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IP: 6CE9 EDF7
Communication is Vital/I bang wit my Rivals/Hang in Survival/Clang to my Title/rock the Apple jack hat Titlted like Feival/Besides/me Bein Beside/MYSELF/i die in wealth/House Bigger than Hulk Hogans Retired Belt/Iron gets Felt/till ya whole Car includin Tires Melt/Lock down Tighter than a Seat belt/bitches Scream Help/Ain't nothin Poppin/and ya CD'S like a VIRGIN'S PROMDRESS ain't nothin Droppin/wit Coke we move CASES like a Busy Johnny COCHRAN/how many Coops u droppin/or Blocks u Lockin/Cops is Spottin/and Feds is Watchin/Po's is Pinchin/ya Boy is Pimpin/Feind smoke till they sound like MARGE SIMPSON/in ya Barge whippin/Mic is Deadly/game is Heavy/Commotions Breakout/Like a TEENAGE FACE wit the NOXEMA rank Out/we gonna Blow National City Bank out/Fuck No Limit make em Photogenic and pull the Tank Out/I live in Fire call it a Dragons Mouth/had Key's stuffed in my Gramma's Couch/wit Hamma's Out/Paco Jeans white Tee and Bandana'd Out/Tony Montana House/Elevator/wit the Mirror Reflectin a Blimp/step Here Step There Expectin a Pimp/U expectin a Limp/I got Gorillas u fuckin wit Selected Chimps/I invent/Pages they Indent/for Vacations to be spent/In a Location wit Project Vents/and Make Sense/till dollars don't make Cents/and Since/the subject of Discussion/Includin Gun Bustin/Heres an Introduction/Vacuum ya Face/Outta this Place like Abyss Outter Space Suction/U sayin Nothin/ya Moms Pray/U stay Frontin/Now Genuflect/give these Men Respect/or catch a Ten to Tech/right in ya Juggler Neck/Be at Peace or be at Ease/or be Gone/Put u Underground wit the Digital u sing the SAME SONG/come along and follow/buck hollows and swallow/Pints of the Liqour/turn White boys to Niggas/It don't get no more Impressive than This/Beatin Up Celebrity's because we didn't make the A-LIST/AYE BITCH/thats my powder u sniff/Bullets is like AVALANCHES rollin yall gonna catch my DRIFT!
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IP: 0840 D57D
yo this shit was tite, it was grimey but barely had a flow. some of the similes were tite but some werent. the marge simpson line was a little off also. Overall it was still pretty good.
Holla Back At My Open Mics They're Called I AM THE AMERICAN DREAM BLOOD, SWEAT, and TEARS
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ya numba done came// and crumbled ya fame// into a ball' a umbrulla disolves into flames// u under my REIGN//-Royce da 5'9'' why do it// knowin u can light my saliva like lighta fluid//-Royce da 5'9''
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IP: 8D27 CD07
yo, this was a nice word play ryme that you enhanced to become a ryme. i like it, pretty good vocabulary you used. other than that, it has nothing wrong but the form it was written.
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