10-15 lines
check in 1st.

hey you wanna go first? chckin in or whatever. ... ?

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Shady wannabe here's 14 years old
He cant get no pussy and so he's been told
everytime he sees a cunt and he trys to get hold
he gets denied and left out in the cold
heres some game you can permanently borrow
use it in 5 years when your dicks finished its growth
"gimme some pussy" only 50 percent will say no
Oh no, you listen to 50 cent... your both homos
here's a secret for you, a peice of info
your mother is a cocksucking nasty ass hoe, so
Remember tonight, when your mum turns out the lights
tucking you in cum drippin from her lips gonna kiss you goodnight
That was me, alright?

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You call urself ozzy,like you a magican,well I be happy if u dissapear/
Nigga,you couldn't get booked if you were reading William Shakespeare/
Yeah,your'e older than me,yet you got no pubic hair,and chill in daycare/
Nigga,you just the average queer with dreams of becoming a millionaire/
Are you trying to be Chris Jerchico's fozzy,the band with a wrester in it?/
Only thing you know bout wrestling is ur mom,if I was u,it's suicide I'dcommit/
Anybody fuck with me...............and they end up redder than a maxi pad/
Which to u isn't too bad,cause you got more periods than an Suess story
Sorry to end ur morning glory..........but you gonna lose today ozzzy/
No way I'm losing to RB's head nurse,but he gonna come back reimbursed/
Casue he a diverse,instead of gettin better,he keeps gettin worse/

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okay...

opener-shady...even tho it was type corny
structure-shady..oz ya lines got long then short fukked up ya flow
punchlines-shady
creativity-shady
wordplay-nun
multis-nun
personals-nun
enjoyed-shady....he took dis shit real easy...oz step ya rap game up dunny

my vote-shady.........return dat favor i gota few opeen battles on da frontlines

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U NOT FUKKiN WiTH ME PLaiN N SiMP!...

Da "SiCKEST ON DiS SiTE" LiNE HaS BEEN USED aGaiNST ME 50 x'S...U DUDES aBUSED iT

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Shady wannabe here's 14 years old
He cant get no pussy and so he's been told
weak punch...4/10
everytime he sees a cunt and he trys to get hold
he gets denied and left out in the cold
No punch...2/10
heres some game you can permanently borrow
use it in 5 years when your dicks finished its growth
Not feelin it....3/10
"gimme some pussy" only 50 percent will say no
Oh no, you listen to 50 cent... your both homos
Weak punch....3/10
here's a secret for you, a peice of info
your mother is a cocksucking nasty ass hoe, so
wtf?!....0/10
Remember tonight, when your mum turns out the lights
tucking you in cum drippin from her lips gonna kiss you goodnight
haha thats disgusting and weak....2/10

Verse Score : 11/60

Aight just go to tutorials and learn punches and wordplay....use personals and meta's....ELEVATE...

You call urself ozzy,like you a magican,well I be happy if u dissapear/
Nigga,you couldn't get booked if you were reading William Shakespeare/
Its ok....5/10
Yeah,your'e older than me,yet you got no pubic hair,and chill in daycare/
Nigga,you just the average queer with dreams of becoming a millionaire/
Not that great of a punch...3/10
Are you trying to be Chris Jerchico's fozzy,the band with a wrester in it?/
Only thing you know bout wrestling is ur mom,if I was u,it's suicide I'dcommit/
Needs better word play and better punch....2/10
Anybody fuck with me...............and they end up redder than a maxi pad/
Which to u isn't too bad,cause you got more periods than an Suess story
lol a lil better....5/10
Sorry to end ur morning glory..........but you gonna lose today ozzzy/
No way I'm losing to RB's head nurse,but he gonna come back reimbursed/
Casue he a diverse,instead of gettin better,he keeps gettin worse/
na....3/10

Verse Score - 18/50

Aight still need to elevate....but werk on wordplay and using personals....get sum more meta's in there.....keep elevatin.....

Vote - shady

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That Old School Mother Fucker

Aint That A Bitch?

Crhyme Sindicate

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