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03-23-04, 09:41 PM
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Plague of the Poison Hearted
IP: 06D4 9403
Damnation brought to these lands
Held above in bloody hands Though you decide not to speak We know your thoughts of Him A rose pedal seat, Only mentally he is throned But He is blind to your eyes Keeps you in belief with pages wrapped in disguise Our minds unleashed, bodys to feast Your ignorance has baited the beast Demons roam in our black lives Destruction led by mercyless bands He won't save you, Abandoned by your god The river recently tinted blood red Filled to the brim by My Army I fight against the name, I kill ruthlessly because of Him I lead you all to the Gates of Righteousness Demons under my wing, Beasts weilding my weapons Holy lands burnt because of my exile Angelic blood spread to show warning of true power Now follow, and Now you must. Without touching a soul, or creating a life departed I leave your land in ruins, spreading the Plague of the Poison Hearted.
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do your research.  Last edited by Liquor of Tears : 03-23-04 at 09:44 PM. Reason: typo |
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03-23-04, 10:07 PM
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....Trunks R 4 Bodies....
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IP: C1DA C961
another hot poem dog!
your multi talented with rhymes! |
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03-24-04, 03:02 PM
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yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
thanks... more feedback?
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do your research. |
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03-24-04, 06:06 PM
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Ask About Me
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
that was hella coo..see that is how i need to write my poems...
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my MYSPACE is Better than Yours |
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03-24-04, 09:57 PM
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yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
hah thanks. If you people dont understand a meaning, but can tell who is speaking. I put this in the eyes Lucifer when he was trying to get back at god for being exiled. But i wrote it as a way to show that even the most 'divine' reature critisizes because of someones opinion.
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do your research. |
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03-26-04, 09:00 AM
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yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
feedback?
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do your research. |
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03-29-04, 09:58 PM
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yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
uppin
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do your research. |
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04-06-04, 05:34 PM
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yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
-cough-
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do your research. |
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04-07-04, 09:08 PM
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yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
-cough again..- sorry, something in my throat.
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do your research. |
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04-09-04, 10:27 AM
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New to RB
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IP: 9EA9 3EDF
Yes, yes, this was straight indeed!!! Your ish be deep, you're flowing on another level
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04-14-04, 10:52 PM
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yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
thanks... uppin
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do your research. |
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04-15-04, 11:58 AM
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Guarenteed a positivie
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IP: E3CA 7CA2
damn nice i wish i could write shite like that straight ill wana see more
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04-15-04, 12:59 PM
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yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
check my other s that are in my siggy.
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do your research. |
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04-15-04, 01:01 PM
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Miss Me?
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IP: D5EA 4189
wow that shit was hot....
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That Old School Mother Fucker  Aint That A Bitch? Crhyme Sindicate
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04-15-04, 01:04 PM
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yawn
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IP: 06D4 9403
thanks.
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do your research. |
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