Yo all tell me what you think i been rhyming for a while, but it's some different shit... kinda sloppy shit.
here it is...

Bustin through with clarity
Coming through with honesty
Atoning for all the falcities
That this game gives you
P's the new visionary
Gonna name all the fictionary's
Having you check in dictionary's
Yall gonna hear my voice
Yo, I'm bringing diction
the truest non fiction
the new declaration
forever omniscient
p's mind lithographing
n mind liquidating
converting pop corn fans
to mr. JP fans
yo i'm franchising altering and evolving
To a game that needs changing
rearranging and adjusting.

what yall think?

here's another little verse

I create sometimes hate, and predict weak mc's fate
I love to detract discredit and diminish
I want the crown and they ready to relinquish
This shits gonna perforate puncture and penetrate
Cause I'm wipping a clean sleight
N i control my own fate
I control my own fate.

Ya dig? let me know... we gotta change up the game yall, we gotta get smart verses...n play with words.