for a nice match up. Lemme serve you the verdict. here we go.

DisasterPiece-You seemed to be lacking direct hits. And direct hits are integral to a battle. They were more like Shotgun shots from a distance, thier so broad it's bound to hit him and tear a chunk out of him. The save your bullshit shit kingz, the group is dead on its back line was nice though. I like the heart in that line. But a sniper will definately off you. It's all about the direct diss with precision and...

Kingz-had this. Kingz, i've said this because it seems to be happening a lot. One person either doesn't directly diss or barely does and the other directly disses. Plus i sense that you slowed down on her. But i'd watch out for something like that in a round two situation or a rematch, because in our battle she spit nicely. But you easily got the edge over her on this one though. A nice opener, and that's what its about. Keep my attention, keep me interested, you did that. The format you used makes one better analyze your lines, so that in itself is good. and the last two lines?! Very nice, very nice.

so Kingz gets my vote on this one. Props to both battlers.

Take a look at this battle
Maku JaiiLiin vs. DisasterPeice420

uppin............................................. ..

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im in the C.S. crew, so my votes not official, but kingz you got this. nice work pimpin'. disaster piece, you did good as well, but just barely fell short. i like your style. keep up the good work.

CRHYME SINDICATE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

SUPERVILLAIN THE KINGPIN

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher. I don't drive an Eclipse, they're chickmobiles.

QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE



"I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown




R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.

oh, also.......the word you were looking for kingz was "sufferages", as in the "womens sufferage movement". you still made your point though.

yeah, "sufferage", or "suffrage". i forgot the exact spelling of it. i hope this is helpful. one.

s.v.

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Quote:

Originally Posted by Nick Fletcher. I don't drive an Eclipse, they're chickmobiles.

QUESTION: Is it even possible to improve upon perfection???
ANSWER: CRHYME SINDICATE



"I remember this one time I thought I was wrong........but I was mistaken." -Unknown




R.I.P. Jonathan "ONE MAN BAND/TERUMOTO" Nigro. Goodbye brother. God bless the dead. One love.

DisasterPiece-You seemed to be lacking direct hits. And direct hits are integral to a battle. They were more like Shotgun shots from a distance, thier so broad it's bound to hit him and tear a chunk out of him. The save your bullshit shit kingz, the group is dead on its back line was nice though. I like the heart in that line. But a sniper will definately off you. It's all about the direct diss with precision and...

Kingz-had this. Kingz, i've said this because it seems to be happening a lot. One person either doesn't directly diss or barely does and the other directly disses. Plus i sense that you slowed down on her. But i'd watch out for something like that in a round two situation or a rematch, because in our battle she spit nicely. But you easily got the edge over her on this one though. A nice opener, and that's what its about. Keep my attention, keep me interested, you did that. The format you used makes one better analyze your lines, so that in itself is good. and the last two lines?! Very nice, very nice.

so Kingz gets my vote on this one. Props to both battlers

i agree totally wit what he sed.
Everythin kingz sed was more personal therefore more hard hittin'

Peace...tho

A-Cubed

uppin.............................................

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ok so i see this is yet anotha hot battle. Once again my girl Disasterpiece is unfortunately fallin' off.... it's no good. I mean after our battle I thought that this chcik had some hot keys but now I'm starting to wonder.......Kingz you did yo thang dogg and that shit was tight so my vote goes to you.

KiNgZ:Hot flow,hot lyrics,nice structure and hard punches
Disaster:tsk tsk tsk

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step up and get merked cuz i take care of bidness/ A killa without witness from the start to the finish/ you're fallin off like you came down with tha sickness/ cuz when you step to tha Phreak I'm gonna leave you dickless

HASTA LAVISTA MUTHAFUCKA!!!
A-1 Lyricists

Disasterpiece you got sum skills. You had a good flow and sum aight meta4's. But kingz murdered you on this one. Personals were on point. Good metaphores and funny as well. Good battle. My votes with kingz.

Repay the favour. we all need votes.
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117125

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