10-15 linez
no crew votez

and u better not be another no show
check in

why dont u spit 1st so i know u wont be a no show

im here spit i told u that my only request was u spit first.

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ite better not make me waist my time im goin

how u gonna come at me wit a name like renewer/
ive been doin this since u wore drawz wit turtlez hoppin out the sewer/

didnt u read the title merk 101/
meanz im comin wit 2 dirty birdz and aint talkin bout Mike Vick an Warrick Dunn/

or grab the hornet an sting u like elden campbell/
dont make me expose u for a fag like picturez of u wit tevin campbell/

bulletz leavin u wit migranez u cant relieve wit acetaminophen/
family left to greave since u aint believe till yo spirit seen yo brainz leakin like meltin ice cream/

so dont play tuff an act like tom cruise in the last samurai/
u callin me 007 cause when im behind the trigga i got a goldeye/
to leave ya face split like u waz in vanilla sky/


fuck it only feal like doin 11 holla back

think about ya future and whats goin happen, when when uv realise ur shit at rappin/

leaving u gasping like a asmatic four eyed neak, u know thats what u are acting like ur from the street/

seems to me u watch to many films u struggle to handle real life, u should end it slit ya wrists here use my samurai as a knife/

ur talents not there like the weapons in iraq, about time they gave up and realised that ur crap/

its a matter of a fact that u are jealous of the children who, micheal jakson stuck his dick into, thats the kinda shit that u wud of enjoyed to have been through/

sick freak on internet perving over kids lyin asleep in there bed, u and jackson both lost it in the head/

Im out Fed's on there way i just left u feeling woozie, spray lyrics at u like bullets from an oozie/

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^^ wtf uppin for votez leave a link an ill hit yourz up

Got To Give This Shit To The "Friendly Ghost" Lmfao Just Fucking With You Once Again' ...

Punches: Ghost' They Were Alright
Structure: Ghost' Was Cool
WordPlay: Neither' Wasnt Feelin Either Of Em'
Vocab: Neither' ......
Multies: Neither....
Creativity: Neither - - - Wasnt Happenin
Character: Neither - - -

Vote: Ghost

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uppin but damn no creativity?

You Had Some Creativity But I Just Wasnt Really Feeling It Playa!!!!!!! Your Safe Though' ...

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uppin stop sleapin if u view it vote an leave ur shit an ill vote on it

uppin vote peepz

aight aight check it....

this battle i really wasnt feelin...it was off to a good start then you started to go off the road ya feel....
well anyways like DP said you guys were pretty even except ghost was kinda better...well return da favor aight,....ya need to elevate

vote=ghost

uppin for more votez ^^ i hit that up along time ago

I'm givin this vote to renewer, I think you were both real tight tho... but i just seemed to feel renewers style and "beet" more when i was readin through it...

However you both had some great lines... this was a toughy to decide but... I think overall I prefered renewers spit...

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe