Usual rules

10-16 lines
no crew, hate, dr votes
blind spit
drop whenever, I'm gonna drop quick(less than an hour)

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Checkin' in ah'ight son^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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This is what I call Lyrical Boxin...............

Oh shit he's got writer's block......... watch his mind start Clutterin//
Only reason they call him Triple N....... cause he can't stop Stutterin//
This cat's from New York City........ Probably lives in the Trump Towers//
You'd have thought I'd severed off his limbs........ wit the way I Stump Cowards//
Gay ass has wood on his brain........... like he was just Struck Wit Lumber//
He's got 10 losses already............... and eleven's my Lucky Number//
Title says light weight............ But I'll easily Beat This Rookie//
Sig's flippin birds wit it's toungue out......... Must be used to Eatin Pussy//
Eatin up his sweet ass rhymes.......... only way of sendin me to The Dentist//
Easily I Trump this cat........... Not even worthy to be my Apprentice//
You better hurry up and spit............. The voters might Skip You By//
This cat's still searchin for lyrics......... while I'm postin a Quick Reply//
Less than 30 mins........... just like my Call Out Said//
Triple N turned into a Sweater.......... as soon as he Saw The Thread//

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Ya rhymes pump more jizz than an elephant dong
An they blow more smoke than cheech an chong
Punches are weak, like popeye need spinach to get strong
Ya rhymes are a mobile home on flats, ya flows a reck
Jus for sayin' white guys rule I'm a put ya ask in check
Are u from the KKK, or like Jeff foxworthy "u might be redneck"
You don't got the balls to step to me, cuz u know u can't see me
Prolly ya dick so small u need glasses and some tweezers jus to pee
How you gon be a rapper when you think u cool rockin' baggy dockers
An you so desperate for pussy u wackoff to the sight of ya mom's knockers
U have down middle of ya face, an everytime u rhyme u get a bathroom pass
Cuz after everytime you spit all that shit you were told to wipe ya ass
He scared he gon cower, cuz he know his time's up he on his "25th hour"
He fears black power, cuz eatin' him like not a meal but a sauce like sweet sour
You garbage mothafucka, this wasn't a battle morelike a easy catfight
Don't know wheter to call him bitch or faggot, its confusin' battlin' a hermapherdite

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Line 11 has a word missin' here's correction:
U have hair down middle of ya face, everytime u rhyme u get a bathroom pass

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uppin for some votes, come on y'all^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^

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I'll vote if you check out any of my battles.. just drop this link there. No matter who you vote for as long as its honest vote with actual feedback, I'll give my honest vote on this.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

Aight.. truthfully I've seen better from both of you.

Trip: Aight.. that KKK/Foxworthy line was pretty decent, but I wasn't feeling much else from the beggining of your verse. The tweezers punch is pretty solid, even if slightly overplayed, but you gotta work on your flow and use a better set up for it I think to make it more compact and hit harder.. the way it is the set up is not really relevent and the line is a bit stretched. The next bars were pretty solid.. I like the way you actually used a setup line for the "whipe yourself" punch, though you stil could have made it more compact, like cut out that "hair down the middle of your face" part or something. I didn't like your second to last line.. a catfight means it was *two* bitches man... but your last line was a nice closer.

enygma: You opened with what I think was your best punch of the battle, and the only real good personal in the battle. After that, you had some ok punches and some whack lines.. like why call his rhymes "sweet ass"? You had an ok aprentice diss there.. but you could have used a better setup, like the line were you called him a rookie. Would have made it hit harder I think. The last two bars were pretty ok, though your closing line was somewhat weak.

Aight, so because both of you had basically equal punches, some good and some bad, I gotta go with verse had better flow and technique, and I go with enygma. TripN, you had some nice multis at the end but they were lacking for the most part considering how long your lines were.. and some just didn't flow too well ("knockers"/"dockers" bar for instance). engyma, your flow wasn't the best I've seen but it was pretty compact, but you gotta get the multis in there, work on vocab and the such.

Anyway, tight battle, both of you guys work on multis, vocab and consistency I guess.

Peace.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

I knew people wouldn't get my closer.............. I was tryin to say that he was sweatin when he saw the thread, Therefore he was a sweater. also sweaters are made from thread.......... it's really a good fuckin closer if you understand the meaning behind it........ but thanks for votin anyway.

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AIght Yo Check It...

Enygma: 6/10
Nice Drop, Always Liking Ya Style. Punches and Metaphors Were There. Definitly Liked The Line About Stumpin Cowards (NiCe). No Obvious Mulits In This Spit But Your Punches Were Decent and Flow Was Nice.

Triple N: 5/10
Your Punches Were Played, and You Vocab Is A Little Childish. But Flow Was Decent, and I Persoanlly Think Shadows Edge Is Wrong, Because Knockers/Dockers Definitly Ryhmes . Newayz...Just Elevate With The Vocab, Multis, and Metaphors.

Vote- Enygma

~R~

breakdown 4 both of u

enygma had sum gud flow and structure in his spit but it was fairly average. his punches were not all that gud and i feel that u cud have done a lot better. ure metaphors were in there but i saw no multis.
triple n, not ure best performance either but u had ure flow goin tight as always. ure punches were average and didn't really do tha damage. u need to get more multis in there and elevate ure vocab more.
Vote = enygma

Enygma - Good spit man, you did your own thing and brought it hard, had some good flow goin and some hard punches. (also I understood your closer) lol, and I liked it.

Best Line - You better hurry up and spit............. The voters might Skip You By//
This cat's still searchin for lyrics......... while I'm postin a Quick Reply//
Less than 30 mins........... just like my Call Out Said//
Triple N turned into a Sweater.......... as soon as he Saw The Thread// (tight endin)

Worst Line - NONE

Triple_N - Nice battle man... liked your flow and you also had some pretty hard punches.

Best Line - Ya rhymes are a mobile home on flats, ya flows a reck
Jus for sayin' white guys rule I'm a put ya ask in check
Are u from the KKK, or like Jeff foxworthy "u might be redneck" (lol, loved that line)

Worst Line - NONE

OVERALL - Awesome battle guys... I was feelin this one alot, both had there share of good punches and hardcore flow.. but I gotta pick someone to win so Enygma gets my vote. I thought his punches were just a little harder and thats why he gets my vote.

VOTE - Enygma

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http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=119658

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Thanks for the input guys........... Can we get some more???????

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Uppin for more votes........c'mon lets get this shit closed out.........

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