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CounTREE Jay 5 83.33%
guyver4mk 1 16.67%
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Old 04-07-04, 12:30 PM   #1
guyver4mk
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Guyver4mk VS CounTREE Jay

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Infinite lines.
No Dick Ridin
No Hate Votes
No feedin
And No Crew Votes.

I'm checkin in, PM me when ur ready.
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Old 04-07-04, 02:05 PM   #2
CounTREE Jay
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From: Da Branch, N.Y.
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Well, I already pm'd you and you ain't online, but i gotta let niggaz in here know ain't no one duckin' your bitin' ass. BELIEVE THAT. Wheneva you ready bia.
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Old 04-07-04, 04:20 PM   #3
guyver4mk
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First off, Fuck the words and the shit you spit/
Diss my verse, but you just shame the game, thats it/
You claim to be a rapper and you're rhymin's tight/
Your verses ain't shit so drop the mic lets fight/
You tryin ta playa hate me but weak hearts I tear/
I tear up ya lines and break ya spine, like a spear/
I even hate ya name, so when I play, i envoke fear/
I keep on gunnin while you runnin outa breath/
Got you jumpin while I'm shootin at ya chest, you need a vest/
Annihilated, go tell ya people I defeated ya, ya little dick/
5 verses spit nobody wants to see, Nor can they give a shit/
You past tense, so don't fuck around cos you ain't a real MC/
And you ain't ready for battle with me, you suck G's/
I tell you now that this shit is on for life/
So ConuTREE jay's gona die tonight, Aussie boy murdered on a sword blood spilt/
Keep fuckin around with me an you know ur gona get killed, u know!/
Enter ya car, when you see tha guyver/
No time to talk, cos he beats ya heart/
He dissed me, but the punk didn't finish/
An i'm about to fuck his mom any minute/
NIGGA I HIT YOU UP!!
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Old 04-07-04, 04:34 PM   #4
CounTREE Jay
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From: Da Branch, N.Y.
Goodbye

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First off, come at me, U wannabe G, talkin' about takin' it to the Streets,/
It's hard for me to C how you could take me, When U can't even handle the beats./
How you gonna try to bring shame to me and talk about what I claim to be./
'cause you shortened your name to guyver, cause you can't even begin to mc./ (I know you get that shit)
It's ok, this ain't tv, so you can't play HandyMan, cause you don't have the tools./
Guess you're old man blessed you wit a lot of thangs, just not the family jewels./
Damn you a scam, I never saw a man who looks quite as sad as you./
I heard you usually got shit in your mouth, but this time you bit off more than you can chew./
'Pacs dead, and no lil' nigga like you could ever fuckin' fill his throne./
You just typin' away you keyboard thug, U should leave the game alone./
Should known from the gate that, not to come at the nigga you love to hate./
No votes, You can only give yourself a hand, like a friday night witout a date./
That's right nigga, that CounTREE boy just put you in your place./
Maybe you should start a coin collection, it's the only way you'll save face./
Damn, ever realize as you spittin' that this shit's already a rap,/
That's he's just another generic emcee talkin' about makin' guns clap./
Nigga your tryin' to come on here, talkin' hard like you a big timer,/
Heard from niggaz in your "hood" you was a nickel and dimer./
And you just an undercard, Wanna be big, but Jay the Headliner,/
Now let me show you the way out the game, you can call me your path finder./

Yo, str8 up, you a lil' nigga to me. So shut the fuck up, stop tryin' to pass off pac's lines like you wrote 'em, and learn how to mc, cause you fuckin' suck. I thought you "had sometin' for me". IT'S NOTHING YOU BITCH ASS NIGGA!
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Old 04-07-04, 04:42 PM   #5
Shadows edge
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This is one of the better battles here and a close one.

For personals, I wasn't really feeling either one.

Punches: Jay wins easily. "Only way to save face is collect coins" (you know what I'm talking about) is an ill line, and the closing is really good. guyver's is just kinda random.

