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Old 05-24-04, 10:15 PM   #1
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Lot V Ktrin

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6-8 bars
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Spit First, i am not wasting a verse on a shook herb.
Due 12 tonight... if not possible tell me.
Those are the rules... Abide or DQ.

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Old 05-24-04, 10:53 PM   #2
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due tomorrow night... no later.........................
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Old 05-25-04, 10:10 PM   #3
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Ok...i will not be on any later then 1030... shit went down and i gotta leave then... so i will post my verse tomorrow...You can wait until tomorrow or post yours tonight.
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Old 05-26-04, 04:09 PM   #4
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So many gay ass mother fuckers I've merked,next victim.......Liqour of Tears/
That bitch ass that dickrides like a pornstar,and loves a mouthful of pears/
My rhymes are so hard,you write it on paper and roll it up,it turns into a bat/
But don't worry,you tough,you got shot 9 times by a gun that only goes splat*/
Reading your verses or poems are annoying,like sand goin in your pants/
If I write your poems on my palm,then I bassically holding shit on my hand/
U lost the tiny amount of skill you had...cause you all over people's nuts/
Why'd I bother with you?,my mom could beat you by saying "no,if,ands,or,buts"/


*splat in 2nd punch means he got shot by a gun that many boys have.........
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Old 05-26-04, 04:11 PM   #5
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So many gay ass mother fuckers I've merked,next victim.......Liqour of Tears
That bitch ass that dickrides like a pornstar,and loves a mouthful of pears
My rhymes are so hard,you write it on paper and roll it up,it turns into a bat
But don't worry,you tough,you got shot 9 times by a gun that only goes splat
Reading your verses or poems are annoying,like sand goin in your pants
If I write your poems on my palm,then I bassically holding shit on my hand
U lost the tiny amount of skill you had...cause you all over people's nuts
Why'd I bother with you?,my mom could beat you by saying "no, if, ands or buts"
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Old 05-26-04, 04:20 PM   #6
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im not a "freeposter" but the other rapbattles place is fucked up peep it

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=130389

look at the "/" aftr brawl and tell me ur thoughts plzz


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Old 05-26-04, 05:28 PM   #7
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Ok... Ill key it up real quick for y ou.. Im glad you dropped
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Old 05-26-04, 05:48 PM   #8
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It took you 3 days to drop those lines?
Oh thats right, Your mom makes you get off at 9*
And you say your an underated Emcee
But noone rates you in the first place, so how can that be?
I am fearing a little cause I'm facing last months rookie
Wait, Rookie of the month is what you were SUPPOSED to be
get some boxing training, You're punches need it
Cause i've been hit harder by a quadrapalegic
Are you hinting at something...
Cause gay references is all that comes out of you.
Sacrafice him like performing voodoo, You know what Screw you
Pretty sad when your Pet has a higher winning percent then you do*



*His mom made him get off because he had school
*Pet=Rapperz



Ok Get some votes it... Very quickly keyed...
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Old 05-26-04, 06:34 PM   #9
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k trin - decent verse....u had some good concepts just not enough wordplay to pull off the hard hitters....like the shit on my hand was pretty good.....sum lines were played....decent verse though....elevate on werdplays and personals.....good drop......keep elevatin....

lot - that closer killed it....dayum....decent verse too....stretched lines....could tell u didnt go hard....he had better flow....u had better personals and punches....he had metas....but ur closer won this for u....that was hot.....

good battle though...

vote - LoT
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Old 05-26-04, 09:47 PM   #10
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i think k-trins verse was weak it had no originality...good flow decent structure and good punches but mostly played and unoriginal...you should elevate some more cuz this verse you showed nothign interesting at all...

overall: 4/10

LoT: i think he won this with his 2nd and 3rd bar good personals in those 2 bars and punches strong flow and decent structure good originality...overall you had a strong verse and you deserve this win


this wasnt a hott battle tho i wasnt feelin it that much but LoT gets my vote cuz his verse jus appealed to me more i dont think k-trin came that hard

vote: LoT

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Old 05-27-04, 03:04 PM   #11
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Old 05-27-04, 07:55 PM   #12
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Old 05-27-04, 09:32 PM   #13
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Old 05-27-04, 11:24 PM   #14
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Aiyo Check Dis...

KTrin - Your Verse Was Aight, But Your Structure Lacked and Your Punches Weren't Hitting As Hard As LOT's. You Had Punches (That Lacked Word Structure) and Had No Personals. Your Flow Was Aight, Just Elevate Man.

LOT - Ya Verse Was Aight, Seen Betta From Ya. (THE OLD RB.com Structure Is Wack..Lose It!!)Newayz..Nice Personals You Used In Your Punches Against Him and Your Flow Was On Key. Nice Metaphors and I Liked The Line About Guadrapalegics. LOL...

Nice Drops From Both, Props To Both Emcees.

Vote - LOT For More Personals And Better Punches

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Old 05-28-04, 12:21 AM   #15
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^ how the fuck can you say the Old RB structure is whack? It's not the Old RB structure, it's called a fucking structure. For a verse. The type you can rap too, over a beat. You see, when each line has 20 sylabbles, then your structure is stretched and whack, and it doesn't matter what fucking site you are on.
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