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5 bars
i spit 1st
you spit within 30mins after me


goodluck

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check in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! fuck it i'll go first sense u said i gotta spit 30 minutes after you and i might not be on when u get on so imma go first.

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ay0

when i spit on da mic u should know i'll devour//
my lyrical skills is 100% real while yours barely holdin power//----1
u "sour" like "lemons" and "dry kool-aid"//
in this battle ur sure ta "Fail" like "pop quiz" on school-days//---2
and dont talk about guns when i know u dont clap-the-heataz//
i'll put convicts on ya ass dat'll blast and bust u like speakers//----3
all my rhymes is "heavy" like a "500lb Woman"//
and ur the little man,who gets scared and start runnin//---4
but i aint even gotta spit foreal,its nuffin son..FUCK YOU!//
cuz if u was an "emcee spirit" that'll be the only way i "cant touch you"//---5

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raps are vacant, wana talk? ur avy look like mass-debation.....
hold ya tone/
monotic fondlement will get ya bundle bent, & like his sig's sayin....
he "hold's his own"/

rappers-delight??, maybe if this pupil" wasn't so bad-for-the-sight/
u at-it-all-night, ....but cant go backwards faster than travelling-light/ (bak in time)
pro's keep cool w/no-editing; like faggit glasses, u homo-speci-men/
texts-have-been in the bag, ur duller then grandma with no-medicine/
so pathetic-in-verse, reason y ur green's fake like astro tennising-turf/
ur poor! & settin-it-worse, even God wants you dead

"-meek shall inherit-the-earth"/

i take sips-of-the-ocean, flow with a-salt, (assault).....the distance-is-closing/
spits-of-mitosis, leave CREAM sea-split like im set on missions-by-Moses/

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Uppin
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come on

hey, I will hit this battle up if you hit up my battle first, I would do it first but no one ever returns the fav, so hit my battle up wit AKA and I will hit this up.. thx

http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=118510

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TAKE MY ADVICE FROM PEOPLE FROM CANADA nd FUCK YA LYFE

upin

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upin diz muhfucka!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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Hench gets this for made creative rhymes and punches, even though the structure could use a bit of work. My fav bar was:

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so pathetic-in-verse, reason y ur green's fake like astro tennising-turf/
ur poor! & settin-it-worse, even God wants you dead

"-meek shall inherit-the-earth"/"

nice, very nice. The close was almost as nice too... very creative, original and still hard hitting. CREAM, your verse wasn't bad, just not as creative with the punches, and some punches kinda missed: "all my rhymes is "heavy" like a "500lb Woman"//"... that's a really bad meta. Gotta elevate a bit there I think...

Honest votes on my battles v ecko.. just one more vote needed.

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RIP SMOKAJOKA WE WILL MiSS YOU!!!!!!

upin

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Alright this was a pretty good battle.........

Cream came ok just wasn't as hard as I was expectin......... He had some ok punches but he seemed to be patting himself on the back more than rippin his opponent. He~MAN came pretty fuckin hard. He had some pretty deep shit wit his punches and that's why they stuck. Some might not have understood them but they were HOT!!!!!!! That's why I gotta give this one to him.

Vote - Henchman

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