Aight nig, 7 barz max and all tha great things along side a battle

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LGB FreeYayo

A.K.A. Lil Nae2

ChYld
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Lyrical Crook

aight yo here goes:

DisasterMaster, more like lyrical-disaster/
ya bastard, watch an' see as you get plastered//
You a straight bitchnigga, I'm gettin bigga feedin off that/
I'm like a James Bond figure to you wit a Lousville Slugger Bat//
I just drop a weak line an' you already tweak out/
I leak ya out, seek ya out and murder everything ya about//
Dawg do something bout tha breath, smellin like beans/
Coulda used that in WWII to put niggas to death, get some Listerine//
AS it seem I'm almost up, but still goina toast ya up/
As a muthafuckin roast an' I boast bout compressin' ya in a cup//
U read everything from a transcript, if that, like ya a slave/
Listen to ya Master, it ya don't behave ya goin end up in tha grave//
Last bar but I'm tha star in tha car on twankies, skankie pankie passion/
Cast Mars is where u from so I pull tha lyrical trigger like a assassin//

7 barz, now its ya turn
drop

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LGB FreeYayo

A.K.A. Lil Nae2

ChYld
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Lyrical Crook

Last bar revised:

Last bar but I'm tha star in tha cat on twankies, skankie pankie passion/
Past Mars is where you from so I pull tha lyrical trigger like an assassin//

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Murdered:

LGB FreeYayo

A.K.A. Lil Nae2

ChYld
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Lyrical Crook

ok nephew j, right now u messin with a bird of prey
u think a meta4 is a cliche, what when i spit and spray
when venom hit and u start to decay, but ur arsenal is dissrayed
ur rhymes ar confusing, and ar somewhat amusing, they keep on loseing
1-7 dam the record speeks for itself, sell ur body and soul 2 bucks is ur wealth
Shertown is sounding unconclusive, like like how protrusive was with ur mothers cliterus
this venomus spit, i rock the beat like sid vicous, jumping on u like i was hittin switches
when im dont u'll be left with a seven year itch,
rhymes are played and ur computers have glitches, and spits that kill and leave u in stiches.

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maan..what a battle...hmm..i think the DM gets my vote...you need to work on ur vocab overall ur a pretty good emcee just need some work along with you DM

I think that was a pretty gd battle if i could vote ild vote DM but i only jus joined cant vote yet. vote=DM. Peace

i dont see why poeple say the same shit about me. its like like im listening to a broken record player. if i hear plaster, master, and bastard in the say rap again im gona shot myself.

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hey since i voted for yall dont forget to vote at my battle against #1~soldier~#1
look it was nothin personal i just thought tht DM had the better punches...

upin in this bitch for some votes

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yo man.............both cam hard But DisasterMaster won heres y...........

Dm: coo punches bro i can see u r improving in your skills..............you had pretty coo vocab.....was realy feelin ur last two lines tho...but over all it was alright...

Nephew: you were doing fine bro you had soem alright vocab...........n i guess u had some coo punches but you need to work on them some more.....what i dint like about your flow is the bad breath lines..............c'mon man this is text battle....so all i gotta say is work on some metas n ur punches.........n if ur gonna do personals do em right...but keep at it bro........im not bein mean just bein real.............

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my vote=DisasterMaster

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okay overall a good battle punches and vocab were about the same for yall but u can tell nephew j is a newbi...because he had to revise his rap..now thats one hit
structure, nj
flow dm
punches neither
opener dm
closer dm

v/dm

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Blue Print

B.P.

my bad its suppose to be on the DisasterMaster summary..............I wasnt feelin r last two lines

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2 more votes people, and i will have another r.i.p.ed

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drop ya votes........uppin......................up up up...

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Murdered:

LGB FreeYayo

A.K.A. Lil Nae2

ChYld
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Lyrical Crook