ok kid how about 10-15 lines each
no d/r hate or crew votes
verses due by tomm at 12pm (lunchtime thats eastern canadian time by my watch) gl

I'll post up when u check in

Checkin in

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^alrdy voted on that mans good show tho....diablo where u at?

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yo lokie can u go to quickpunch vs marvolous and quickpunch vs big'n and vote on those to battles....thats all i need u to do....and state why u voted for the person u voted for....other wise it wont count.....so give good explanations...i will hit this battle up when both yall have droped....thanks man..pce

checkin in here yo lokie spit your first verse and il reply by tommorow night i dont have time right now so flip the shit ad i give u my word ill reply

^^^kk no problem I'll give yah an extension until tonight

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Gl Diablo here's mine

Diablo Stealing Names off of video games
But like 1st player shooters I got u right in my aim/
Got you in my sights, and kill a Diablo-Vice
We all know Lucifer ain’t got nothing on Jesus Christ/
Thinking u nice when ur really just mediocre
Have you looking jacked like shaggy and scoop at poker/
Like lighting rods and towers your catching a shocking
You remind me of copy cats that style u be mocking/
So BITCH KEEP TALKING
Cause your face my feet they meet, and I’m stomping/
You remind me of a tree branch the way I swing at you
You couldn’t execute me with the help of pi-ka-chu/
Stamped this Calgarian like rhino’s and bulls
Your lines are more overplayed then Nintendo consoles/

^14 lines

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ummmmm diablo u said u where going to post tonight looks like ur offline but this is wack I thought u was down for this I set it up and shit now u ain't even drop nothing. I'll give this battle tell 12(noon) tommorrow if u havn't dropped a verse then I'll get mods to close this. Piss me off wasting a good verse for nothing.

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Ok lokie you say that you spit a good verse
ive seen more lively things coming out the back of a herst
I hope you like your name, yeah its a good one lokie
but your girlfriend just told me your dicks like a chopstick and mine like a hogie
im kinda new to this online rappa shit
even so ill destroy any crap ya spit
after battling me on RB get the hell out
your lyrics are dead i also think your a sellout
your a fag and u know it so why do you hide it
like a wannabee gangster and the law u abide it
i hate the way you rap you got no flow or no structure
tell ur mom i got her cash cuz last night ya i fucked her
your a loser a fool
a fuckin fag and a tool
battle me diablo-vice
your ass got taken to school

16 lines

i spit my verse like i saqi i would
so lokie stop livin the rich life
try to live one day in the hood

i gave you my word that i would lay down a beat and as soon as i got a chance to i did so good battle and well have to see who wins

Loki wins, although neither verse really blew me away... yo vice you can't spit stuff like: "
i hate the way you rap you got no flow or no structure" when that 4th line of yours is horrible structure and broke your flow. nothing really special in your verse except you changed up the flow at the end which is ok, but all the punches are generic shit.

Loki... decent personal, some ok punches, but then your pickachu and rhino lines were pretty bad.. still the close was good enough that it came off kinda strong.

return the favor, hit up my battles.

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ok breakdown...
Opener - diablo....i like that lively herst line....
Flow - neither...didnt feel either of ya flows...
Punches - diablo...i liked his punches betta n felt they hit harder...lokie werk on direct punches...u 2 diablo
Personals - lokie...u made sum attempts at personals while diablo made none so u got this category...keep werkin on personals cuz they help ur punches...
Closer - lokie...nice closer...a playd line but still better than diablos closer...
talleys up as....
Diablo - 2
Lokie - 2
tied up so it comes down to the enjoyment vote...
enjoyment - both yall verses were weak...lokie u had played lines....diablo those ur mom and ur girl lines dont make it in this site...but i like diablos verse better....i like his punches n they had me laughin...nice battle both of yall stay at this level battlin.....
vote - diablo
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i wont make my vote official, 'cuz i dont want cats thinkin' im hating on them (diablo). i think lokie "barely" took this. diablo...this is the best ive seen from you yet. your improving. keep it up my friend, dont get discouraged by the criticism cutty. holla at ya boy sometime (fair votes/help etc.). one.

s.v.

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Lokie - Liked your spit, had some alright punches and an alright flow.

Best Line: Stamped this Calgarian like rhino’s and bulls
Your lines are more overplayed then Nintendo consoles/

Worst Line: You remind me of copy cats that style u be mocking/
So BITCH KEEP TALKING

Vice - pretty good battle was feelin your flow better and also had some alright punches.

Best Line: your a fag and u know it so why do you hide it
like a wannabee gangster and the law u abide it

Worst Line: your a loser a fool
a fuckin fag and a tool
battle me diablo-vice
your ass got taken to school (weak endin)

OVERALL - it wasnt that good of a battle but I got to vote for vice, just liked his flow better, both of your punches were the same and neither used many multi's so I gotta go vice cuz he had btter structure and flow. Lokie, Ive seen better from you man, keep wit it and work on your flow and step up on the punches.

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Aight Check Dis..

Lokie: 5/10
Nice Flow, Structure Was Nice, But Punches Weren't Really That Hard, Lackin Word Usuage, Lacking Metas and Multis. Newas...Elevate and Stay Dope.

Diablo-Vice: 6/10
Flow and Structure Was Nice, Punches Were Alright, A Little Harder Den Lokies'. You Didn't Really Have Mulits and Metaphors But Your Flow Was Tight.

Vote - Vice

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