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Re$TricTed 5 100.00%
Lyrical MC 0 0%
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Old 04-04-04, 04:36 PM   #1
Restricted
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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From: Pittsburgh, PA
Re$tricted Vs. Lyrical MC (Topical)

IP: 2E7E 4D00

Aight Check Dis..

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Topic: Something That Happened To You That Keeps Reoccuring In Your Mind

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Old 04-04-04, 04:42 PM   #2
HeXen
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From: A Place Were You Could Never Dream To Be..
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yo yo yo...checkin dawg....
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Old 04-04-04, 05:01 PM   #3
HeXen
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From: A Place Were You Could Never Dream To Be..
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Something That Happened To You That Keeps Occuring In Your Mind"

Aight.....

That Lonley Vision In My Mind Repeditive,
An Insion Of The Mind Represensitive,
Of A Solam Soal Cut Like A Scar,
Singled Out But Twinkles Like A star,
That Thought In My Mind Consistently Reminding,
Of That Day Posistenly There Never Resining,
That Picture Fixed In Mind For Iternaty,
A Fixture In My Brain Forever Sertancy,
That Balde Setherd Into The Corps Of My Mother,
As I Stood In The Shade Of Death As It were Brother,
Un-Able To Protect Held Hostage By The Dark,
As I Refleted Dat Thought I Snap And Bark,
That Vision Forever There Like It Was Indented,
The Insion Of The Blade Now Looks Resented,
This Gods Way To Punhish My SinFull Inbarkment,
Is He Lurishin' At This Moment His Mind Content??
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Old 04-04-04, 05:45 PM   #4
Restricted
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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From: Pittsburgh, PA
Aight....Aiyo...

IP: A6AC 0B1C


AK’s and M16’s shooting...car burns out and takes off..

Hit the ground running as I hear the bullets fly past my head, get up running for my life in dread. /1
Running threw back yards, over fences, and across streets…looking around while trying to stay balanced on my feet /.2
I look to my side and I only see 2 homies with me..I knew I shouldn’t have left with this nine milameter empty /3
Everything seems to be fine so I stop to take a breath..see blood on my clothes, mind flashes pictures of death /4
Realizing the blood isn’t mine, see both my playaz takin out der nines..look up and I see the hummer run the stop sign../5.
The hummer comes back and shoots at us another time..running the direction we came from while my homies droppin dimes /6
Da hood is wokin up but we know they won’t come out..lookin out der windows but too scared to open da door and shout /7
I trip and fall and I look back too see what I tripped on...its my dawg Lyrical MC laying lifeless and cold…shit man he gone. /8
I see my playaz running but I can’t get up damn I’m in shock..damn them hatin playaz coming but no clip in dis glock /9
All alone and no playaz to have my back..I’ma fight these bitches and show dem who got da biggest ball sack /10
3 against 1..man dawg you miswell label dis DOOM...swinging and kicking but I get the glock to my jaw..BOOM!! /11
---------------Wakes up with heavy breathing---------------

Sitting up in my bed drenched with sweet and tears..its been a year but its almost like it happened yesterday everythings so clear /12
I still remember da look on my dawgs face, distorted and bloody, and in his fist that Uzi was still tightly embraced/13
I got a scar under my jaw where the bullet went into my skull..was pronounced dead soon as the paramedics picked me up after da brawl /14
It only took one shot to make my ass fall..I laid there convulsing, after that, motionless completely dull /15
Time of death was 2:15 a.m. on April 24th two thousand and three...I was da top dawg, number one sella in da rap industry /15
But as you see..I’m still alive and kicking...hell beant on revenge is how dis playa be stickin.../16
I got da gears in my head tickin…coming up with a master plan to get them bitches straight trippen /17
Should I? Be the man to put these bitches to rest, permantly being burried in the dirt /18
Or should I? Keep living my life the way I do..constantly reminded of my dawg getting burnt /19
I can’t take it..I’ma fuckin kill every single one off dem bitches..leavin der relatives heart broken and hurt /20
They’re gonna feel the pain that I feel and the shit that I have the deal with every day of my life /21
Have had thoughts about commiting sucide..but couldn’t do it ..not even slitting my wrists wita knife /22
Couseling nor rehab worked ..I lost everything..my job.. even my two kids and my beautiful wife /23
I can’t take it anymore..I am gonna put and a end to this with three slugs to all three of dem playaz chest /24
Two Mac 10’s and M16 and a automatic nine..hopefully everything goes right if not..I hope I will be saved by this bullest proof vest /25

---Sounds of guns being loaded and cocked and then he leaves to put an end to this-----

