10-20 lines max
check in
drop
no hater, crew or dickrhyding votes
no biting aight.
lets go

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

checkin' in, lets do this motha'fuckin' shit, a c'mon

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since you so eager spit.
don't forget it must be done within today.

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

im so lethal i instantly kill emcees
i know you like you record don't show
fuck records bitch this nigga got more flow than the Nile
wow this cat is so amazing the way he torches cats
he's blazing while yall bitch niggas is crazing over this gangster rap
fuck that nigga im trying to bring hip hop back
even if it means you take 16 shells from my mack
im never wack but you have to read between the lines
mind blown by the stiches i woven no man is i'ller
i must be the chosen one or maybe that why i hold a loaded gun
see you just rhyme to get props
i rap to keep away from them cops
what you know about bakin up,strappin and staying with a loaded gat so you won't get chopped
life is crazy my sisters havin a baby
so i gotta be here cuz her babay daddy don't care
i know im suppose to be battling but this is life for me
im trying to steal the stage like its fucking robbery
when im gone i hope my fam can say im the illest
yall gotta give me the win i just killed this.

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

you know what i smell...............ah no show. i hope you show up dude since you where so eager to battle.

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THIS RAP SHIT IS NOT A GAME CRAZE

I GOT THE ARTILERY THAT AH RING YAH HEAD 4 DAYS

SO ONLY COME AT ME PROPER IF YOU DON'T WANT TO RAP LIKE MACE

I gotta hunch i'll have to bunch ma punches, to munch on this punchin' bag/
i'm not tryin' to brag but i'll drag this slag, an send 'em back in a doggie bag/
ma punches are invincible... meta's untouchable... flow's like a ritual/
you're beats are unstable... i'll rhymes are fable... you're unable to enable flows that are stable/
you're a disabled emcee, you plea on you're knees an' still disagree, but it's guaranteed/
whoop de' whoopie, you can't fuck wit me, to a certain degree, ma beats be freein' debris/
my METHOD's a vision of medical precision, just try to invision an asteroid collision/
that's me droppin' a bomb, i'm rap's vietnam, you're an ant an' you pant on ma palm/
you're a LYRICAL mess, who doesn't possess the power to progress, keep you're rhyme's supressed/
you know i'm the best, i'm LYRICALLY blessed, an i protest to detest this contest an' suggest.../
you're out of you're league, Vanilla Ice wannabe, you don't have the fatigue to keep up wit me/
you thought of bein' a disc jockey, cos you're rappin' is rocky, or even take up hockey/
An' did you notice i didn't feed off you're beats, i'm plantin' the seed that'll lead to outgrow this dickweed/
my speed is indeed intertwinin' ya, definin' then combinin' rhymin' words/
a started at the bottom of the ladder primin', but now i'm climbin' up/

ma ali floatin' crunchin' punches knocked you tha' fuck out homeboy/
a swingin' stingin' pimp slap when deployed would damn destroy you/
whats wit the look of displeasure, don't you treasure, seein' ill rhymes flowed with leisure?/

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sorry man, got carried away, lol

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damn man...wasnt feelin this battle at all....spat like real newbs with nooo elevation...heres how it goes

BUZZ-better flow i guess better punches...weak on vocab...u have 2 up ur vocab and make it fit ur punches...overall not the best but u have 2 come harder

METHOD-u only rhymed like 2 lines..cops and props or somethin like that....KEEP IT AND MAKE IT RHYME....felt like i was readin a story...TRY NOT TO BRAG 2 MUCH BOUT URSELF...str8 up diss the other nigga by all means...make ur punches funny...overall u didnt bring it...only good thing bout urs was ur flow and structure...besides that man if it was up 2 me id let u start a tutorial battle...honest 2 god...pce

VOTE-BUZZ

uppin...

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uppin 4 votes...

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yo man go vote on my shit.....QUICKPUNCH VS D~ILLAR~1 ...honest votes only...thanks..pce

Both rhymes wasnt really saying much to rip eachother down i have to hydronix because he had more to say method the beginning wasnt rhyming to me but u got at him a little somthing my vote goes to hydronic

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe

at least spell ma name right dawg..

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uppin 4 votes... please...

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