U know tha rules bitch!

I like it fast and hard
25 lines max

15 lines min

I spit first homey!

checkin in and leaving for class, I'll be back in an hour or so, then i gotta eat lunch. ill drop by like 1 or so Central Time.

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Check it, I'm gonna flip tha script!!

You know i'm tha franchiZZy and my lyrics are tha shizzy//
i'll put you in a head daze spitting endless shit 2 make ya dizzy//
my style is unique like an antique and my flow is tha number 1 original//
i got a full license for tha mic you ain't even got ure provisional//
i'm the thrilla from manilla and u jst the ice without tha vanilla//
like lightning i strike givin you the five knuckle shuffle to leave u unsteady//
then wiv my clawed hand i silently creep into ure dreams to slaughter u like my name is freddy//
i stand tall rockin tha set fillin tha crowd with much anticipation//
with my rage building up inside i'll drop u with a lyrical decapitation//
i dominate this rap shit furious and fast, i light you up to smoke u like i smoke tha grass//
just so you can remember me i'm gonna leave an imprint of my size 12 ridges in ure ass//
i'm the invincible rap killa so u need to sit ure ass down and be quiet//
my flow is rated ten star whilst u about as clever as a skinny kid on a diet//
i drop bombs like a terrorist creating quakes that go off the richter scale//
i leave u bringin up chunks just like stifler after a taste of the pale ale//
i originate straight from the depths of hell and my powers are satanic//
u need to take ure nursery rhyme shit back 2 school or u'll sink like tha titanic//
my first battle was wack but u should know that i didn't even flex my muscle//
i'm a 24 carat playa reelin u in like a fish so i can work my hustle//
u call ureself the shadows edge keepin ure flow in the dark//
well i'm the shining sun exposin u for tha fake ass bitch that u are//
forget this rap battle it don't matta if i get beat//
cuz everyone knows that u belong chantin junior rhymes on tha street.//

aight.. checking in just got back. your drop was longer than i expected, so ill drop in like half an hour..

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Yo check it, I wrote this shit in quick reply....

Yo quit the lies, you only work for one franchise
You know the one that sells big macs n fries
Dip your rhymes in the oil just to make your verse slick
Wishing there was a super size button for your dick…

I’m an Ill Mental MC, merking you is in my line of duty
Only punch you ever stomached was Hi-C fruity
Your punches couldn’t deliver if they was Dominoes
When you at the mic, rap reaches new fucking lows
Yo I’ma have to disfranchise you from the rap nation
Soon you hear me diss franchiZe on every rap station
Only time you ever hustled was chasing the ice cream truck
Check it dumb fuck, eating lucky charms won’t bring you luck
Your just a fat ass diabetic but your rhymes anorexic
Just check your name, it’s clear your dyslexic

Got my rap gun cocked, now I squeeze the trigger
.22 caliber rhymes, leave a nigga disfigured
0-0, your record looks like fucking fruit loops
You like a teenage girl the way you listen to fruit groups

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breakdown for franchize

flow-alright basic nothing too clever but good job 6/10

volcab-in spots it was really on but for most of it like at the start and the end it was lacking 6/10

punches-a few alright punches nothing great but my fav,"my flow is rated ten star whilst u about as clever as a skinny kid on a diet//" mostly played topic though 6/10

overall-18/30 well rounded verse but with room to improve

breakdown for shadows edge-

flow-straight no off spots good job 7/10

volcab-basic here i think the only real spot where you lack to your oppenent 5/10

punches-nice lines some alittle played but overall you out punched your oppenent best line,"Only punch you ever stomached was Hi-C fruity" 7/10

overall-19/30 good job still room to upgrade though

vote--shadows edge

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and sign up for the battle league would yeah, also show up if your already in the league

uppin ^ give me a link and i will drop an honest vote.

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mother fucking uppin ^^ can i get some votes.. just drop a link ill give an honest vote

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i tink this battle was really weak no disrespecting i saw this battle like

DirtyBoy69 saw it...good shit both of u..


Vote=Edge

uppin for some votes... 4 more and this shit will stop.. just drop a link and i return the favor

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come on people
up these votes
and wen u done vote on these:

franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374
franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
franchiZe 0-0 Ghost354
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335

wtf with all the herb battles I can't get a damn vote in here.

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c'mon ppl up these votes

and then vote on my other battles

franchiZe 0-0 realistdoggy11
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119374
franchiZe 0-0 $$upreme
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119293
franchiZe 0-1 Lil Nae2
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119176
franchiZe 1-0 Ghost354
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119335

like lightning i strike givin you the five knuckle shuffle to leave u unsteady//
then wiv my clawed hand i silently creep into ure dreams to slaughter u like my name is freddy//

i drop bombs like a terrorist creating quakes that go off the richter scale//
i leave u bringin up chunks just like stifler after a taste of the pale ale//

i think these line killed it. franchise ya flow was kinda off but u had much better vocab, punches hit a lil harder.

edge had a good line tho:

Yo quit the lies, you only work for one franchise
You know the one that sells big macs n fries

a sick opener i liked that.

very close battle: franchise

return the favour pls
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119203
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119416

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