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Afterword | 5 | 100.00% | |
Atticus | 0 | 0% | |
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04-07-04, 02:14 AM | #1 |
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Afterword VS Atticus
IP: CE79 7DB8
10-20 lines max
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04-07-04, 02:37 AM | #2 | |
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IP: CE13 565F
yo yo
just checkin in the mic is in ya hand playa
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst" bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1) Help me close these/ and I will help U an EYE 4 an EYE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271 |
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04-07-04, 02:51 AM | #3 |
Flyweight
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IP: CE79 7DB8
I'll let u know
that I'm especially different when I leave you dead for show head cracked legs crippled in an instant 'encodin' my 'flows' so 'encrypted' couldn't be 'broke' by 'imhotep' the 'egyptian' Who could it be afterword? I spit wit 'golden style' Im semi new to this tryin nigga's knowin that it aint worth while pop with my new 'type 1' anew my 'rhythm' of how I orchestrate guns remember I got my glock 'on shoot' like 'afterwards' 'on run' cock waste U son and loot nigga 'afterwards' U done shit can't think...
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04-07-04, 02:55 AM | #4 | |
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IP: CE13 565F
wut up
u takin a long time playa must be brewin some hot shit ima bout to quik key and post u folow my lead
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst" bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1) Help me close these/ and I will help U an EYE 4 an EYE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271 |
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04-07-04, 02:56 AM | #5 | |
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IP: CE13 565F
wut up
u takin a long time playa must be brewin some hot shit ima bout to quik key and post u folow my lead =my bad didnt c that
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst" bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1) Help me close these/ and I will help U an EYE 4 an EYE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271 |
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04-07-04, 03:03 AM | #6 |
Flyweight
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IP: CE79 7DB8
i was orderin some 1986 jordans over the net...nah nigga i wasn't brewin it takes me 25 minutes to write cuz i aint used 2 my writin yet... but take ya time...
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1 Corinthians 1:19 - For it is written, (GOD THEN SPOKE) "I WILL DESTROY THE WISDOM OF THE WISE, AND THE CLEVERNESS OF THE CLEVER I WILL SET ASIDE." |
04-07-04, 03:11 AM | #7 | |
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IP: CE13 565F
I have a bad habbit of flowing spuratic, and it may get hazordous/
but no need for that shit, i can get some old lines out of the attic, to beat Atticus// look at us both, lame with no wins at all so ima slap yo ass around like we playin pin-ball/// Afterword is callin out shots, like a movie director this cat thinks he got skillz//// but i will, reveal, the real like a truth detector///// so go ahead and assume ya better than me b/c i believe im the best on this post////// but i soon found its not "tru skillz", that earns votes they like the comedian rapper, who can roast the most/////// thats all i got out of all of their fuckin comments//////// so now im spewing lyrical vomit, b/c they favor punchlines, over content///////// m poking yur eyes out with my pen and pencil/10 b/c my lyrics are suspenseful and precise like a stencil/ so if they give u this shit then ima be a biologist// move into ya nucleus, scruple-less open every cell in(inside) Atticus, just to get back at ya!/// peace
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst" bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1) Help me close these/ and I will help U an EYE 4 an EYE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271 |
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04-07-04, 03:17 AM | #8 |
Flyweight
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IP: CE79 7DB8
nah i won't win i haven't even formed my style yet... i got alot of sentance structure type shit to analyze my rhymes so i can magnify my skill 2 the fullest. but i aint got the patience for that... u won i admit, much props
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04-07-04, 03:20 AM | #9 | |
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IP: CE13 565F
i like yur honesty
and honestly who cares who wins u c my record(0-7) wins dont=skillz just keep doin ya thang, u got potential
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst" bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1) Help me close these/ and I will help U an EYE 4 an EYE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271 |
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04-07-04, 03:21 AM | #10 | |
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IP: CE13 565F
yo but with all that said
lets get some comments up in dis bizzzatch uppin
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"afterword disperses divert blirts to quench ya thirst" bomb first( I will BATTLE N E 1) Help me close these/ and I will help U an EYE 4 an EYE http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=122271 |
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04-07-04, 03:28 AM | #11 |
Flyweight
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IP: CE79 7DB8
oh 4 sho nigga, imma rap wit my mind in the dark, its more complicated that way. its a good thing for alot of people that im gonna stay this way....keep doin ya thing 2 nigga.
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04-07-04, 03:37 AM | #12 | |
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IP: AF76 A123
I'm votin for afterword...you both did your thing...but i was feelin afterwords verse more..anyways....since i voted for you..it'd be nice if you could vote on my first and latest battle...go here http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118449
Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - strobe
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04-07-04, 03:43 AM | #13 | |
Flyweight
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IP: 2808 906A
okay i saw about the afterword saying he had a (0-7) record how the fuck that happened i dont know.... but with that all aside...
AFTERWORD ripped atticus a new asshole... thing is atticus was uncoordinated he seems too new.. for example... this was atticus best line... "encodin' my 'flows' so 'encrypted' couldn't be 'broke' by 'imhotep' the 'egyptian'" but afterword ahd many to choose from he chose complex and organized rhyme structures for example this line by afterword.. "I have a bad habbit of flowing spuratic, and it may get hazordous/ but no need for that shit, i can get some old lines out of the attic, to beat Atticus//" he showed structure and what i lveo the best about any rappers style is the major usage of internal rhyme and slant rhymes shows the person is thinking and has a verbose vocab similar to mines...habit,spuratic,hazourdous,attic,atticus all are part of the internal or slant rhyme.. Therefore i give this vote to afterword...apologize for the long explanation but trying to so it all by the books. |
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04-07-04, 04:16 AM | #14 | |
New to RB
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IP: 8137 A724
blah.. this was an one sided battle... atticus.. ELEVATE BADLY... you need to battle more often against some top competition N' shit.. get ya rhymes n complexitiy up along with your creativeness... you honestly.. were garbage.. did ya thing.. but just ehhh... nothin' thatg i would like to hear offline.. afterwordz... not too bad, yet not all that great.. u had maybe one nice line outta ya whole verse.. wasn't feelin' it too much but you took the win fam lay... both y'all keep doin' ya thing...
Vote: Afterwordz SoLo Whun... |
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04-07-04, 04:27 AM | #15 |
Flyweight
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IP: CE79 7DB8
no doubt nigga afterword takes this battle off rip... uppin...
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