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retired.
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work in progress
IP: 75F5 BDD1
ok.. so this is like half rap, half poetic i guess. basically i have the beginings of a piece (or several), just want some feedback. i dont care if you dont like what it says, basically just fuck off
![]() How to squeeze each drop of my existence into words like how can they capture thoughts caught on the wings of birds The god of my own religion, I find strength in the divinity within To divorce myself from I is the one and ultimate sin With each passing moment, leaving our real selves buried Amidst false epiphanies, gold from Tiphany’s - methods varied but end the same, false images married and false burdens carried with a deep breath we march on, leaving the soul’s criticism parried please of insanity ring out when I view visions of humanity Tears well in my mind’s eyes, saline streams emptying into my adrenaline dreams Mixed with the sweat of efforts passed and the blood of failures amassed All mix and form my soul’s ocean, my passion and emotion Driving my every forward motion, fueling my life’s devotion so keep in mind its not done, not sure 100% what im doing, just sort of spilling mind on paper
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