Rules is no crew votes.
No Recycling
10-20 bars.

imma spit first

Countree Jay won't know fame
till he seen atticus wit the neck chain tanks
Hold my pain?
out of the question
burdens heavy like crowns on kids in high ranks
You country cheif?
I'm a mix between a miner and a dentist
cuz I'm known to steal golden teeth
Watch your 'grill' from the 'kitchen' as I 'pan cake' 'meat'
U come wit 'slow, greasy' bitch flow
Y u need hamburger helper to eat beef in small pieces
While ya style is as soft as that boy on in pulsbury dough
Its so crazy how rusty this is
but I don't know what I'm doin
yet and still I'm workin these kids

damn that shit is corney...

Is this kid really comin' at Jay? Homie you got nerve/
You can replace Omarian in B2K, right after you get served/
So like Flip says, it's game over, homie U can't win/
Now you drownin' cause you decided to sink instead of swim/
Put me to the test, I passed like I stole the answers from the teacher/
And for me it's a happy endin' like I saw in a movie at the theatre./
I'm the Protaginist, Goin' through changes, but victorious in the end./
When they hear the bad guys got defeated they know Jay's at it again./
This is my title, i'll be like The Rock, and lay the Smack Down,
You'd think I played ball, Cause when i post up, I got you backed down./
My lyrical style like a seizure, I be givin' cats fits,/
Now that you failed as an M.C. maybe you should call it quits./


Just a lil' sometin', Nice battle homie

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nap... this is not my forte cuz... but good battle tho

Jay takes this one with easy,nice structure punches..basically all categories..
just elevate atticus, all u need is practice man

peace

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My Testimony

My Homie Jay, thrashed and laughed. Jay won and all cat. and didnt even seem he was tryin.

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Grim

tryin' to get this shit done wit, someone needs to come and vote on this shit, so i can keep shit goin'

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Uppin' 4 votes. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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Uppin' 4 votes. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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I give this battle too Jay, he had good flow multis and punches.. good battle bud, Atticus just keep at it man, you will improve. vote - Jay

hit this up plz .... I need one more vote to put this kat away! http://community.rapbattles.com/sho...03&page=4&pp=15

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

Jay had this from the first bar, it was a good punch and he packed some other real good ones in there. Pretty good flow, not stretching out the rhymes or anything.

Atticus, keep practicing (sounds wierd coming from me a newb ). Your disses were kinda weak, not really aimed at Jay and seemed like you were aiming too high. Also, some of the lines were way too short, which kinda kills the flow

Bah.. keep forgetting. Vote on my battles:

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118488
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118472

Uppin' 4 votes. ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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Will someone fuckin' vote on this shit? Uppin'^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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