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lk63 3 100.00%
guyver4mk 0 0%
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Old 03-14-04, 04:00 PM   #1
guyver4mk
Light Weight
 
From: MK
Guyver4mk vs lk63

IP: D18D EF99

Yo, you said ya wanted to battle.
so here goes...
No dr/ no cv's/ no hv's/
Hit 'em up Ik63!
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Old 03-14-04, 04:31 PM   #2
guyver4mk
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From: MK
IP: D18D EF99

I been told my rhymes are too weak and I don't know how to peak my shit/
So I'ma take my old record an seep it dry to defeat it/
Normally I would've taken the shit you spit and ripped the shit outa it/
But I thought to save myself the bother, I'd diffuse some of me on the scale of ricter/
I'm simply just a lyrical depicter, a crude pain inflicter/
On ya shoulder like the assasins that are quick ta hit ya/
Your pussy ass punches ain't nothin but lunches to me/
I eat 'em up and coinsedently, I learn from them an then count to three/
Then poetically and indecently, I try make myself better for you to agree/
That you ain't nothin when compared to me/
Ya structures weak and ya rhymes don't flow/
Usually you spit ya shit too slow, an without ya halo there to glow, you got nowhere to go/
I'ma make you stuck in the place called Limbo, cos you can't go toe ta toe with someone on top of tha show/
I'm spittin jus ta let ya know, Keep goin the way ur goin and I'll cut off ya angela davis afro/
an sell it on the black market to some broke ass ho's, that ya try ta pimp/
But you jus end up with a limp, cos they made fun of ya shrimp/
I'm done with this now so take a hold of ya gimp/
Cos in the end, if ya spit some weak shit all its gona do is stint/
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Old 03-14-04, 04:50 PM   #3
lk63
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From: Africa
IP: 77FF 49BB

Yo I am a rip this 4mk apart, limb by limb,\\
He’s HIV positive, that he’s gonna win,//
I’ll have u climbing out the Walls, broken Jaw and All\\
In this game, I start the kick off, Right in ur Balls,\\
Oh shit I must of missed, NO theirs just nothing their at All//
4mk, how can u get off with another man, and call it “Fun”\\
If u had to fart, u’d have the room covered in Cum //
These rhymes are Deadly, Heavily armed and Ready\\ I simply turn this Wannebe Pussy into Chopsui// Don’t push Me, Mk ur defenses can’t withhold Me\\
Ur rhymes r weak and Boring, ur like the “Never Ending Story”\\
Ur punches have no Meaning, ur Bitching \\Like a pregnant bitch barefoot in the Kitchen\\ Ur rhymes have lost me worse then “Pulp Fiction\\
If u really wanna win, then this is not the place to Be\\
U’ll get ripped apart with my “Jack the Ripper” Specialty//
Got the killa mentality, an Emcee by trade// U’ll get brains when ur Forty and then finally get laid// I’m afraid that the only time u shine is on a Gay March Day\\
Ur skills phony, fake like a toupee, U being an MC is like a midget joining the NBA//
Ur trying to give punches, and failing with bitch Slaps\\
Closest u’ll get to being hot is if u get burnt by Candle Wax//
Crash// ur rhymes r Trash, I’ma finish u off with One Hundred and 63 Stabs//
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Old 03-14-04, 04:53 PM   #4
guyver4mk
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From: MK
IP: D18D EF99

lol thanks for the new shit hole ya tore me.

Uppin!
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Old 03-14-04, 05:05 PM   #5
guyver4mk
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From: MK
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UUUUUUPPPPPPPIIIIIIIIIINNNNNNNNNNN!!! for some goddamn votes!
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Old 03-14-04, 05:17 PM   #6
Crossword
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From: cNY
IP: 06D4 9403

Alright now... Here it is...guyver, i have to say nice battle to ya from ours. But on to this one. I see you lengthened your lines up a bit, but your punches didnt hit to hard. You spoke to down on yourself. Keep your aiming on him, unless you use something about yourself to punchem. You have too simple shit in there, no complexity at all. Try and think more into a rhyme, instead of using over used lines and other weak stuff.

lk, weakest verse i have seen you spit, usually you come punch filled, but this wasnt one of your greatest. You had some harder hitting punches then guyver, but they were weak. A little more complexity then him... Not by much though. The only thing i see you need work on is that you sometimes put the //'s after a word that doesnt rhyme the line before it. A little confusing, try and structure a little more.

Overall, i was feeling both ya'll flows the same... Not too good though. lk took the punches and metas. Nothing else in this battle to mention. No personals.

V/ lk
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Old 03-16-04, 07:16 PM   #7
lk63
Flyweight
 
From: Africa
IP: 77FF 49BB

comon lets close this battle, vote, vote
thanx 4 votes so far
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Old 03-18-04, 04:38 PM   #8
lk63
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From: Africa
IP: 77FF 49BB

comon lets close this battle, vote, vote
thanx 4 votes so far
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Old 03-21-04, 04:28 PM   #9
lk63
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From: Africa
IP: 77FF 49BB

comon lets close this battle, vote, vote
thanx 4 votes so far
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Old 03-21-04, 05:30 PM   #10
double c
New to RB
 
From: borders of south london
IP: 898A F4DE

this was close, i thought lk had better punces the personals were dope, but i thought guyver used better vocab. but he did come weaker so i gota give it to lk
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Old 03-24-04, 01:26 PM   #11
lk63
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From: Africa
IP: 77FF 49BB

comon lets close this battle, vote, vote
thanx 4 votes so far
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Old 03-24-04, 02:24 PM   #12
Razer
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From: South London, UK
IP: 22ED 1BB0

Yo LK used pretty basic vocabulary if im being honest But Did Hit Guyver With The Personals. Guyver Just Wasnt Good Enough For LK. I Especially liked this line from LK
Ur rhymes r weak and Boring, ur like the “Never Ending Story”\\ so my vote goes for LK. Pe@ce
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Old 03-24-04, 03:20 PM   #13
EyeDEA
Drop of Genius
 
IP: E3CA 7CA2

ayo gyver you wanna battle me if so post back on this bitch!!!!


iight den
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Old 04-09-04, 09:09 PM   #14
lk63
Flyweight
 
From: Africa
IP: 77FF 49BB

yo could we pls get some more votes on this battle
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Old 04-09-04, 09:19 PM   #15
Shaime
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From: I'm in Augusta Ga. now reppin that mighty NO uptown boy
IP: 4E74 9DB6

It was an overall weak battle with lk starting off like it was gonna be a complete demoralization then just went off and lost his mind with no kinda structure in the rhymes but seeing as guyva was just rappin and not battling it goes to lk
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