rematch

10-20 lines, no crew, hate, dr votes
due tommorow night midnight (eastern time)
500 posts to poll

Dude... just take this shit to elevated then... oh and vote on my battles.. I'll return the favor...

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

umm... no, im not retarded. even people with over 500 posts hardly check elevated, so were gonna get more votes here

It's that attitude that makes elevated not get any action...

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

true. stop freeposting in here.

so i battle L.I. the first time, shit, with my verse i had him...
tell he realized the rules, and goes and bitches to the admins...
obviously records dont mean shit, he cant even get into my crew...
ive heard of battlin less talent to boost ur record, but why newbs?...
L.I.?? that shit stands for Lyrically Incapable...
on some site tryna find a rhyme, while my shit is inescapable...
and nigga we may be the same age, but im years ahead'a u...
why do u think class sic picked me instead'a u...
u posted a half ass verse against me and got lucky...
i got DQ'ed before a vote could tell u how much u suck b...
ur terrible, shit, half the vets dont even know L.I....
u make no difference on this site bitch, u may ass well die...
no one wants u in their crew, and no one wanted to be in the one u made...
u were with UE for like a week, and had ur own for maybe two days...

i made that kinda personal, but their is no beef here

uppin for u L.I.

aahhh NICE SPIT MAN!!....aight im checked in......goodluck this is gonna be a great battle....no beef at all fasho....

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

Aight....

Listen up...

It's the rematch...

Shit why u complain bout round one, either way u woulda got the 'L'etter...
In our first battle my verse next to urs was like Toy story,'lightyears' better....
Hatin on me, sayin im wack, but cant let me go...u need me like a vitamin...
This two sided bitch goin from crackin on my rhymes to sayin Let him in!!...
Dissin an emcee thats bout to be accepted in your crew...
Then in just week, on their roster, ill be placed ahead of you...
Think he hot shit but he dont pursue true emcees...
Seems to me that all he wants to battle are newbies...
Just had to challenge me to get pay back and be reimbursed...
We battled last month, all that time u could only come up wit that verse?!?!...
Biggest freeposter alive thats why your post count towers...
Look how much he already posted and its only been open an hour!!...
Lost the first battle, and now this one is ur second chance...
Just like 'colorado', your record's gonna have an 'avalanche'...
So i hope i finished your ass off and dont challenge me again...
Instead off backstabbin me, decide if im a foe or friend...

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

Seein as how you two are both vets, I'll put some work into this. I'ma post my vote for it, and then when you vote on mine I'll poll it. (plus it will be good get'n vets to vote, they tend to be straight up)
http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=120615

so i battle L.I. the first time, shit, with my verse i had him...
tell he realized the rules, and goes and bitches to the admins...
-strong opener, I give it an 8

obviously records dont mean shit, he cant even get into my crew...
ive heard of battlin less talent to boost ur record, but why newbs?...
-a decent punch, I give this a 6

L.I.?? that shit stands for Lyrically Incapable...
on some site tryna find a rhyme, while my shit is inescapable...
- Fuck, I was laugh'n my ass off when I read the first line, I give that punch a 9

and nigga we may be the same age, but im years ahead'a u...
why do u think class sic picked me instead'a u...
-I like how you say'n somthin while battle'n - 7

u posted a half ass verse against me and got lucky...
i got DQ'ed before a vote could tell u how much u suck b...
- Like the previous, and I like the second line here I give it a 7

ur terrible, shit, half the vets dont even know L.I....
u make no difference on this site bitch, u may ass well die...
-I thought this one was weak, wasn't really feel'n it,-5

no one wants u in their crew, and no one wanted to be in the one u made...
u were with UE for like a week, and had ur own for maybe two days...
-This was a tight closer I give it a 9

Shit why u complain bout round one, either way u woulda got the 'L'etter...
In our first battle my verse next to urs was like Toy story,'lightyears' better....
-This is a pretty good opener I give it a 7

Hatin on me, sayin im wack, but cant let me go...u need me like a vitamin...
This two sided bitch goin from crackin on my rhymes to sayin Let him in!!...
- Maybe its just me but I wasn't realy feel'n the second line, here the first was good and I thought you could have really gone places with it, so I'm give this a 6

Dissin an emcee thats bout to be accepted in your crew...
Then in just week, on their roster, ill be placed ahead of you...
-With the first line, this is getting a little off topic, very personal, but you recovered with the second line. Nice punch. -7

Think he hot shit but he dont pursue true emcees...
Seems to me that all he wants to battle are newbies...
-I thought this was better that kunivas newbie punch- 7

Just had to challenge me to get pay back and be reimbursed...
We battled last month, all that time u could only come up wit that verse?!?!...
-This seemed to me like it was a bit of filler, or possibly too much leading, 6

Biggest freeposter alive thats why your post count towers...
Look how much he already posted and its only been open an hour!!...
-This was an dynamic punch-9 had me laugh'n 9

Lost the first battle, and now this one is ur second chance...
Just like 'colorado', your record's gonna have an 'avalanche'...
Not a bad punch Id give this a 7

So i hope i finished your ass off and dont challenge me again...
Instead off backstabbin me, decide if im a foe or friend...
-Again this is too personal, it seems to soft for battle'n, I give this a 7

TOTALS:
Kuniva-51
L.I-56

But L.I your verse was longer, so I actually ended up adding 7 (for your last two line) whereas Kuniva didn't have. If this were how it would go then by definition the person who had the most lines has the greatest likelyhood of winning. I thought Kuniva had better flow and multis, because of the use of those, I'm give'n him the win, but this was one of the closest battles I've seen. I'm sure your last one, had I had the pleasure of reading it, would have been the same.

Aight, check it. Very tight battle, both of you came with real personal verses. Neither of you had great structure, your lines were either right at the edge of good or too long.

Fav lines from Kuniva:

"and nigga we may be the same age, but im years ahead'a u...
why do u think class sic picked me instead'a u...
u posted a half ass verse against me and got lucky...
i got DQ'ed before a vote could tell u how much u suck b..."

Nice way to flip the loss, cuz it was a DQ. However, you maybe should have stuck that second bar after your opener, it would have made more sense there. Anyway, very nice verse, though you had some problems with wording, and you wasted what could have been a nice punch (LI = lyrically incapable) because you jsut stuck it in there randomly with no setup line or anything.

LI: Yeah.. had some structure problems early on there, way too long on those lines. The vitamin, let him in line was nice.. but you could have easily made that shorter and it would have been nicer.

Best lines:

"
Dissin an emcee thats bout to be accepted in your crew...
Then in just week, on their roster, ill be placed ahead of you...
Think he hot shit but he dont pursue true emcees...
Seems to me that all he wants to battle are newbies..."

Very, very nice.. especially the second punch there (LMAO kunvia.. challenging newbs.. come on).

So, very tight.. but I gotta go with Kunvia by just a bit because he had more consitency... like that "freeposter" stuff was just whack.. who cares. LI, if you had closed with those bars I quoted above, in reverse order, and added another decent punch to your verse, I think you would have had it.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

Forgot to say.. hit some of my battles up.. you know..

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

ahh well explained votes......very nice battle i agree......good lookin on the 500 post thing kuniva.....we will have explained votes that aren't d/r's.......uppin........

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

yeah thanks, and ill hit up ur battles guys, just gotta do some shit first, but ill def. hit them up by tom.