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Old 04-20-04, 01:20 PM   #1
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Black Thief vs. Mike12Ikeda

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you kno the rules you got 10 lines max. make it a short battle. but make sure ur lines are nice. peace.......................let the best man win.....
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Old 04-20-04, 02:16 PM   #2
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From: GA all day nigga
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this nigga couldn't spit even if "wrapped(rapped) at Subway
U Candian?Aiight I'm still gonna rip ya "eh"?
stick to watchin hockey in bars
Son if u was in a jungle gym u till couldnt grab bars
I'll slaughter ya shit before u even release
rip through ya frame like u was made outts Maple Leafs
From Ottowa to Winnipeg
anywhere u at I bust ya head
i'm on another level u will never be on
Its like B.I.G. battlin Celine Dion.....

yo I'm burnt out for tha day...no more battles...any more folks wanna battle, set it up tomorrow.....time to blaze one
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Old 04-20-04, 09:32 PM   #3
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This dude’s rhymes ain’t “hot” like “Dwayne Wade” on a “cold streak”//
You must be a “black thief” cause you trapped in the cold streets//
Rhymes played out like you rapped to old beats//
Verses wouldn’t shine even if they were wrapped in gold sheets//
I ain’t even trying, but I’ll leave this emcee like Pac, Pun, Big L and Biggie//
Another dead rap artist that would regret the beef that he start-ed//
Reverend Mart-in would be ashamed of niggaz like you who celebrate losses in harvest//
And a win for you must be sitting in the Arc-tic cause its farthest//
You will never be able to compare to my intellect//
Your like men with child pornography that the Police will intercept, you should never use and be banned from the fucking internet!
peace...wack flow
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Old 04-20-04, 10:00 PM   #4
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whew whew!!! hotness my man mike got this abttle won easily..i almsot shoudlnt have to explain the vote... but here goes.....

aight mike had hot lines and wordplay flow and rhythm not to mention his punchiline were nice too

but black thief had short and uneven lines that did not flow accurately he tried to have punches but they werent good tho...

so my votes goes to Mike. easily
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Old 04-21-04, 11:29 AM   #5
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From: GA all day nigga
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U P P I N .....u P P I N.... U P P I N...
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Old 04-21-04, 12:55 PM   #6
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nice battle fellas. mike i gotta give it to you. way, way, way better punches. Black your just a newbe. and what i learned as a newbw to become an experienced rapper tyou can't try to step out of your character. you jumped out of character. i can tell cuz when you tried to rap hard and gangster you sounded stupid . to me at least. and if i was you i'll stay on and battle and try to learn more. mean while vote on this:
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=115437
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Old 04-21-04, 01:17 PM   #7
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A'ight...not the greatest battle...

Black thief...you have to work on some shit...some punches was a'ight...but flow and structure is wack...a better vocab would help out in ya battles too...overall, some a'ight punches, but structure, flow, and vocab were your downfalls.

4/10

Mike...like Black Theif, your structure is fucked up. Your flow needs a revamping, your structure needs to be reworked. That being said...your punches were pretty tite. Some were on the weak side, but others hit harder. Overall, work on structure and flow, to make your verses easier to read. Your punches is what won you this battle.

5/10

Vote- Mike

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Old 04-21-04, 01:48 PM   #8
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^^^lmaoo ur a dickhead how can u have a good flow usin text....u gota be from canada lol

opener- a tie both of ya'll had a couple of fukked up lookin lines
structure-
punchlines-mike..he killed black with dem shits
multi's-mike
personals-nun
finisher-mike..
enjoyed-mike of course....black u came real week dunn u should be able da battle all day on dis shit...but

my vote- mike
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118364
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118442
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120004
^^^^ THERE GO 3 OF MY BATTLES RETURN DA FAVOR PLEEZ.....
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Old 04-21-04, 07:49 PM   #9
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check it
mike had sum gud flow nad structure to his spit and his punches were gud, not the best but a lot better than thiefs. he had sum gud vocab in his spit and sum alright punchlines in there.
thief ure flow was alright but it went slightly off and ure structure cud have been better. ure punches were gud but they didnt seem to connect, u need to elevate wit sum multis and personals and get more originality in there. no one likes hearin stuff that has already been played out.

Overall my vote goes to Mike!!
 
Old 04-21-04, 07:54 PM   #10
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I gotta give this battle to Mike, his shit was alot harder.. Black.. whats up man?.. thats the worst shit Ive seen you spit.. I know you can do better then that. Good flow and punches mike your shit was heated, thats the way to shuve that canada shit right back in his face... vote - Mike

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