I gotta enough gun power behind me to produce a bomb attack..I could kill every motherfuckin pussy up in Iraq /26
I’ma one man army..shit can’t harm me..god gave me another chance to kill all you niggaz….mom I’m sorry /27
I wanna thank you for all you’ve giving me and for all the years of doing my dirty laundry /28
I gotta do this for myself, my dawg Lyrical MC, and for respect up in da hood /29
If I could I would..blow there hole crew up with a atomic bomb and end it now and for good /30
This bags getting heavy, I’ma throw it in the bed and hot wire this 4x4 chevy /31
Err...another crime just commited ..it don’t matter cause grand theft auto will only add 5 years to my conviction /32
You all have been living it up..da money, hoes, nice cars, and weed…before I kill deez motherfuckers I’ma get high on oxy’s and speed /33
Got the need, to stab you, shoot you till my glock runs out of bullets and then watch you suffer and bleed /34
Shit man I’m here..5th Street...I’ma shut dis car off and take it from here on my feet /35

--------Grabs bag and then heads into the crackhouse------

I enter with silence and steath...sneakin in da back while strappin on dis bullet proof on to provise my health /36
Shit man I hear talking.. almost there..my adrenaline is pumping dawg…hopefully none of these playaz prepared /37
I bust in the door and I start shooting bullets outta my M16...all dem bitches get up with gats…looks like all together they got fifteen /38
I shot on in da arm and another in his right side..stand up and shoot while I scream “BITCH NOW WHOZ DOWN TO RIDE!!” /39
Two playaz drop with bullets to there head and chest..outta ammo for the M16 so I grab my Mac 10’s to do the rest /40
Automatic gats is what I am packin in my bag…single shot pistols ain’t shit but I guess the work for deez fags /41
Mac 10’s going off…I hear a bitch scream as another drops to da the floor..damn man now I am only left with this whore /42
Three bitches dead and only one more playa to kill..fuck it..I’ma have fun with this one and hang his body on St. Andrews Hill /43
Chasing this playa down as he runs in retreat..come here bitch so I can slice ya ass down to bones and meat /44
Damn finally caught dat playa as it was an hour chase..gave him a kick to the kidney and 10 punches to his face /45
Playa my heart bleeds for you but you will get no remorse..5 shots to dat bitches head..time to hang his corpse /46

---Now we on St. Andrews Hill and the body is hung--------

Covered in blood and I am shaken thinking what am I gonna do now...I get down on my knees and prepare to take a vowe /47
Please god I am coming ..please take my soul…I commited this bloodshead in good reason...here I come god..watch how in my head I leave a hole /48
-----Puts the nine in mouth and pulls the trigger----------


Aight that’s my topical spit….

Holla Atcha Boi!

~R~
 
Old 04-04-04, 06:04 PM   #5
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Damn
i think Re$TricTed got this battle...
Lyrical MC if you would have spat more you woulda had a chance....u had to get in depth n 10 lines wont do that for you in a topical battle....ya vocab was nice....so was ya flow
Re$TricTed got this wit how he presented it...his structure of telling the story had me in the story as if i were the guy doin that shit...u no its pure wen it makes the reader do that....his flow werked....nice rhymes....
v/Re$TricTed
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Old 04-04-04, 06:40 PM   #6
G Deuce
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I'll have to agree with L.I. on this one. His flow matched with the storyline was veryhard to beat. I liked the way R switch time during the rap. Tight flow.

Lyrical MC, yours was tight too but its hard to compare yours to his, since he told the story to the point you could actually know whats happening. Tight flow though L.

v - R
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Old 04-04-04, 07:02 PM   #7
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nice book restricted, you and stephen king should hang out.
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Old 04-04-04, 07:48 PM   #8
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restriceted won cuz of a longer verse good verse doe mc but shouldve been longer
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Old 04-04-04, 07:50 PM   #9
Restricted
DaTrus Is A Bitch!
 
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From: Pittsburgh, PA
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LoL At Vango...Love The Smart Ass Comments...

But My Spit Should Be Long Because Its A Topical..

Love The Feedback Though...

Uppin Dis..

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Old 04-04-04, 08:02 PM   #10
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From: colorado
IP: B18A 27B8

*takes off glasses, rubs eyes*

whew, ok, now that im done READING!!! its true, Restricted won because of how in depth he went, MC, u would have had a chance if you would have kept writing, but keep at it MC.

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Old 04-04-04, 09:03 PM   #11
puertoricanelly
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restricted KILLED lyrical MC in this battle. his rhymes were clean and flowed well.

lyrical ur stuff was aight but it was off . ur words were to misunderstood if you can get what im sayin. plus u didnt Hit as hard as Res did.you should always hit ur hardest specially when u spit first'

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