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and you called it topical so post ya Topic ill let you pick and you can pick the timelimit on it and and whether you want crew votes or not......

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aight due date is one hour after check in....
topic : Night of your life

check check goodluck dog

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Iight checkity check check it ...... Check ya self Be fore Yya WrEck Ya SelF

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ToPicAl : N i G h T O f M Y L I f E
Aight yo..

The Night of my life well it was more than just 1 night... \
It was a whole SuMMer and im a tell you about it aight.../ 1

My suMmEr consisted of 3 main things..My boys my weed and my drink...\
so much more shyt happened than my pen can ink.... /2

every morning id wake up and atleats one of my peoples would be around wit \
a L already lit... 3
wed smoke out and chyll around my crib and wait for the rest of the crew to come by wit sum shyt.... /

we stayed blunted and drunk never be caught sober...\
we stayed liek that till the summer was over... /4

Now i look back we was on some dumbshit...\
only 14 at the time and gettin blunted... /5

we was the youngbucks but we got our daps and respect..\
cuz the old heads saw we were down for whatever ready to snap sumones kneck../6

it was a fuckin summer that went in full circles blunt after blunt and bottle after\ ottles...\
youd never catch any of us strait wed always be wearin beer goggles/7

but we had a crew that could not be touched...\
we made ourselves known that if we were fucked wit youd be cracked like a dutch/8

spill out ya guts and leave em there for all too see...\
that thats what you get for fuckin with the "03"../("03s"our crew)9

But that was the night the night ill never forget....\
it was more than 1 night it was a summer that ill never regret!/ 10


Aight yo it was kinda weak but its a true storyy niga!

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I suck at topicals but ................. L.I. do you and tkae ya time i dont give a fuck bout time its all good if your stayin up late to do it ill give you credit for that so ima let you post whenever peace

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So much shit happened....

Whut to tell....

Got it...

Heres the night of my life...

STARTED OFF...

Got the werd at school my girls got a party...
Gettin trashed tonight maybe with bacardi...
Ready for any mishap thats comin my way...
Anticipatin adventure, barely got through the day...
Almost got into 3 fights wit a rival crew at school...
Pissed at me cuz i busted one their heads in wit a stool...
That was a week ago n i figured shit calmed down...
They was on our turf so i showed em how we roll uptown...(done reminiscin)
Tic toc the clock rocks till 2:30 and i bounce...
My ride home was hectic traffic came unannounced..
Got home, got a shower, now what to wear...
Wanted the pimp suit outfit, make all females stare...
Got it!, matchin valour outfit, brown n gold south pole...
Party started at 10, 9:30 came, finally time to roll...
Stoppin at the gas station to get stashed up on goods...
Didnt have a clue id get muddy running through the woods...
But thats later listen up while i tell you...
The night of my life, damn how it flew...

ARRIVED...

Bout time, im here, ready to get my mac down...
So many girls tonight, aint a reason to slack now...
Impressed many of them, at their first sight...
That doesnt win em tho, had to talk to em all night...
But party was inturupted early and i didnt get done...
Bout an hour into the party the night of my life begun...

TIPSY...

Havin shot for shot me n my boys gettin trashed...
Fifthteen minutes later the party was smashed...
Our rival crew happens to show up uninvited...
Couldnt see em comin, vision was shortsighted...
The creeped around the house, didnt know they were there...
Ended up bein ery man for himself, like playin a game of solitaire...
They bashed the windows in and the girls started screamin...
Knew it was real trouble when i saw a pistol gleamin...
Shots ring out, a bullet hits the sofa im sittin on...
Still fuckin trashed, im a little withdrawn...
But im on guard for anything so i jump behind the table...
Adrenalin rushin, like im livin a movie ud see on cable...

SHIT GOT WORSE...

My boys were down and injured but i knew theyd make it...
It was me they were after, not like they were here to take shit...
But they on my turf, home field advantage on my side...
So i creeped out a window and took em for a ride...
Got my nine ready and shit was bout to get busy...
Went into the woods, runnin so much im dizzy...
They bout 300 yards back and i start to think...
Where am i goin? Im tired. I need a drink...
Shit was gettin to my head, i needed to gain my mentality...
Think, need a plan, aint no way i can become a casualty...
Got it! ill have to lead em in the wrong direction...
I know these woods well enough section by section...
But i cant stay in here, ill get lost, its jsut too dark...
only 100 yards away, nows the time to make my mark...

BOUNCED OUTTA THE WOODS...

Now they still headin towards the woods im directly across of em...
The night was young, didnt have a clue whatd id become...
Got back to the hosue they have no clue that im here...
SHIT! outta the blue two cats fuckin appear...
Put a slug in ones chest he falls to the ground...
The other one jumps in shock, surprised by the sound...
I hit him in his head, BANG hes out, done...
Wonder if any others were here n had a gun...
Creep into the house, my peoples layin all ova the floor...
All been hit but nothin big, no wounds that hardcore...
They'd be fine, but i knew the rest were on their way...
Must have heard the gun shots that my nine had sprayed...

THEY ARRIVE...

Im prepared, loaded, and hiding...
Minds wondering, time for deciding...
Stick with my choice, ima fuck these cats up and that i understood...
Finish em all off, so i can be done wit this drama for good...
6 of em left, i got 8 bullets in my round...
Two shots can miss, 6 of em r bound...
They walk by me not even knowin im there...
It was time to roll so i said a lil prayer...
If i die im goin to heaven wit my dead father...
But if i dont ill have bitches gone n i wont be bothered...
Hop out da closet, 4 shots i rang out...
3 bodys fall, 3 are left, and 1 shouts...
Hit one more, 3 shots left, 2 heads to go...
I know i got this, home team wins fo sho...
I get one more in the chest stuck wit 2 bullets left...
Last one tood there, prolly wishin they came for theft...
It was the leader of their crew, savin the best for last...
See what happens wen people get me started on my past?...

BANG BANG BANG

werd...

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Damn....L.I. Spit Mad Shit...

Break'N It Down..

Nope: 6/10
Nice Topical Spit, Got The Feeling Just Outta Those Short Bars You Spit. Feeling Da Word Play and Flow. Keep Elevating and Stay Dope.

L.I.: 8/10
Your Topical Was Nice. Surprised Me Kid. Spit A Fucking Lot Of Lyrics Haha...Flow Was Consistent and The Feeling Threw This Thing Was Nice...Keep Dropping Hot Shit Like Dis..

Vote - L.I.

~R~

uppin.............................................

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Crhyme Sindicate

uppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppppp

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A'ight, here's tha breakdown...

Nope:
You had some nice stuff...but I felt that you strayed the topic too much...it was supposed to be about a night of your life, not a summer...but all of your libnes rhymed, and you told a story...nice work...

7/10

L.I.
Holy shit...I would have to say that this was a damn nice piece of work...everythin' has so much detail, and everythin' is on topic...lines ryhmed wit some nice vocab...and I liked this shit fo sho...

9/10

Vote- L.I

No hate, plz hit up these...thx...

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117362

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=117367

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i'll vote.. just thought it was supposed to be 30 line max?

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uppin 4 votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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uppin.........drop a link n ill return the favor!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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