aight i gotta go in 20 min. so i'll spit first
10 line min.
post ya votes all of ya

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"SAY HELLO TO MY LITTLE FRIEND"

aight

wanna step to me ya bound to get defeated/
cuz i kill ya, bury ya, and leave ya rhymes deleted/
bitch ass nigga who da ya think ya are/
I break ya up, roll ya up, smoke ya lika chron cigar/
lil joe wants to be and mc/
well let me tell ya not when ya battle me/
cuz i'm comin wit da punches to leave ya breathless/
cuz truth be told/ ya really a girl not a dude/
but it be good homie cuz ya came and battled/
even though u knew you'd get mishandled/
but nobody on this site votes/
for what us mcs wrote/
so that's why i don't give a fuck if i sound like i choked/
so reply wit da shit you do/
cuz i be out, done wit, and through wit you/

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"SAY HELLO TO MY LITTLE FRIEND"

like a chron cigar/
bitch you smoke that shit to much/
ill eat yo rhymes up like you servin em for lunch/
my knowledge is super abundant/
your just an imprudent student/
only 15 years old/
like a boy scout cookies is what you sold/
you cant go against me/
im the illest mc/
you hoe ass from utah so you so country/
fuck a beat fuck if you talk shit about me/
little boy go run for your momy/

baller started off strong with a couple decent punches, but not very original. wtf is "mishandled" (you mean manhandled?).. and then from there it goes downhill. lil joe started off with a pretty poor line, and the flow ain't great. the punches are also really weak.. i'm not really feeling stuff like "you can't go against me, i'm the illest mc."

i give it to baller.

drop a vote on mine:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117350

good battle, liked both flow and punches were good, I gotta give this one to baller, cuz I liked his punches a little better. Joe step up on the punches and flow it a lil better and you will get better. Vote - Baller

http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...03&page=4&pp=15 hit that up plz I only need one more vote to put this kat away.

im votin for baller caz lil joe was jus too "lil" in this battle rhymes need elevatin fam

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

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IM PUSHIN AUDIO COCAINE

ok breakdown for ths newbie battle......
Opener - baller...nice opener...lil joe u need werk...
Flow - baller...i felt ya flow cuz most of ur lines werent stretched....lil joe almost allya shit was tretched...baller u also need to werk on not stretchin ya bars...
Punches - baller....u had sum nice punches compared to lil joe....both werk on personals to get better punches...
Personals - neither had ne personals werth a vote in this category...
Closer - baller...well lil joe u cant win a battle sayin shit that includes their mom...
Multi's - neither had better multi's...both werk on this category....
vote - baller....both yall keep elevatin n ull get better....
return the favor in my topical with nope
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118637

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

wanna step to me ya bound to get defeated/
cuz i kill ya, bury ya, and leave ya rhymes deleted/
Not bad, coulda been worded better
bitch ass nigga who da ya think ya are/
I break ya up, roll ya up, smoke ya lika chron cigar/
Ehh....
lil joe wants to be and mc/
well let me tell ya not when ya battle me/
Zzzz....
cuz i'm comin wit da punches to leave ya breathless/
cuz truth be told/ ya really a girl not a dude/
No punch or rhyme?
but it be good homie cuz ya came and battled/
even though u knew you'd get mishandled/
Try and word it a little better
but nobody on this site votes/
for what us mcs wrote/
so that's why i don't give a fuck if i sound like i choked/
You forgot who you're battlin......
so reply wit da shit you do/
cuz i be out, done wit, and through wit you/
Weak closer......


like a chron cigar/
bitch you smoke that shit to much/
ill eat yo rhymes up like you servin em for lunch/
Feeding? Booooo.........
my knowledge is super abundant/
your just an imprudent student/
Doesn't even rhyme.......
only 15 years old/
like a boy scout cookies is what you sold/
^^^ WTF??????
you cant go against me/
im the illest mc/
you hoe ass from utah so you so country/
fuck a beat fuck if you talk shit about me/
little boy go run for your momy/
Pretty weak closer too.....

Overall both verses were kinda weak. There were no personals, multis, decent wordplay, or extensive vocabulary. The only good punch came from Baller......

wanna step to me ya bound to get defeated/
cuz i kill ya, bury ya, and leave ya rhymes deleted/

....... so that's who I gotta vote for.

Vote: Baller

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Ok so, it was a purdy week battle on both sides...

Baller's shit is usually way better, but this stuff aint up to his usual standard yet still I give it to him... he had better punches, and better rhymes...

Best line from lil jo was
"my knowledge is super abundant/
your just an imprudent student/"

Best line from baller was
"wanna step to me ya bound to get defeated/
cuz i kill ya, bury ya, and leave ya rhymes deleted/"

weekest by lil jo
"you cant go against me/
im the illest mc/"

weekest by baller
"cuz i'm comin wit da punches to leave ya breathless/
cuz truth be told/ ya really a girl not a dude/"

Baller, u lost it there dude, the flow kinda broke, other than that you would have won outright anyways, your just better at this than lil jo...


VOTE HERE PLEASE
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118313