Flow: Close. Both of y'all went way too long with the lines not to have multiple rhymes per line, or some worldplay or something in there.

Overall winner: Jay.

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Old 04-07-04, 04:42 PM   #6
Rollin_Deep
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countree murdered this kat...and why was guvyer basically spittin his own version of eminems quitter....

Vote:counTREE jay...

return the favour on Rollin_Deep Vs Ecko296
 
Old 04-07-04, 04:44 PM   #7
CounTREE Jay
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Yo son, I did have multiple rhymes in quite a few, y'all gotta read this shit closely, but good look on the love, suggestions and votes. RESPECT
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Old 04-07-04, 04:46 PM   #8
guyver4mk
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That was the surprise (counTREE jay knows what i'm talkin about).
It was actually a mix between quitter and Hit 'em up.

Uppin
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Old 04-07-04, 04:48 PM   #9
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Oh yea, Rollin_Deep, that don't count as an explained vote. u gotta give reasons.
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Old 04-07-04, 04:53 PM   #10
CounTREE Jay
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From: Da Branch, N.Y.
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I can see that, but the fact of the matter is, You still got shitted on, and you couldn't even come wit your own shit. Why don't you just hang your head in shame. You got murdered dogg. You the fuckin' equivalent of a lip-syncin' rapper. YOUZ A BITCH! Say it str8 'NUFF SAID!
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Old 04-07-04, 05:11 PM   #11
CounTREE Jay
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From: Da Branch, N.Y.
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ACTUALLY, this may come off as cocky, but you can write another one, anytime you want, in this same forum, and i'll just let mine stand. I mean, you should prolly hurry before someone votes, but you can write another one, cause i want a victory against your best stuff, cause now everyone can see why you got called a biter I ALWAYS SPEAK THE TRUTH BITCH. So come wit your best shit, cause i fuked your whole world up, I know.
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Old 04-07-04, 09:24 PM   #12
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you really want me to come again?
Well Here goes. Just for you man.
re-written for the fool from N.Y who can't spell "THE"
here goes....................
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Old 04-07-04, 09:25 PM   #13
guyver4mk
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I see you wanted me to set ya mind free/
But you never could be anything compared to me/
You call me a tramp, on the side of the pave/
But its 400 years oppression that made you that way/
Nigga you'sa joke and all you do is fuckin choke/
When you step to the mic you fizz up like a coke/
Now don't go actin silly comparin me to milli vanilli/
Cos I got people who'll kill you from bagdhad to philli/
Vanilla ice is ya role model, I ain't got no throne to fill/
It's weak ass coments like that, that make me prone to kill/
My name is the GUYVER 4MK's where I'm from/
I'll come back next week and I bet your ass'll be gone/
I'd rather eat shit than dick, but you bin chokin on mine/
Release ya grip got the white round ya lips, an all u get is a dime/
This is prime time but this ain't for the tv/
Fuck the media and paparazzi all I need is me/
I ain't no hanyman and I don't need any tools/
But i know that I'm more blessed compared to you with regards jewels/
I'd go to throw a punch and maybe try to connect/
But you can't hit back with arms like a tyrannosaurus rex/
I'll break you like a twig and then bombard you with stones/
But you said words would never hurt but that ain't what it said on ur tombstone/
I'll try to refrain an leave you to collapse from the pain/
I could hit you again and just waste you from the game/
Leave you in shame, with you head so far down, it should be in a drain/
You believe that you're stout but in reality you pout/
I lay this shit out so you don't have to keep on believin/
I'm the master of this, and this game you should be leavin/
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Old 04-07-04, 10:59 PM   #14
m1998cm
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yo CounTREE Jay, go easy on im dog, thats mah bro and he try way to fuckin hard to impress. i was gonna vote but i seen the first post an mah bro don't want no crew to vote so i say goodluck to both ya'll
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Old 04-08-04, 02:18 AM   #15
guyver4mk
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Uppin for votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!


Holla Back!!!!!!
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