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Re'em 1 33.33%
lilrenegade89 2 66.67%
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Old 02-09-05, 07:23 PM   #1
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Old 02-09-05, 08:04 PM   #2
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Old 02-09-05, 08:08 PM   #3
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this nigga can't spit hes worthless watch as i dispurse this/ with a squeeze of my finger and the flinch of the wrist/ dis home boi is never missed/ but alwayz rembered/ ya his death date the twenty fif of december/ re eem his rap name has been re deemed as crap man/ fuck this shit stick his body in a trash can/ six four on the text score/ can wait for the next war/ re eme let me rip him thats what my tech's for/ dis bitch don't know this white boi be sellin supportin the feens/how else does a young buck bring truth to his dreams.
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Old 02-10-05, 12:22 AM   #4
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Old 02-10-05, 01:11 AM   #5
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LilRenegade, kid you're time already done came and went/
What the fuck you rap about when you're nuts havent even dropped yet?/
Even if you play your cards right, Re'em 'll still make you fold/
Lyrical Legends crew? Only cats that know you are 8 year olds/
Kid dont even try to call yourself a real player, even in Real Player/
No label's gonna sign you if your parents have to sign a con~scent waiver!?/
And dont talk about your bread, when your shit's already gone stale/
Your fan appeal is limited to AOL, cause you get on and WOAH... you got males/
Im at that ninth line, its ok cause this cat just got merked nine times/
Im Evander Holyfield and you've already been PUNCH LINED/
though You more like Mike Tyson cause your whole game be bitin'/
I'll make your Rhymin more extinct than the American wild Bison/
Dont think Im talkin figuratively when I call you son/
Ask your mom bout Re'em and why my dick was in her bubbleyum/
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Old 02-11-05, 12:16 PM   #6
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randomfillertexttofillcharacterlimitwowihopethisis enough
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Old 02-11-05, 01:26 PM   #7
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uppin for votes
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Old 02-11-05, 03:08 PM   #8
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Voted For: Re'em

Vote: re'em

ill explain winning vote in-depth

LilRenegade, kid you're time already done came and went/
What the fuck you rap about when you're nuts havent even dropped yet?/
lol, puberty punches never get old, funny ass shit, gd punch -8/10
Even if you play your cards right, Re'em 'll still make you fold/
Lyrical Legends crew? Only cats that know you are 8 year olds/
meh..ok filler, bad flow...-7/10
Kid dont even try to call yourself a real player, even in Real Player/
No label's gonna sign you if your parents have to sign a con~scent waiver!?/
first line of bar was poor....but second line was hella ill..-8.5/10
And dont talk about your bread, when your shit's already gone stale/
Your fan appeal is limited to AOL, cause you get on and WOAH... you got males/
lol, u on ifre past two bars...gd hard hittin funny punch -8.5/10
Im at that ninth line, its ok cause this cat just got merked nine times/
Im Evander Holyfield and you've already been PUNCH LINED/
ohh this playyed mman...not gd @ all...-6.5/10
though You more like Mike Tyson cause your whole game be bitin'/
I'll make your Rhymin more extinct than the American wild Bison/
gd concepts, original punches, decent -7.5/10
Dont think Im talkin figuratively when I call you son/
Ask your mom bout Re'em and why my dick was in her bubbleyum/
finished on a yo mama cuss sort of...u seem betta than this..-8/10

^^holla at The Jury and drop this link.......

Renegade..ill multi flow..but scrap the gangsta crap and spit some original shit that show of ur rapping skill, fic ur structure and work on your creativity and look for personals....keep battling!

RETURN THA FAVOUR!!!!!!!!!!!LINKS IN SIG!!!
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Old 02-17-05, 12:36 PM   #9
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Voted For: lilrenegade89

this nigga can't spit hes worthless watch as i dispurse this/ with a squeeze of my finger and the flinch of the wrist/ dis home boi is never missed/ but alwayz rembered/ ya his death date the twenty fif of december/ re eem his rap name has been re deemed as crap man/ fuck this shit stick his body in a trash can/ six four on the text score/ can wait for the next war/ re eme let me rip him thats what my tech's for/ dis bitch don't know this white boi be sellin supportin the feens/how else does a young buck bring truth to his dreams.

I'll tell you straight up that's a hell of alot of elevating for coming back in 2 days hot damn! All of that was fyia! keep it up Renegade.

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LilRenegade, kid you're time already done came and went/
What the fuck you rap about when you're nuts havent even dropped yet?/
Even if you play your cards right, Re'em 'll still make you fold/
Lyrical Legends crew? Only cats that know you are 8 year olds/
Kid dont even try to call yourself a real player, even in Real Player/
No label's gonna sign you if your parents have to sign a con~scent waiver!?/
And dont talk about your bread, when your shit's already gone stale/
Your fan appeal is limited to AOL, cause you get on and WOAH... you got males/
Im at that ninth line, its ok cause this cat just got merked nine times/
Im Evander Holyfield and you've already been PUNCH LINED/
though You more like Mike Tyson cause your whole game be bitin'/
I'll make your Rhymin more extinct than the American wild Bison/
Dont think Im talkin figuratively when I call you son/
Ask your mom bout Re'em and why my dick was in her bubbleyum/

This was very hot it was a very close battle i'll tell you that big up to the both of you very hot battle! but i'll tell you honestly i think renegade had a better flow from the both of you. Very good i'll tell you one thing in a team battle the both of you together would be unstopable! but for now in my eyes i think LilRenegade won this
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Old 02-19-05, 04:56 AM   #10
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Voted For: lilrenegade89

goood battle here,,,,,,,,,,,,,,by both....but ....rengade got this cuzza sum harder punches.......lolthis nigga can't spit hes worthless watch as i dispurse this/ with a squeeze of my finger and the flinch of the wrist/ dis home boi is never missed/ but alwayz rembered/ ya his death date the twenty fif of december/ re eem his rap name <<<<<<<< ahhahahahahahaha good shyt.....wack flwo and structure...but ur punches were dope....good shyt....yo return the favour in my below battles aiigt ...............holla
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Old 04-08-05, 12:56 AM   #11
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