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check..... but you first then after youve posted i get 1 hour. peace

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Listen..I got no time for ambitious bitches tryna dis tha Kid..-
Masochistic style sparked the Y-M-C-A shit in your SIG..-
The rap 'Tarantino turnin' people against dey will, thrills..-
Come one a minute..strap a buck to ya face then 'Kill Bill..-
Devastation is waitin' for you dawg..-
Your style smell like shit..dats why peeps hatin on you dawg..-
I'm like satan on you dawg..the heat gotchu runnin' for cover..-
Whoever gave birth to your style is done being a mother..-
Mothafuck this lame excuse for a target..shit already shelled up..-
I'd give you the victory in this battle..but you can't even spell luck..-

LMAO @ u changin ur SIG after I dissed you on it

haha...bish move

g'luck man

No body wants to hear your, pointless incoherent babble
using dawg 3 times in 3 sentences, aint gonna win u a battle
n-sight here's some insight, you rhymes are scared deer in headlights
if bordem is was your directive, then you've achived your objective
your spit took so long, you must of have gotten deep vein thrombossis
sitting on your ass looking at animal porn, creepy brain's the prognosis
N-sight's vision isnt the only sense that has not been in affect
my words tremour, and blow up his ears or eardrums to be correct
you must be constipated, because your shit came out of your mouth
the reverse effect was in place, and your words come out from the south
This was a piece of cake, n-sights boasts and claims are all fake
i wasted my breath on this herb, cause a great fool is all he'd make.

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uppin dis piece for votes right here

holla atcha boyee


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yo this battle was a little even ended yo both need to try harder on punches and not talk bout yaselves.

BREAKDOWN

N-SIGHT
N-Sight had a tite verse with nice wordplay. The structure was nice and the multis were tite also. I think he coulda hit harder tho.

HYBRID
Hybrids verse was a little simple and there wasnt enuff hard punches nore multis. flow was nice tho. it was a little simple.

BOTH
you both had nice peices and shit. i woulda liked to see more punches and less talking about urselves on ya own verses. both were tite but i didnt like that HY changed his sig after it had been dissed. w/e


VOTE-N SIGHT

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^^ haha

yea...1-0 my way

uppin dis piece for more votes


holla

yea...1-0 my way

uppin dis piece for more votes


holla

UPPING and no i didnt change my signature cause he wrote about it, i changed it earlier and he didnt refresh thats why he only saw the new one afta he posted.

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Nsight-weak flow.some punches were good,while some whack.
The rap 'Tarantino turnin' people against dey will, thrills..-
Come one a minute..strap a buck to ya face then 'Kill Bill..-
^^this line was good........
Mothafuck this lame excuse for a target..shit already shelled up..-
I'd give you the victory in this battle..but you can't even spell luck..-
^^this line was whack

ur opener was so-so

Hybrid-Vocab. was too much for me.But then again,I'm way younger than most of these other cats round here.It was like you went through a whole dictionary to get those words.Flow was good.U had an all-right multi in there.And ur punches were better than ur oppenent.

Vote-Hybrid

dawg...lol w/e yo

u changed ur sig

Bish move...but it's aiight

uppin 4 votes

nsight had a tigh opener your shit got lil wack towards the end but u did good with that luck shit
yea dont use the same words three time in one sentence feel me?
not bad overall 7/10
hybrid average but u startin losin ya flow in tha middle
overall 6/10

favorite line in the battle-Mothafuck this lame excuse for a target..shit already shelled up..-
I'd give you the victory in this battle..but you can't even spell luck.
least favorite-I'm like satan on you dawg..the heat gotchu runnin' for cover..-
Whoever gave birth to your style is done being a mother..-
that was a lil wack
v/nsight

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uppin for votes yo...holla atcha boyee

for real yo

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